Trial Reading Notes

I am currently reading Chapter 42, a theme that combines strange invasion + spiritual energy recovery. After the strange events, talented people among humans began to use spiritual energy to practice, but they were also subject to various restrictions. Minor spoilers below In order to cure his "obsessed" parents who fell into a deep sleep, the protagonist boldly and carefully survived an expedition by the gray forces. He also obtained a mutilated treasure that could help him embark on the path of spiritual practice, and he was misunderstood by others as a genius. With the help of the treasure, the protagonist stood out among the temporary assistants recruited by the boss Yang Yilong, received a large amount of reward to improve his parents' rest environment, and was invited to join his team to kill the ferocious beasts. During this period, Yang Yilong underestimated the danger of the ferocious beast, which led to an accident in the operation, and the employees on guard at the perimeter had to disperse to escape. The dangerous situations encountered during the period, the ferocity of the alien beasts, the weirdness of the dangerous zone, and the tenacity and intelligence of the protagonist are all well portrayed. Of course, his occasional off-line is also hilarious. The portrayals of different characters are also very vivid, including Brother Tao, who briefly appeared to lead the protagonist on guard at the edge but was unfortunately killed in a dangerous zone. When he enthusiastically introduced some knowledge that the protagonist should know about spiritual practice, he said, "We are like masters with deep internal strength but no martial arts." It was impressive. Enough about the advantages, enough about the advantages. I don't know if the author's outline has been revised, but generally speaking, if you create a character that looks reliable for a boss, readers will often expect "Is this our NPC?" For such characters, there are often several ways to deal with such characters in my impression: Yan Nantian, our reliable hero, he has lived up to the character established since his debut. Xiang Wentian is the reliable eldest brother of the opposing camp. He lives up to his character but is ultimately hostile to the protagonist. Yue Buqun, you trusted him so much, but he betrayed you. Jiang Biehe, he was very nice but you always felt suspicious. In the end, he really lived up to your suspicion that he was the mastermind behind this. The author's portrayal of Yang Yilong in "After Heaven" made me feel rather fragmented. The previous article foreshadows that he is loyal, generous, and trustworthy, and strives to create a "leading brother persona" for himself. When he discovers that the protagonist has an adventure in a dangerous zone, Yang Yilong instructs his butler to "privately" remind the protagonist that he has discovered that he has learned "martial arts." I wonder if this is a release of goodwill? After the protagonist analyzed that the butler's "reminder" came from Yang Yilong himself, he immediately felt that it would be detrimental to him if his boxing skills were taken into account by the boss. No, author, you didn't foreshadow the protagonist, so you feel that Yang Yilong's character is a bit fake? Am I the Red King? Then Yang Yilong actually controlled the elevator and took him to the underground base for "detailed discussions." Why? So the protagonist recorded Yang Yilong in his little notebook. This time he didn't charge money but taught half to hide and half to bury. But Yang Yilong didn't care about himself, so he let him go! ... Lose-lose? ? No, the author is big D. What is the positioning of Yang Yilong's character? Is the NPC still a monster? The enemy's loyal brother is still a counter-loyalty. Can we have an accurate estimate? Reading experience: ★★7.12 Editor, not only did the review of this paragraph also say that there are some poisonous points at the end, I read the next paragraph and it turned out to be =. =

The work recommended by book friends in the comment section is a decent traditional fantasy. The protagonist was formerly a religious figure who participated in the Anti-Japanese War and sacrificed his life to protect cultural relics and classics. This setting originally made people look forward to how the Taoist priest would show off his talents in a world where he could really practice magical skills, which was a relief. But as the plot unfolds, I really don't see what purpose this setting has besides explaining the origin of the Golden Finger Hunyuan Dan Furnace. Now that I have read Chapter 5, the novel does not reflect the Taoist priest's bloody nature, nor does it reflect the Taoist priest's integrity, nor does it reflect the Taoist priest's character that he has honed over the years of participating in the Anti-Japanese War, nor does it reflect whether the Taoist priest is thoughtful and steady. In short, the protagonist is a pretty decent traditional fantasy protagonist. You will have no problem reading it regardless of his past life experiences. No, if you treat the protagonist as an ordinary time traveler, the plot of the story will progress more smoothly=. = Let's not talk about anything else, let's talk about the opening chapter where the Taoist priest punches to death the bastard fellow disciple who beat his predecessor to death with a sap for a few bottles of pills. I have something to say, Taoist Priest, I am not saying that it is wrong for you to punch the villain to death. There is nothing wrong with you in terms of avenging your predecessor or punishing the bully and the murderer, but what kind of person are you? Patriots serving the country! Who is he? Back in Shanghai, he wasn't even a green-skinned gangster, he was just a bastard, and you punched him to death, you really shamed him! =. = Reading experience: If you put aside the protagonist's past life experience ★★★, it's a decent traditional fantasy, if you can't ignore it ★☆☆, if the author hadn't told me so, I really wouldn't have seen that the protagonist's past life was not only a Taoist priest, but also a benevolent person who devoted himself to the Anti-Japanese War.

