Novice Writer's Testing the Poison House/danmei Series Testing the Poison House
新手作家试毒楼/耽美系列试毒楼
🌸☆Novice Writers Testing the Poison House☆The reasons for founding☆Novice Writers Testing the Poison House☆: 1. Boring Army is also a novice 2. Wants to grow with everyone 3. Discover some works with great potential to help promote 🌸☆Danmei Series Testing the Poison House☆Reasons: 1. Boring Army is a rotten girl 2. It feels a little sad to see the Pure Love series of Qidian. Some new writers are obviously great, but they give up because no one reads it. 3. I hope everyone will pay more attention to Qiufafa🌸🌸🌸. If you are paying attention, please remember to leave a message to Boring Army, so that Boring Army can discover the potential of the little cuties. Boring Army with high potential will help recommend~🌸 Loulou Guide: Recommendation Index: It is based on comprehensive considerations such as the writing style of the work, the plot, the author's writing technique, and whether there is any suspicion of abandonment. (Recommendation index is five stars in total) #...# This is a logo that provides a quick way to find personal favorite categories. 🌸The editor reads one book almost every day and recommends the ones he or she thinks are good. Generally, an author will only recommend one of his (her) books. If there are any areas that need improvement, feel free to leave a message. (Please pay attention, please collect~)
1Legend of Wu Hen
Fantasy Romance巫痕传
Mountain Fire Tree
Wu Hen practiced in Wuying Lake for three hundred years. When Zhi Fei passed by with his sword, he left behind a Wanxiang Pearl, and their fates became entangled from then on. Conspiracies followed one after another, and she became a monster that everyone could punish. The orthodoxy of the Immortal Family and the orthodoxy of Heaven are both a joke. She confronted everyone and said: If the sky stops me, I will kill all the gods and demons. If you go against my way, I will destroy the sky! ____________________ [Please pay attention to the starting point for the original text] ____________________ [The signed works have been completed, so please feel free to enter.
Wu Hen practiced in Wuying Lake for three hundred years. When Zhi Fei passed by with his sword, he left behind a Wanxiang Pearl, and their fates became entangled from then on. Conspiracies followed one after another, and she became a monster that everyone could punish. The orthodoxy of the Immortal Family and the orthodoxy of Heaven are both a joke. She confronted everyone and said: If the sky stops me, I will kill all the gods and demons. If you go against my way, I will destroy the sky! ____________________ [Please pay attention to the starting point for the original text] ____________________ [The signed works have been completed, so please feel free to enter.
#古风##人气小作家##玄幻# 大d无论是从文笔还是剧情来说都挺不错的,表达的情感也很到位,代入感也不错~ 人物塑造的挺生动的,脑洞满新奇的感觉,一口气看完都不是问题。 文中语言描写的很细腻,能给观众不错的体验,无聊军比较喜欢这一点~ 风格挺轻松愉快的,看起来不疲惫,关于这点无聊军挺喜欢的。 打斗场面刻画挺好的,代入感也不错,开场通过精彩的打斗场景抓住了读者的兴趣… 作者的文学素养也很不错,每一段都耐人寻味,看起来也不枯燥,比起很多新手大d来说真的很不错了。 文中句词通顺行笔流畅,人物刻画也十分巧妙。 无聊军在此提一些小小的建议,大d酌情考量呦(仅个人观点) 剧情方面还需要多多琢磨呦,相信大d可以写出跌宕起伏,让人点了进去就不想出来的小说哒~ 不过大d的书整体看起来是真的很棒! -追更中- 推荐指数:☆☆ (大d每天都在更新,等过了十万字会改推荐指数哒~请大d继续加油啊) 类别:言情,玄幻 进度:未突破十万字连载中
2Flying Kite for Nine Days
Fantasy Romance飞鸢九天
First Time
*Is the golden lin just a thing in the pond? It turns into a dragon when it encounters a storm* She died during a mission. When she woke up again, her limbs were hung with heavy iron chains, and she was locked in an iron cage with big characters, and was auctioned off as a furnace. The once good-for-nothing second lady of the Jun family opened her eyes again, and the timidity in her eyes was replaced by coldness and insight. There's no harm in traveling through time. Let's see how she defies the odds and becomes prosperous in this continent! She is not afraid of conspiracies and schemes. Those who humiliate her and harm her will make them pay the price! He is His Highness the King of Qi, cold and evil, extremely talented and not a womanizer. There is a saying in the capital that "once you meet the King of Qi, you will always be in love". He once thought that he would be alone for the rest of his life, but he fell in love with her by accident. He was bound to win her heart. No matter what method he used, this woman could only be his wife! In this life, he must be entangled with her to the end! When a villain meets a villain, and there are various plots and schemes, who will steal who's heart first? [Readers who like 19's articles, remember to bookmark and recommend comments??]
