High Level Rebirth

Good looking, recommended

[Novice Writers Test the Poison House] #modern## rebirth##campus# -Return to the student days, no longer cowardly in this life- In terms of plot: The first part is more daily, and the author writes in detail about psychological activities. In terms of character design: The character is relatively distinct, and the sense of immersion is not bad. The writing is pretty good, and it's a book with great potential~ I would like to make some pertinent suggestions (only my personal opinion, you can consider it at your own discretion): You can appropriately control the length of the description. If you write too many words, it will appear a bit heavy and the readers will look a little tired~ Although Boring Jun's writing is not very good, he has read a lot of books and summed up some experiences. I personally hope that Big D can control a paragraph not to be too long. The concise and clear length makes it easier for readers to read~ Recommended:☆☆☆ Categories: Modern, Rebirth Progress: serialization