Mortal Rebirth Li Feiyu

After all, this is a fanfic, but the first 30 chapters are too long-winded. The poisonous spot in the middle sells talismans for tens of thousands of spiritual stones and has Qi training level 5. He should have been targeted a long time ago.

I would like to give you a suggestion to the author. After reading the previous chapters, to be honest, it is a bit verbose. It does not refer to the content, but to over-emphasis on every point of your content. This is not good. It is like reading an article. It feels that the author is a bit older.

I hope this is OK for the author. Come on come on

Even you are too slow. You have written more than twenty chapters before you can become an immortal. After reading it, I wanted to give up the book. It is okay for the author to be slow, but not too slow. There are too many things left to think about, but I don't want to write them anymore.

Fuck... You went to Mo Mansion to have sex... It has nothing to do with you...

I've read so many mortal fanfics, and yours is the most to my liking. It's very good.

Compared to other mortal fan novels, it's pretty good

It's really good, very promising, but there are too few eggs.

It's worth watching, but it's a bit sparse. I finished it in one go.

I have a serious illness. I really don't know why I went to Mo Mansion. I started to have clues even before I became an immortal. If something happens, I will be the first to find my home.