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Food and grass, add it first, comment later

Food and grass, add it first, comment later

Food and grass, add it first, comment later

The recent change in the style of these two chapters has really offended me, so much so that I, who rarely join novels as a fan, felt a little bit unhappy. Can you please stop worrying about your broken physique? Isn't the plot of being caught by a demon cultivator begging for mercy very interesting? Can't you just keep having fun along the way? Everyone can see that the protagonist's physique will benefit from this corpse refining, and then fight back. But this plot of being caught is really poisonous. I could tolerate the previous small poisonous points, but this time I really can't bear it. You said that you have been laying the groundwork for so long, how much preparation you have done to write the protagonist, how many spiritual stones you have spent, 20,000 spiritual stones! ! ! How many fire bullet talismans and talisman treasures can kill the foundation-building monks? Confidently let the supporting characters go first and stay behind. Let's not talk about counter-attack. Escape can always be done, right? ! Then, he was caught by the foundation-building monk! Got it! ! ! Then the protagonist begged for mercy very spinelessly, and even revealed his talent for making talismans and would rather work as a tool just to survive. Did you think the plot was unexpected? Very fun?

To be honest, I'm completely confused about the plot right now. Why does the mountain god suddenly have the power, why does the ghost uncle suddenly appear, and why does a villain suddenly appear? The plot is too fast and too violent, and the author doesn't even sort it out. Even though the flaws are not hidden, there is still food and grass available. It's like a small world, using games to change the world, but in a weird way.

Hay+ Each of the original small dungeons of Kuai Chuan Liu starts with the protagonist in a vegetative state, and is currently gaining the power to awaken through the game. To be honest, the story of the dungeon of Dynasty and the story of winning the hearts of the army seems really awkward. It's best to blur this aspect, otherwise it will look too dramatic.

Grain + At first I thought it was a brainless historical article about special forces from more than ten years ago. Unexpectedly, the author's writing power and plot quickly surprised me. I haven't read this type of historical article for a long time... Traveling back in time to the early Ming Dynasty, I met Zhu Yuanzhang, and he was still carrying modern weapons. At present, it seems that he is planning to use modern knowledge to play against Zhu Yuanzhang. In the part of the Fourteenth Princess, there is no greasy and boring drama, but the character is well written.

Comment No. 6.24: I wrote a World of Warcraft battlefront for FGO. To be honest, I'm tired of seeing the moon-related stuff, and so is Inuyasha. Let's wait for the new copy. Original review below: It's rare to see someone write about Nioh 2. Aren't they all Sekiro wizards and stuff these days? This book is well written. I feel like the first female protagonist is A Xiu? I don't know how long it will take to write this dungeon for Nioh 2. It's not directly proportional to the clearance time of the previous two dungeons... I'm familiar with Setsuna's brilliant new book. This book seems to be a comprehensive comic. The protagonist has similar digital abilities and can travel to different worlds anytime and anywhere (?). I don't know the original plot, which is quite criticized, but it seems to be okay so far. The first small copy is Halberd-Eating Spirit, and the second is Spell Return. How are these two related? The power system doesn't match up well. I'm not very interested in Gensokyo. I stopped reading when I saw it. I'll go read some old books when I have time.

Hay+ You can share other people's systems. The first one is simulation, and the second one is swordsmanship. The plot can only be said to be quite satisfactory. There is only one highlight in Gu Tianhuang's simulation. However, there are actually many books about this kind of NPC detached plot. The background is apocalyptic. I thought it was a zombie stream at first, but I didn't expect it was the recent revival of spiritual energy. To be honest, I'm a bit tired of this aspect. Current progress: Chapter 53

Comprehensive comic, the first world of Conan, to be honest, it was quite interesting at the beginning, but since Belmos was arrested, Conan's part has obviously become a bit watered down... Grain and grass An original world where the main world looks like a big sword? The world behind is a sea of ​​​​death and fire. To be honest, I am tired of seeing it and have no interest in it. It is just an academy city and I still have a sense of expectation.

Seeing now, I feel that it has nothing to do with the family, and it is very slow. Not suitable for readers who like fast pace Late Qing Dynasty novel, the protagonist has one soul and two bodies? One is a fox fairy in the late Qing Dynasty, and the other is a modern old man. I originally thought that I would use modern knowledge, but I didn't expect that future generations would use it to praise me. At present, the protagonist is using the fox fairy to help his past self and benefit his current self. The one-soul and two-body novel that impressed me the most was Extraordinary Twins, which opened up a new model of transformation novels. However, this novel is about one person and one beast, not one man and one woman, so the subject matter is quite novel. The writing is very detailed and of high quality. It continues the style of the previous book, but lacks the poisonous points (how to say the previous book... It is tasteless, and it is a pity to discard it.). I hope that the protagonist will not be too entangled in the problem of reading, and will not rebel if he wears it clean. Do you know how to use a set of electric drills? Grain and grass

DC Superman, good quality, common villain protagonists The plot does not follow the main line of DC, but chooses Smallville, but the writing is very friendly to people like me who have never seen the prequels. At least the interpersonal relationships are explained clearly. At present, it seems to follow the route of the motherland, but there is a certain bottom line, and a little Batman plot is added by the way. Grain and grass

