The Book Has Its Own World

The author's language is quite humorous, and the jokes with Sichuan and Chongqing characteristics appeal to my taste: the group portraits are also well written, such as several of the male protagonist's classmates and the girls around the male protagonist, they are all very distinctive: However, after coming to the new concept, I feel that the author is getting more and more excited as he writes. The male protagonist in his novel has become more and more perfect. His articles are easily ranked first in the country. He worked hard for the college entrance examination for half a year and went straight to Tsinghua and Peking University. If you simply show that the protagonist's intelligence has been strengthened in the setting, you have to use a fig leaf to pretend to be humble and rely solely on your own efforts. Who can't tell that this is the author's own yy? In short, it can be said that the male protagonist has almost no shortcomings. The male protagonist's brilliance is so strong that it masks the characteristics of the female protagonist, making the female protagonist look like a nymphomaniac. In addition, the male protagonist is too perfect and it is difficult for readers to resonate. Originally, this kind of rebirth-themed novel dealt with the memories of ordinary people, but what the author did was the "memories" of ordinary people? There is less and less sense of substitution. Perfect people don't exist

The author cleverly integrates the original fantasy light novel into the element of unlimited copies through the setting of "the intersection of the celestial sphere" in the wizarding world. This idea enhances the interest and readability of the work. Secondly, regarding the choice of copies of different worlds, the author seems to prefer the game world, especially soul games. This may increase the threshold of the article, but because of the author's acceptable and relatively clear writing logic and detailed and appropriate content processing, even readers who are not familiar with games can easily immerse themselves in it. All in all, it is an excellent novel

Advantages: The writing is compact, the logic is strict, the author has a good grasp of the atmosphere, and it makes people feel excited and excited when reading.

Advantages: The plot is smooth and the writing is excellent. In addition, the "chaos" of many golden fingers is refreshing and makes people smile. Disadvantages: It is a bit depressing to read, and the tone of the whole book feels cold.

Advantages: Judging from the time, the setting was still very novel, the plot was also very smooth, and there were no obvious logical contradictions. In addition, the opening of the copy is a highlight of the book, at least it was full of attraction for me at the time! Disadvantages: Too old, may not be attractive enough for bookworms with extensive reading experience

Advantages: The setting of this book is quite novel. It can be seen that the author has put in a lot of hard work. Disadvantages: The writing is weak