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"Steel Gunpowder and the Spellcaster" is a Western war story with magical elements. It is of outstanding quality in the field of online literature and is highly recommended to try. Highlights: High-level combat and war descriptions, and rigorous and self-contained magic settings. Few authors can harmoniously combine the above two points into one book. This book can be said to have basically achieved it. In addition, the careful character creation, local customs, and political situation are all bonus points of this book. Poisonous points: For me personally, first of all, the plot arrangement in the book is more script-oriented, which gives people the feeling that the author needs such a result, so the participating forces, organizations and individual characters try their best to cooperate; Secondly, at the end of the second volume, the protagonist's choice of the two sides is somewhat deducted: if you really want to protect your subordinates, then resolutely refuse the task of breaking the line, and if you plan to obey the order, then you should accept the consequences that may be incurred. As a grassroots officer who has a professional background and has participated in many wars, it is impossible not to know the nature of the task of breaking the line, right? After first resisting the order and refusing to break the rear, the superiors did not dare to force the dissatisfied team to break the rear. After all, the rear team could not retreat if they could not withstand the main force. The superior changed the rear to another team and criticized the protagonist at the same time. The protagonist got a stick in his neck and changed his mind to accept the rear break mission. During the execution of the task, he found that the main force had abandoned the protagonist. Jade couldn't accept it anymore, so he turned back to retaliate... Refusing orders can protect the lives of his men, and obeying orders is to uphold military professional ethics and honor. No matter which option you choose, you can be called a man, but choosing to repeatedly jump horizontally really lowers the image of the protagonist, which makes him somewhat unplayable; Thirdly, the heroine's feelings for the hero are somewhat unexpected and have a strong imperial connotation; The last and most important point: the author updates Lacrosse.

From the setting point of view, the book contains a large-scale era environment with a strong steampunk atmosphere, a complete and interesting extraordinary power system that is consistent with the background and a self-contained system, and a well-planned and mysterious historical background; from a plot development point of view, the author should have prepared a relatively complete outline. Whether it is the main line running through the entire volume or a branch line with only a few chapters, the rhythm development is quite reasonable. There are neither long-term transitional chapters that consume the reader's enthusiasm nor an overly intensive climax that makes people nervous. It can be said to be quite organized and of good quality. 1. From the perspective of character creation, the author did not choose a writing method where the protagonist takes over all aspects of the book. Instead, he detached many functions and assigned them to supporting characters. It can be said that the supporting characters in this book have a lot of room to play, and the author's writing level is sufficient to shoulder the task of character creation; from the perspective of writing techniques It is said that the author is good at laying foreshadowing, and the details that are highlighted or written are often full of profound meaning, and there are rarely sudden or temporary insertions, which greatly reduces the impact of accidental or accidental factors on the main plot, and significantly improves the rigor and rationality of plot development. Reason for giving up: 1. The author likes to arrange for the protagonist to participate in major events that are far beyond his current ability. The protagonist in the book solved almost tenth-level tasks at the first level, confronted the evil god and successfully recruited people. As soon as he was promoted to the second level, he directly solved the evil god's coming incident that even the Orthodox Church could not handle, and saved one of the two largest cities on the mainland. What's worse is that in order to provide a stage for the protagonists to perform, the top official power such as the Zhengshen Church is full of scandals. The cultists can arrange subordinates of up to level 7-8 to repeatedly cause trouble in the capital of the country where the Zhengshen Church is closely guarded. The first time can be said to be an accident, and the second time is serious. Even though the Church of God learned about the plans of some cultists and arranged for the highest-level combat power to take advantage of them, they were still manipulated by the cultists. The most outrageous thing is that the two incidents occurred less than a month apart. It can be said that the official forces were shameless in order to provide the protagonist with a stage. 2. The protagonist is increasingly inclined to wallow in women and has a bit of a double standard. The two female characters in the protagonist's team have more and more roles, and their development progress with the protagonist is much better than that of the male characters who appeared first. The characters that have been created with greater effort are almost all female except for the two men in the team... The protagonist's current identity is a non-staff student of the Extraordinary Academy. When he encountered a life crisis caused by the arrival of the evil god, he met the founder of the academy. After the protagonist called the teacher to save me, the founder imparted knowledge related to gods to help the protagonist pass the test. In return, the protagonist had to complete the task of collecting gods' information arranged by the founder. After getting out of the crisis, the protagonist considered the risk of revealing his secrets and decided to hide the experience of meeting the founder of the academy from the academy, and relied only on his connections/resources as a second-level novice to collect god-level information... The protagonist needs help from the founder: Teacher, save me! The founder needs help from the protagonist: I'm sorry, I can't tell the academy, even though you created the academy and gave me a lot of help What's even more amazing is that as soon as he turns around, the protagonist confesses this series of information to the girl next to him who has kissed him... The protagonist is very wary of the official forces that have been very upright up to now, but he has an inexplicable trust in the women around him, especially those who have been sidelined.