All astronomy, no memory of the original body I can't tell what the first dungeon is yet, mainly because the setting is quite new. I don't have the memory of the original body and I don't know what the mission is. I am [wandering] in the world of the heavens. 4.20 New comments I said that the author's writing style seemed familiar to me. It turns out that I have also read the previous book. This one continues the "excellent features" of the previous book, but I don't know if it will have as many negative plots as the previous one. I'm not sure if it's Zhu Tianwen, it looks like I stayed in the same world until the end. The so-called mission of the main god is just the protagonist's misconception. I can't tell what the main plot is yet. Tentative Hay+

Wear it clean and don't rebel, ××set of electric drill In this early stage, there should be no rebellion. Is it possible to break through from within? To be honest, if it weren't for the very interesting writing, which made the whole room burst into laughter, I might not even be able to watch it... The protagonist traveled through time and became a descendant of the Eight Banners of the Han Dynasty. He has no golden fingers (does modern knowledge count as golden fingers?). He originally wanted to be an official, but unexpectedly he went to the front line. Now he has met He Kun. I don't know what will happen next. Grain and grass

The subject matter has been used a few years ago, the type where the wife from the previous life comes to visit. The author is considered an old acquaintance. The writing style is not bad. At least I enjoyed reading it. Urban writing, I originally thought it would be a fairy tale background with White Snake and so on, but I didn't expect to create a modern city for me. Now I'm worried that the author's power system will collapse, or write a lot of battle plots that have nothing to do with repaying a favor. Tentative Hay+

It's a light-hearted Western fantasy novel with a pleasant style. It has a fixed golden finger panel (it's really written like a Japanese light novel). The protagonist's starting point is quite high, and he can be regarded as a pseudo-invincible. Although he is tolerant, it is only because of his age. This may be criticized due to the age of children, but the other aspects currently look good, a bit like the fantasy of the past. Currently, are there multiple female protagonists? But now there is only a maid accompanying the protagonist... Progress 53

The author is old and has written a new book, a tomb-robbery one... He was jailed at the beginning. The tomb-robbery novel he copied happened to collide with a real case in this world. I don't know if it is a fan of a tomb-robbery novel, or is it original? 2.24 Comments: I tend to write about tomb robbing like a notebook, incorporating currently popular elements, such as time travel, and panels with a weak sense of presence. Nowadays, it mainly describes the urban part. There are not many details about tomb robbing. The part of using popularity to win prizes is a routine, but because it is not too descriptive, there is not too much ill feeling. At present, it seems that the main plot is the protagonist + the little brother. I think the undercover agent will be exposed very later according to the way the author writes it. The meaning of this part of Maomao is a bit unclear. Is it simply to force the protagonist to go to the grave? I thought I was going to write an ambiguous part about the female assistant, but I mentioned it and said it didn't matter... Emmm, maybe there really is no female protagonist... The update is just too slow...

In Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio, the protagonist travels through time and becomes a fox and begins to cultivate immortality. The Golden Finger Wishing Tree, about forming relationships with people with good fortunes to gain rewards, can be considered the best-quality Chinese Liaozhai novel in recent times. I thought it was about exotic beasts or something, but I didn't expect it to be a fox setting. The main description is still biased toward orthodox human cultivation of immortality (Liao Zhai-style cultivation of immortality, not Qi training and foundation building, which is a good point) The current reading experience is good, and the food is tentatively decided. Chapter 76, updated on the 3.23Rd, continues to comment: The latest Xiang Jun has a tendency to have a female protagonist. Writing about Liaozhai without a female protagonist is like going through the Qing Dynasty but not rebelling. I really hope that there will be a female protagonist. After all, it is really difficult to write highlights in Liaozhai without a female protagonist. At present, the next enemy is the tiger. The plot is quite gradual, and the descriptions of each character are also quite good. I can see that there are no poisonous points so far, and the protagonist has a rare and very upright outlook. It is like a fairy tale. Determined as grain+

Consciousness descends into the stream and pinches people on its own. Can you place your own clone in an alien plane? (Called Apostle in the book), if a certain indicator is passed, part of the strength can be fed back to the main body. I originally thought it was Zhutianliu, but I didn't expect it to be an original copy. The idea of ​​leaving a mark on the clone is quite novel. It can connect the identity with the previous clone. This is the first time I have seen this routine... Needless to say, the first copy of the Alien Hunter looks similar to the Monster Hunter, but it can be evolved through potions. I have one thing to say, if the follower is not made into a female, it is completely inconsistent with the image of the player. I hope that the next follower will keep up the good work.

It is rare to see an article about the fourth natural disaster in the wasteland. There are very few articles about the wasteland alone. Adding the fourth natural disaster to the wasteland is probably the only starting point. It seems that it is two hundred years after the nuclear war? Inviting players through QQ groups instead of some black technology is really refreshing when you see it. It is a system-less story, and it has gained a refuge, and can bring players in through cloning. To be honest, when I read it, I thought it was another old-fashioned creation of God, but I didn't expect it to be really hardcore. Liang Cao Wen, this author is also an old acquaintance, I'm even happier