*Is the golden lin just a thing in the pond? It turns into a dragon when it encounters a storm* She died during a mission. When she woke up again, her limbs were hung with heavy iron chains, and she was locked in an iron cage with big characters, and was auctioned off as a furnace. The once good-for-nothing second lady of the Jun family opened her eyes again, and the timidity in her eyes was replaced by coldness and insight. There's no harm in traveling through time. Let's see how she defies the odds and becomes prosperous in this continent! She is not afraid of conspiracies and schemes. Those who humiliate her and harm her will make them pay the price! He is His Highness the King of Qi, cold and evil, extremely talented and not a womanizer. There is a saying in the capital that "once you meet the King of Qi, you will always be in love". He once thought that he would be alone for the rest of his life, but he fell in love with her by accident. He was bound to win her heart. No matter what method he used, this woman could only be his wife! In this life, he must be entangled with her to the end! When a villain meets a villain, and there are various plots and schemes, who will steal who's heart first? [Readers who like 19's articles, remember to bookmark and recommend comments??]
【新手作家试毒贴】 #古风##人气小作家# 无聊君很早就开始关注大d啦,很早就决定要来书评,时间一长都以为自己早就评了…哈哈哈,现在补上,希望大d不要介意啊~ 大d无论是从文笔还是剧情来说都挺不错的,表达的情感也很到位,代入感也不错~ 喜欢书中角色君灵鸢,出场也很特别,给人一种耳目一新的感觉。 人物塑造的挺生动的,脑洞满新奇的感觉,一口气看完都不是问题。 文中语言描写的很细腻,能给观众不错的体验,无聊军比较喜欢这一点~ 风格有些奇特,看起来蛮新颖的,有些剧情的确是在意料之外情理之中。 无聊军在此提一些小小的建议,大d酌情考量呦(仅个人观点) 关于段落的问题,感觉有些紧密,若是能简短一些可能看着要省力一点,毕竟有时候学*或者工作累了,在看小说的时候若是字很多就会有点疲惫哦~可以适当的调一下~ 推荐指数:☆☆ (大d每天都在更新,等过了十万字会改推荐指数哒~请大d继续加油啊) 类别:玄幻,言情 进度:未突破十万字连载中
4High Level Rebirth
Modern Romance高段位重生
Xu Aling
(Atypical rebirth story. The title and introduction type of the book have nothing to do with the full text. It is not recommended to watch. Thank you for your cooperation.) Her previous life was miserable. Until her death, she still heard her daughter yelling about how to divide her property, saying that what she owned belonged to their Zheng family... But that was not the case. After hearing this, she closed her eyes forever and when she opened them again, she went back to the time before the tragedy started. In the last life, the Zheng family bullied her and humiliated her so much, causing her parents to take over her family property and letting the little three dove take over the magpie's nest... She would never let herself make the same mistake again in this life!
(Atypical rebirth story. The title and introduction type of the book have nothing to do with the full text. It is not recommended to watch. Thank you for your cooperation.) Her previous life was miserable. Until her death, she still heard her daughter yelling about how to divide her property, saying that what she owned belonged to their Zheng family... But that was not the case. After hearing this, she closed her eyes forever and when she opened them again, she went back to the time before the tragedy started. In the last life, the Zheng family bullied her and humiliated her so much, causing her parents to take over her family property and letting the little three dove take over the magpie's nest... She would never let herself make the same mistake again in this life!
[Novice Writers Test the Poison House] #modern## rebirth##campus# -Return to the student days, no longer cowardly in this life- In terms of plot: The first part is more daily, and the author writes in detail about psychological activities. In terms of character design: The character is relatively distinct, and the sense of immersion is not bad. The writing is pretty good, and it's a book with great potential~ I would like to make some pertinent suggestions (only my personal opinion, you can consider it at your own discretion): You can appropriately control the length of the description. If you write too many words, it will appear a bit heavy and the readers will look a little tired~ Although Boring Jun's writing is not very good, he has read a lot of books and summed up some experiences. I personally hope that Big D can control a paragraph not to be too long. The concise and clear length makes it easier for readers to read~ Recommended:☆☆☆ Categories: Modern, Rebirth Progress: serialization
5Xianyujianghu
Xianxia仙御江湖
Hope Xuefei
He is recognized as the most talented immortal cultivator in Xiaoyao Palace, but he still has trouble breaking the mortal bond! When his adoptive father was killed and his beauty was robbed, he finally got angry and embarked on a path of no return that violated the taboos of cultivators! The world of cultivators said he was deviant, but he said he had his own way. When all the forces in the Three Realms were turbulent, he rebelled against the Immortal Sect and wandered in the chaotic world of gods and demons. He ignored secular prejudices, killed evil spirits, fell in love with demon girls, played with fairies, and helped the demon king. Zhengdao called it the greatest rebellion in history, but in the end he discovered...