"The elixir gives you poison and it belongs to me", a mash-up of ancient martial arts + supernatural powers, written by the same author as "I Have 48 Hours in a Day", has been completed. Highlights: The theme of ancient martial arts + superpowers has a certain appeal. The golden fingers set by the author are also novel and interesting. The author's light and humorous writing style can make readers smile from time to time. The overall reading experience is quite smooth and comfortable. The author focuses more on plot characters than on upgrading and becoming stronger. The author does have a certain level of planning for short-term plots. It is recommended that readers who are not interested in mainstream upgrade stories can try this author's book. Poisonous point: After talking about the advantages, it's time to start complaining. The author's level of long-term plot planning is far less than that of short-term plots. The last book was an infinite flow of unit dramas, which can cover up this problem to a certain extent, but even a longer copy of infinite flow will still cause controversy. In this book, the talisman of unlimited flow of unit dramas is no longer available, and the author is long-term. The problem of the crotch is exposed vividly. As the plot progresses, the content becomes more and more complicated. In the past, the author of unlimited streaming was a new world and could temporarily put aside the problems and travel lightly. Now, due to the continuous accumulation of various problems in a single world, the author is increasingly unable to cope with it. Basically, the low information density is combined with the rhythm of 4,000 words of explanation every day to make ends meet. As the protagonist enters the academy, the mystery of the setting is gradually revealed, and the appeal of the main content continues to decline. The aliens and native dragons involved in the ending even have a hint of absurd drama... In addition to the main plot, the protagonist's emotional drama is also messy and complicated, full of abruptness and dissonance. In the previous book, the heroine of the dungeon was constantly changed. Even if it was not written well, it was not a big problem. Some of the dungeons even gave amazing performances. However, in this book, the author's instability in the emotional drama was completely exposed. The characters of several main female characters are classics in online novels. In other words, they are cliché...

"The Battle of the Invincible Heroes", word count 550,000+, Eunuch. An online game article about the development direction of lords with the background of Invincible Heroes. The setting of Invincible Heroes is quite rare now, and online gaming articles that purely play games are gradually declining. With the two major factors that are frustrating, coupled with the addition of a novice author, the book has been discontinued as expected. Highlights: The relatively scarce subject matter is the highlight according to the taste; in addition, the author also has some ideas about the setting and use of golden fingers; the author knows that as a novice, he does not have the ability to control multi-line plots, so he directly cuts off all content except the game through the settings at the beginning. This makes the core content of the book extremely prominent and concentrated, which has to be said to be a very wise arrangement. Poisonous points: the novice author's rough detailed settings, the plot arrangement that comes to mind, the unstable inspiration and capricious content modifications... Of course, the most important thing is that this book is very likely to be a eunuch.