In the national survival game, the protagonist knows in advance what "exploration points" he will encounter on the way up or down the elevator. It feels a bit like flying chess. The language is concise and the plot is clear. However, the opening part is a bit too simple. The resource points are the protagonist's manual logging or mining. After completion, the collected resources will be turned into usable wood units or stone units just like playing the game; monster points are to kill deer and rabbits. After using the gathering command, the prey will automatically turn into food units and furs... With all due respect, in the plot where the protagonist brother collects and fights, the author Big D did not clearly reflect the difference between real games and the games we play on electronic devices. For example, there is no description of the protagonist brother getting blood blisters on his hands when cutting wood, and after successfully hunting a deer, he found that he was breathing like a bellows. It felt like he was playing a holographic game without a stamina bar, or at least the stamina bar had little impact. In addition, in this "survival game", people in the same area can also communicate with each other through chat channels. Unfortunately, the communication between people in the work does not make me feel any difference compared to the chat on the main city map of the wow game. This is more like a large-scale national online virtual game that players all know is not real. Reading progress: 12.17. After reading Chapter 8, the protagonist chose a "dungeon floor". If he wanted to pass, he had to kill a goblin gathering (about twenty goblins) and a goblin leader. Again, with all due respect, I didn't feel any significant difference from the fully immersive online game novels I read before where the protagonist challenged the monsters in the game, including being so nervous that my palms became sweaty, my heart pounding, heart palpitations after cutting a humanoid creature, or feeling unexpectedly and unexpectedly, etc. Contents that make people feel that it is a reality rather than a virtual game are either absent or only mentioned in a few strokes. Maybe it's just a misunderstanding caused by my careless reading, or maybe it's just that the protagonist has a big and tough heart. Reading experience: ★★☆

Say nothing, just two words! It's called "Jianghu"! ! It's called "Lao Lao Lao"! ! If the book has nine grades, as long as the subsequent plot does not stretch the crotch, this book will be the first grade! ! Reading progress: 10.5, Chapter 8. I haven't seen such exquisite + concise work in a long time! ! ! Reading experience: ★★★★★

Dan Da's new work. The protagonist is a second-rate guy with all kinds of crazy OS, which is very funny. The horror of the copy, the warmth of father's love, the bravery and carefulness of the protagonist's brother, the craziness of disco dancing with a few passerby ghosts and the friendship of chance encounters, the inexplicable favor of the ghost bride, and her help without asking for anything in return, most of them are written in a very interesting way. However, the protagonist is really too stupid. I personally feel that Danda may have wanted to write about the protagonist's cynical/enjoyment in hardship. In addition, as mentioned in the introduction, this is a relaxing story about the protagonist opening a plug-in called "Dad". ... But he's really too stupid, and his crazy OS is, what can I say, a bit, noisy? It's a comparison. There's a table full of good dishes, but I didn't even take two bites of each dish before chewing ginger shreds... Book friends who like "ginger shreds" can try it, you won't be disappointed👌 But I'm a reader who doesn't like "ginger shreds"..._(:З」∠)_ Reading progress: 10.3, Chapter 12, not bad but not my cup of tea Reading experience: ★★★☆

The writing is very good. After reading only a few pages, the eerie and thrilling atmosphere came to life on the page. The first chapter ends with a few sentences, showing the elegance of a Taoist who wields a sword (or magic or talisman) and laughs proudly at the demons. After the Taoist Master returned to Blackwater Town, the madness of the world, the madness of the monks, the cruelty and nakedness of the weak and the strong were not described in detail, but the perseverance and perseverance in pursuing the Tao were revealed everywhere, although this perseverance and perseverance were also crazy. Madness is about seeking the truth, chasing a little star of hope in the darkness, not madness itself is the theme. The characters are vividly created, and a few strokes (that word again) bring out the sense of the picture, making some slightly clichéd passages read smoothly and vividly. The Taoist priest is still very weak now, and he shows himself to be even more weak. On the one hand, he keeps secretly developing, and on the other hand, it is natural for him to encounter bullying and other things. Some of the plots in this part of the plot are a bit cliché, but they are not cliché in the author's writing. Reading progress: 9.30, I have read Chapter 48, and I am very interested in continuing reading. Reading impression: ★★★★