He is recognized as the most talented immortal cultivator in Xiaoyao Palace, but he still has trouble breaking the mortal bond! When his adoptive father was killed and his beauty was robbed, he finally got angry and embarked on a path of no return that violated the taboos of cultivators! The world of cultivators said he was deviant, but he said he had his own way. When all the forces in the Three Realms were turbulent, he rebelled against the Immortal Sect and wandered in the chaotic world of gods and demons. He ignored secular prejudices, killed evil spirits, fell in love with demon girls, played with fairies, and helped the demon king. Zhengdao called it the greatest rebellion in history, but in the end he discovered...
【新手作家试毒楼】 #仙侠##古风##男频新手大d# 剧情方面:无聊军是第一次看仙侠类的小说呢~虽然有些地方看的不是特别懂,但是整体读起来还是能明白剧情。 关于这方面,无聊军想提一个小小的建议,大d若是想小说受众面积比较广的话,可以试着解释文中的一些词哦~ 比如说大d独创的一些东西,要解释一下这些东西的用处啊,技能啊之类的。 文笔方面:大d文笔很好,人物刻画的很细腻。 通过动作,语言等方面很好的展现了人物的性格,对于新手作者来说写的真的很不错哦~ 无聊军还在继续追更中,请大d继续加油! 推荐指数:☆☆☆ 类别:仙侠,古风 进度:连载
6我在异界有个黑市
How Wrong
(Five updates a day, please read) I carried my bag into the city, ate hot pot and sang songs, and suddenly my cultivation level improved! Don't ask me what's in my bag! Brother, don't leave. I see that you have amazing bones and extraordinary talents. I have a secret book for you. I tell you in a low voice that this thing can only be found on the black market...
(Five updates a day, please read) I carried my bag into the city, ate hot pot and sang songs, and suddenly my cultivation level improved! Don't ask me what's in my bag! Brother, don't leave. I see that you have amazing bones and extraordinary talents. I have a secret book for you. I tell you in a low voice that this thing can only be found on the black market...
[Novice Writers Test the Poison House] # Fantasy # # cross # # different world # # Male channel novice big d # Big D's writing looks very easy, and I feel like I can read many chapters in one go. Plot comment: Combining the game, cultivation, rebirth and other settings, as well as the economy, it can be seen that Big D has spent a lot of effort. Big D's book looks quite interesting without being vulgar. In terms of character design: the protagonist has a cool and handsome feeling, which is quite attractive to female readers. Although there are some flaws in the writing, other aspects make up for some shortcomings. Overall, it is very good. I would like to make some pertinent suggestions: (Only my personal opinion, Big D can consider it as appropriate) The scene description needs to be strengthened, and the sense of immersion is not enough ~ You can deepen the depth of the book. I believe that Big D can develop better and further~ Recommendation index:☆☆☆ Category: Fantasy, Rebirth, Time Travel Progress: serialization
7The Best Loser Sheng Beloved Concubine
Fantasy Romance极品废柴盛宠妃
Eliminate
The new book "The Medical Concubine's Strategy" is being serialized... Xuanmen and imperial power coexist. The girl Feng Yan, whose family was destroyed, was rescued by Chu Yanlie and transformed into a maid in the Chenxi Palace. Inherit the alchemy skills and win the title of Fuyun Kingdom's new alchemist! Once she was named Princess Chen Xi, she embarked on a bumpy road of fighting love rivals, eliminating evildoers, and slaying demons. In order to find the real culprit who destroyed the family, he was trapped in the quagmire, survived after death, cultivated to a great extent, and embarked on the road of revenge with Chenxi King Chu Yanlie...
The new book "The Medical Concubine's Strategy" is being serialized... Xuanmen and imperial power coexist. The girl Feng Yan, whose family was destroyed, was rescued by Chu Yanlie and transformed into a maid in the Chenxi Palace. Inherit the alchemy skills and win the title of Fuyun Kingdom's new alchemist! Once she was named Princess Chen Xi, she embarked on a bumpy road of fighting love rivals, eliminating evildoers, and slaying demons. In order to find the real culprit who destroyed the family, he was trapped in the quagmire, survived after death, cultivated to a great extent, and embarked on the road of revenge with Chenxi King Chu Yanlie...
【新手作家试毒楼】 #古风##逆袭##甜宠##连载##新手作家# 剧情方面评价:甜+宠,适合休闲时来吃点糖,这本书读起来不费劲,行笔流畅。 女主废材的设定蛮吸引读者的,一向书中以废材为主角的到最后一定会很炸,逆袭什么的挺对我胃口的。 文笔:大d的文笔综合来看还是蛮不错的。 读书后个人想提的一些小建议,大d可以当做参考: 文中的一些场景描写,人物服装刻画各方面还需细化。 情感方面也需要多琢磨琢磨,有些地方写的可能太快了,会让读者觉得角色内心情感发展太快,没有让读者产生共鸣。 #新手作家都很不容易,已关注大d收藏好了作品,期待后续发展~# 推荐指数:☆☆☆ 类型:古风 进度:连载