"Alien Arrival", a novel about supernatural ghosts and ghosts flowing to Infinity. Highlights: The first dungeon is quite amazing, the flavor of Hong Kong-style ghosts is quite authentic, the upper body of the ghost and the pen fairy are vivid on the page, and the follow-up Fengdu Ghost City is also quite interesting; the second dungeon is also remarkable, although the protagonist is slightly marginalized, the style of Japanese ghost stories is also vivid and quite touching. Poisonous point: Starting from the third copy, there is a sudden 180° turn from ghost to fairy... This operation personally feels that this operation is putting the cart before the horse, and the reading experience is inexplicable. The supernatural ghosts and monsters are so well written, how come this suddenly appears; in addition, as the main plot continues to progress, the author's imperfect settings are gradually exposed. Problems are gradually exposed, and the subsequent discontinuation of updates is also expected.

"Becoming a Richest Man from Losing Money Starts from the Game", a systematic urban text, has been completed. Highlights: A series of funny plots caused by the system settings, the supporting role of Fancy Dihua cooperates with the protagonist to stage a series of oolong scenes. The subject matter chosen by the author is relatively novel. Urban literature approached from this perspective is indeed an unimagined path, and the content contained in the story is also quite rich and substantial. It is also worth mentioning that many readers do not understand the protagonist's desperate pursuit of losses. In fact, regardless of the protagonist's personal psychological activities, the system will replenish funds, which means that if there is no loss, there will be no money from the system. Based on the idea that if you cannot take advantage, you will suffer a loss, there is nothing wrong with pursuing losses. Disadvantages: As a long novel, it is difficult to avoid the problems of water content and duplication of routines in the later stage. In addition, it is difficult to delve into the rationality of the system's promotion. Many people commented that this book is anti-ZB, but many of the protagonists' anti-ZB operations in the book were only successful because of the author's escort. Doesn't this reversely prove the rationality of ZB operations in reality?

"A Certain Magic Professor at Hogwarts", a Harry Potter fanfic. Highlights: This book is already very well-known, so there is no need to recommend it, so I will briefly mention it here. This is a very smooth and delicate fanfic that even a reader like me who has never read the original work can easily pick up. It should be regarded as an excellent level among fanfic works. Poison Points: Personally speaking, there are no big problems with "A Certain Magical Professor of Hogwarts". The main dissatisfaction points are that it feels too bland and the perspective is often separated from the protagonist. If it is a character like Voldemort, Snape or Dumbledore, it will be okay, but it is a bit boring to spend a lot of space on a group of children. Of course, this perception is probably due to the fact that I am not a reader of the original work and lack the emotional foundation for the original protagonists.

"I Guarded Impel Down City as a Pirate for One Hundred Years", a variant of the pirate fan novel signed in. Highlights: The author's writing skills are quite good, and he has well grasped the core point of the sign-in flow: the protagonist is in a relatively safe environment and continues to become stronger. In addition, the small plot added by the author as an adjustment is also quite bright, stimulating the reader's emotions without over-expanding it and affecting the overall pattern. It is somewhat retractable and retractable. Poisonous point: Relatively repetitive is a common problem of the sign-in flow; in order to leave enough space for the sign-in flow, which takes time to strengthen the mode, the author set the timeline relatively early. In order not to affect the subsequent plot and deviate too much from the original work, the protagonist's actions in the early stage were somewhat timid. Other than that, it can be said that there is nothing too obvious about this book.

