Magic Card World

First of all, when the author is writing, there are too many inner dramas of the characters, that is, too much talking, which extremely slows down the development of the plot. It would be better to write once in a while. If you read too much, the readers will have "aesthetic fatigue", and then they will have a feeling that the author is good. After reading dozens of chapters, there is not much formal plot. It took almost a hundred chapters to write one world before making any progress. Moreover, this is only the first world, so it should be written briefly. Overall, this book is pretty good, except for the fact that the protagonist was ridiculed at the beginning and then stopped being like that. Dear book friends, you can get over it after a while in the early stage. In short, my only dissatisfaction is that the development of the protagonist is really too slow. I hope the author can write less inner drama.

I liked your last book very much. Please pay attention to this book. There is also another book. I read a pirated version, so don't scold me (›´ω`‹)

For example, Kamen Rider Bland's pistol Kaito Lady? And the Shadow Army from Jackie Chan's Adventures, the Summoning Technique of Zero's Familiar, or the Summoner from LOL? ? [Emot=default,13/]

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I just read this book not long ago, and it was fine at the beginning, but when the bunny girl came out, something felt wrong. . . Personally, I don't like third-rate novels with female protagonists and ambiguous harems. After all, the protagonist is a time traveler, has a golden finger, and is guilty of harboring a treasure. Don't think that everyone is stupid. Sometimes you think that people are cute or stupid, but in fact you are the stupidest one. After looking at the table of contents at the back, I see that there are quite a few chapters about bunny girls. Could the author or anyone tell me if this is a female protagonist or a sister-in-law? If it is a story about bringing a girl to pretend to upgrade, I will skip it. Because the protagonist has a golden finger and can upgrade faster than anyone else. Leading someone no matter how talented they are is a burden and will also expose them, unless all the villains and supporting actors are Sabi~😂

It's a pretty good writing style, a bit nonsensical in its seriousness, but it doesn't look boring.

Horrible Cards. I read more than 20 chapters, all of which were about card enhancement. Three cards were watered down in three chapters. That was real water. To strengthen a card, you actually have to introduce its shape, materials, and magic patterns. I thought I wanted the main character to be dark!

Don't ask for a golden chapter. In the first chapter, a group of classmates appeared who thoughtlessly mocked the protagonist. The protagonist had talents but just hid them and didn't use them. It was a group of intelligence. The most important thing is that the protagonist has been awakened for twelve years and is still hiding, six sixty-six. I thought it was such an awesome talent. I awakened one soul card twelve years ago, the second one ten years ago, and the third one before the college entrance examination. I saw it was really awesome, and then I said that the second card can be produced by one in 100,000 people. There can be more than 10,000 people in a country a year. Where are you hiding nimu? There is one third card in 10 million people, and there must be hundreds in the world at least. The key is that you know you can awaken the third card from the beginning? What the hell is hiding? It's like self-taught college knowledge in high school. It sounds very powerful. Could it be that someone would mess with you because of this?

There are a lot of big principles to talk about. I am here to watch the plot, not to watch you talk about big principles.

I hate this kind of gold finger that gives multiple rewards without thinking. Ordinary people get 200 yuan a day to move bricks, and the protagonist gets 200 yuan a day to move bricks plus 10,000 yuan given by the system to show off.