"So You Are the Devil" is a new book by the author of "I Created an Urban Legend in Tokyo". It tells the story of the protagonist, who is a demon, solving strange incidents in the city and strengthening himself. Highlights: The author of this book is quite good at supernatural stories. He is one of the very few who can write weird and logical stories. By the way, in my personal opinion, the author of "Mysterious Resurrection" also belongs to this category. The reason why supernatural stories are special is that they do not follow realistic rules, but if there are no rules at all, it will be extremely chaotic. How to establish an internal logic that is both weird and acceptable to readers is whether it can be written well. The key to this type of subject matter, simply put, is that it must not be full of rules and regulations like reality, but it cannot be completely without rules; in addition, the author can also well grasp the degree of horror and weirdness, so that readers can feel creepy without being overly scared and give up; the protagonists in the author's works are all behind the scenes or at the top of the food chain. They can basically be regarded as pseudo-invincible, and there are almost no frustrating plots. Poisonous point: This type of author who specializes in supernatural stories often has flaws in his writing. For example, the weird character/organization relationship in "Mysterious Resurrection". Is it possible that this kind of author really sacrificed something or has something wrong with it? The details of the author's setting of "So You Are the Devil" are quite rough, which also makes the quality of the work gradually weaken as the length increases. It may be more suitable for a short unit drama than a long online article. If you continue to write, it is strongly recommended to choose the infinite flow background that belongs to the unit drama combination. "So You Are the Devil" and "I Created an Urban Legend in Tokyo" are currently available. In comparison, I personally recommend trying the latter.

"Soul Painter" is a painting-themed novel. Highlights: The subject of painting itself is worth watching, and the author's performance in painting is also surprising. He uses language to describe the process of painting and the beauty of the final work very well. The content of painting is slightly inferior to painting, but it can be regarded as above the standard. The author's writing The writing skills are excellent, the scenes described are quite impactful, and the selected materials are also mysterious. Both Chinese and foreign folklore are well written; the several appearances of the protagonist's roommate also show that the author has plans for the subsequent plot, and it is not a one-shot deal. Poisonous point: As far as personal taste is concerned, the most uncomfortable thing is that the protagonist is too heroic as a protagonist... This sentence may be a bit convoluted. To put it more clearly, the protagonist is relying on the privilege of being the protagonist and not dying... This may just be a matter of my personal taste. After all, the protagonist is an artist. The behavior is not unreasonable and cannot be explained; the author chose a relatively witty and humorous writing style for creation. This style is not a shortcoming in itself, but it is somewhat confusing when placed in a Grammatical story. The author should not be a veteran, and the protagonist often exerts too much force through the plot of the work to show off, which is embarrassing.

"Magician's Manual", a new custom-written book from Tingri. I heard that Japanese writers are well-known for their spirituality and bad writing. Customized writing is a typical product of dancing in shackles. The proportion of junk writing in this category can be said to be high. To be honest, I didn't plan to read "Magician's Manual" with these two debuffs. However, the feedback from readers on all major platforms was pretty good. In addition, I was in a book shortage at the time, so I gave it a try. I have to say that it was really good in the early and middle stages. Highlights: The imaginative six kingdoms, the ridiculous opening reversal, the innovative death row management model, the virtual environment setting that seems to be regular but has hidden mysteries, and Tingri's signature delicate character creation and interaction. The black humorous opening chapter of "The Magician's Manual" can firmly catch the readers' attention. The three plots of prison, swordswoman and sea of knowledge attack one after another, leaving readers dizzying. Later, as the plot develops, the deformed and pathological Blood Moon Kingdom is revealed step by step, pushing the core contradiction of the first volume to a climax, fully demonstrating Tingri's talent, making it difficult to believe that a work with such quality and creativity is actually a custom-made novel... Poison Point: As far as personal taste is concerned, the first volume of "The Magician's Manual" has a downward trend starting from the plot of the mayor being arrested. The irony of the Blood Moon Kingdom in the first part is still restrained, but the strong and deliberate taste in the middle period cannot be hidden. What's more important is that the climax of the prison escape that was constantly foreshadowing has also passed by, just like preparing 99 fireworks, but they all turned out to be dumb guns... The beginning of the second volume is somewhat interesting. Through the setting of various lists, it can be seen that the author still has a lot of ideas, but compared with the passages in the death row prison in the first volume, it can only be said to be a bit too stable and everyday...

An unpopular spiritual novel set in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. Highlights: The eye-catching spiritual practice system, the sharply contradictory social status, and the entry point that is about to undergo drastic changes on the edge of the times... "My Organs Are Monsters" is full of buffs in terms of material selection alone. In terms of setting, the protagonist's unique organ demonization practice is very attractive. The spine, skin, eyes and other organs can be awakened individually. The painting style of monsters is weird and has a hint of spiritual charm; in terms of background, the end of the dynasty is about to be turned upside down. The invasion of powerful foreign enemies and the chaos of internal demons each show their magical powers. The ready-made conflicts are enough to write a book alone; in addition, the folklore written by the author is also quite graphic, making people feel immersed in the scene. Poisonous point: It can be said that success depends on Xiaohe, and failure depends on Xiaohe. The author was too greedy and stuffed too many elements into the book. In order to let the protagonist participate, he had to set up a multinational company as the background of the protagonist. The author's explanation for why the protagonist can control a multinational company of this size and strength is that managers only need to be able to manage and operate, and they are not necessarily better than their subordinates. This logic is applicable in the real world, but it feels a bit far-fetched to directly apply it to a setting with extraordinary power. The highlight of this book should be reflected in the upgrading content of cultivating organs to become demons. Now that such an exaggerated company has been created, it seems that it no longer matters what the protagonist practices. It doesn't matter what exercises the protagonist practices or how many levels he has upgraded. Anyway, the company will take care of it and it will be over.

"Sleep After Dark" is similar to a low-profile version of "Mysterious Resurrection" with a weakened supernatural/supernatural plot, character interactions, and a much more normal official organizational structure. The book "Sleep When Dark" sets out that there will be nightmare activities born under the influence of human consciousness during the dark night, which cannot affect sleeping humans. However, awake people who trigger the nightmare rules will be chased by nightmares. The awake human consciousness in the dark night may not only produce nightmares, but also lead to the extension of the night. Therefore, governments in various countries have enacted laws to distribute drugs (without side effects) to force sleep at night. Nightmares can only be killed by nightmares. A small number of human spirits can interact with the night and obtain different abilities, but the strength of their abilities is far behind those of nightmares. The biggest highlight of this book is the setting of character abilities. They are not very strong and many of them are arranged around nightmares. They are not the common routine of simple and crude direct attacks. It can be seen that the author has the idea of ​​​​writing something different. Instead of ruining the superpower battle on the street, the combat confrontation is carried out in the form of using one's own abilities to explore and utilize the characteristics of nightmares in the dark. This type of innovative work deserves support, and imagination is the core competitiveness of online writing.

"I Experience Life in a Dungeon", 430,000+ words, Eunuch. A new book from the author of "My Own Dream Game". Both of these books are stories about attracting specific girls to fall in love. Highlights: The author is good at writing about the relationship between men and women. At least as far as personal taste is concerned, I still like his style: the protagonist uses his unique identity to establish relationships with multiple heroines in the copy, and then returns to reality and uses the emotional foundation established in the copy to further develop; the author's writing skills and detail arrangement are relatively mature, and he has a good grasp of the scale of reality and drama. The level of image creation of the heroine is also considered to be superior in Qidian. Com's online articles. This author's book is worth reading just for the emotional content between men and women. Poisonous point: The author basically only knows this routine. He can't do anything good except repeating it again and again. Not to mention that the author's endurance is also quite worrying. He lacks the willpower to persist in writing and updating for a long time, which can only be said to be a pity.

"Laws of Werewolf Hunting", Western Fantasy Introduction: The background of the Victorian era seems to have some elements of whale oil technology. In the world in the book, there are non-human dark descendants originating from the dark moon, including fishmen, werewolves, ghosts, etc. The dark moon disappeared three hundred years ago. A large number of dark descendants chose to disguise themselves and blend into human society, and some of them gradually forgot their identities and powers. Three hundred years later, the dark moon is approaching and reappears, and more and more dark descendants are awakening. The protagonist is one of them. He comes into contact with and becomes involved in the supernatural side of this world because of a ring traded by his comrades. Highlights: For now, the biggest highlight is the protagonist himself. The protagonist in the book is a retired cavalry officer who has been in the army for more than ten years. He has actually participated in the war and won medals. He is nearly 1.9 Meters tall and has a strong build. He has a serious and steady personality and values ​​friendship. He has a high moral standard and has a temper but not recklessness. He has strong action and is neither humble nor overbearing. He is not a troublemaker but is not afraid of trouble. The protagonist is a mature gentleman antique shop owner during the day, and a werewolf carrying a heavy rifle to snipe targets in the dark under the moonlight at night. It can be said to be quite touching. Problem: There is an indigenous protagonist, no golden fingers, the author is considered a blockbuster and there is no completed work under his name. The debuff stack is full... I can only say that the character of the protagonist is very to your liking, and there are no major flaws in the background and story. Book lovers, please choose to watch it carefully.

"Crisis Game: Airport Battle Royale", unlimited streaming Introduction: The protagonist is a police academy student who is about to graduate, and is involved in an infinite stream of missions with the theme of crisis management in a game. The mission is carried out in a dream-like form, and death or failure can be restarted. The limiting condition is time, and the time consumed by each restart will be included in the total time. The main mission is divided into stages, and also includes branch and hidden missions. After completing the mission, temporary rewards will be settled immediately. After the overall mission is cleared, rewards will be drawn based on the performance score. As of now, the task is not mandatory. Once completed, you can wake up and return to the real world. Highlights: The airport battle royale section at the beginning is quite touching. The author shows relatively professional counter-terrorism, crisis response, indoor close combat and team command tactics. The plot development is very oppressive, the atmosphere is tense and exciting, and the text descriptions are full of shots, giving readers an audio-visual experience like watching a movie. Question: The subsequent development of this book requires further observation. As an infinite flow work, the author's system construction is relatively weak and not very complete.

"I Can Practice My Martial Arts on My Own", a martial arts fantasy novel with 1.2 Million+ words, has been completed. Highlights: The highlight of this book lies in the personification of martial arts. It can even be said that the core martial arts is more important than the protagonist himself. Disadvantages: Except for the good idea of ​​personification of martial arts, other aspects of this book are not outstanding.

"I Open a Gas Station in the Northwest", a Golden Finger urban novel with a word count of 3 million+, has been completed. Highlights: Choosing the northwest as the place where the main story takes place is an attraction. After all, things are rare and valuable, and the customs and customs of the northwest are undoubtedly more fresh. The author's writing level is also acceptable, the writing and plot arrangements are remarkable, the plot development is smooth, and the reading experience is quite smooth. Disadvantages: This book is a bit too long, and the later content almost just keeps repeating routines, which lowers the average quality of the entire book.

"I Use Wood Carvings to Record Abnormalities", a supernatural urban novel with a word count of 1.5 Million+, has been completed. Highlights: The theme of wood carving is a highlight, and the supernatural suspense plot presented by the author in the early and middle stages is also of excellent quality. In addition, the book also contains collection elements, which is also one of the cool points. Poison point: The follow-up development is weak, and the author's setting cannot support a long story. As the length of the story increases, the plot becomes more and more confusing, and the aura gradually loses.

"Investigator of the Ancient Times", a real version of the original novel, with a word count of 1.5 Million+, has been completed. Highlights: It is undoubtedly a very exciting way to determine the direction of the plot through real dice. Of course, the author has also prepared 9 reincarnation opportunities to provide the protagonist with enough error tolerance. In addition, the author's plot design ability is also quite excellent. Many routes that have not been dice are also quite attractive. I hope to complete them all. Poisonous point: Real dice is indeed exciting, but it may also cause the plot development to be abandoned halfway, which is not conducive to the arrangement of the long-term plot. This uncontrollable feeling may be difficult to accept by some readers.