Flawed, Big Plot Holes, Abandoned Reading List
有瑕疵,剧情漏洞较大,弃读的书单
Here are some drug-testing novels. These books are not all without merit. You can read some of the chapters in the book shortage. Evaluation criteria: Grain and grass - 50-60, Grain and grass 60-70, Grain and grass + 70-80 points, grass jelly - 80-90, grass jelly 90-100, points will be given directly if it is too bad
1Ask About the Immortal Way
Xianxia叩问仙道
Rain Hits Bluestone
A mortal boy strayed into the path of immortality due to an accident, and struggled on the road to seek immortality. The path to immortality is difficult to achieve, and despite many obstacles, his desire to seek the truth remains undiminished. Looking back, the green mountains are still there, and the old bones are all gone. There are two penguin groups below. If you want to join a group, you can join as appropriate. Ban group: 710441068 (to prevent the chat group from being blocked, some notices, announcements, etc. May be sent in it, but generally no talking is allowed)
A mortal boy strayed into the path of immortality due to an accident, and struggled on the road to seek immortality. The path to immortality is difficult to achieve, and despite many obstacles, his desire to seek the truth remains undiminished. Looking back, the green mountains are still there, and the old bones are all gone. There are two penguin groups below. If you want to join a group, you can join as appropriate. Ban group: 710441068 (to prevent the chat group from being blocked, some notices, announcements, etc. May be sent in it, but generally no talking is allowed)
It can be regarded as a classic Mortal-style novel, and there is a world of incense in it which is quite interesting. However, the protagonist later became involved with Mahayana as soon as he started practicing virtual reality. I felt that it would not be interesting in the future, so I gave up at that time. In addition, the protagonist selling himself to build foundation in the early stage is also a relatively big surprise. Counting food and grass, I can give an overall score of 57.
2Holy Fist!
Urban圣拳!
Gray Tombstone
Bai Xiao arrived and raised his head. Not only did he see this bizarre and magnificent world, he also saw the career modifier he had downloaded before traveling. "Consume all the experience of the sub-professions [Biological Mecha Master], [Secret Scientist] and [Special Hypnotist], and turn them into millions of potential points, all of which can be upgraded and modified to the main profession [Fighter]!" "I... Got the golden ultimate profession [God of Martial Arts]!" The largest urban cluster in the world, on a rainy night. On the ground, countless murderers and fighters were fighting to the death, and massive metal mechas and biological armors exploded and self-destructed. Blood and fire mixed together, and everything fell into primitive violence and chaos. At the top of the tower, Bai Xiao stood quietly in the darkness of the rain, like a stiff and terrifying statue. His scarlet eyes looked down, with blood in his restraint, and madness hidden in his coldness. Jumping down, the windbreaker danced wildly. The God of Martial Arts has descended on the final battlefield! The cold voice echoed across the city skyline. "Next, I will kill everyone present! If you have the ability, come and stop me..." In the prosperous and luxurious modern city, in the era of consumption where entertainment comes first. Under the surface of seventy years of peace, there is another crazy and bloody inner world. A fighter who masters the secrets of the school, and a murderer controlled by the battle mode, the two sides engage in a terrifying and endless fight. Metal mechas with terrifying energy, biological armors extracted from monster cells, and the cruel battle between old and new technologies has begun. In this era alienated by machines and foreign objects, shouting about the power that belongs only to humans may be unimaginably romantic...
Bai Xiao arrived and raised his head. Not only did he see this bizarre and magnificent world, he also saw the career modifier he had downloaded before traveling. "Consume all the experience of the sub-professions [Biological Mecha Master], [Secret Scientist] and [Special Hypnotist], and turn them into millions of potential points, all of which can be upgraded and modified to the main profession [Fighter]!" "I... Got the golden ultimate profession [God of Martial Arts]!" The largest urban cluster in the world, on a rainy night. On the ground, countless murderers and fighters were fighting to the death, and massive metal mechas and biological armors exploded and self-destructed. Blood and fire mixed together, and everything fell into primitive violence and chaos. At the top of the tower, Bai Xiao stood quietly in the darkness of the rain, like a stiff and terrifying statue. His scarlet eyes looked down, with blood in his restraint, and madness hidden in his coldness. Jumping down, the windbreaker danced wildly. The God of Martial Arts has descended on the final battlefield! The cold voice echoed across the city skyline. "Next, I will kill everyone present! If you have the ability, come and stop me..." In the prosperous and luxurious modern city, in the era of consumption where entertainment comes first. Under the surface of seventy years of peace, there is another crazy and bloody inner world. A fighter who masters the secrets of the school, and a murderer controlled by the battle mode, the two sides engage in a terrifying and endless fight. Metal mechas with terrifying energy, biological armors extracted from monster cells, and the cruel battle between old and new technologies has begun. In this era alienated by machines and foreign objects, shouting about the power that belongs only to humans may be unimaginably romantic...
Yakuza-ryu works are also similar to Mysterious Journey, Secret Martial Arts, etc. This is much better than Modifying Breathing Techniques, and the protagonist's character is much more likable. The disadvantage is that the author does not have an outline, and the later updates are very slow. It took a long time to play the game (it is relatively watery). If you like watching Yakuza Ryu, you can read it. This should be regarded as food and grass, and it can give 65 points.
3从修改呼吸法开始变强
Latte 70% Sugar
A cheat. Let Hu Qi come to this strange and paradoxical world. Slowly, he discovered the differences beneath the prosperous surface of this world. ... The glass curtain walls of the skyscrapers are shattered, reflecting the dim sunlight, like a broken dream. The streets are filled with ruins and broken walls, and the twisted steel and concrete skeletons stretch abruptly into the sky. Hu Qi stood tall and tall, with long black hair that moved without wind. A thick, black-scaled arm was pulled out from a monster's body. The ground beside him was covered with a strange and huge corpse. Suddenly. If he feels something. Look up. His scarlet eyes seemed to be able to penetrate the barrier between reality and the spiritual world. I saw one of them as powerful as a god. The corners of his mouth were raised in a ferocious arc. Smiling softly and saying to himself: "What fresh ingredients!"
A cheat. Let Hu Qi come to this strange and paradoxical world. Slowly, he discovered the differences beneath the prosperous surface of this world. ... The glass curtain walls of the skyscrapers are shattered, reflecting the dim sunlight, like a broken dream. The streets are filled with ruins and broken walls, and the twisted steel and concrete skeletons stretch abruptly into the sky. Hu Qi stood tall and tall, with long black hair that moved without wind. A thick, black-scaled arm was pulled out from a monster's body. The ground beside him was covered with a strange and huge corpse. Suddenly. If he feels something. Look up. His scarlet eyes seemed to be able to penetrate the barrier between reality and the spiritual world. I saw one of them as powerful as a god. The corners of his mouth were raised in a ferocious arc. Smiling softly and saying to himself: "What fresh ingredients!"
It's a Yakuza-ryu work, a dark novel, but the protagonist is unlikable, much worse than the protagonist in Go Go's novel. The overall writing is barely readable, but many times I want to report it. There is no need to write some disgusting plots. Overall it can only be awarded 40 points.
4My Experience in Another World
Light Novel我在异界肝经验
Seal
A story about traveling through another world, relying on proficiency and ability, and constantly gaining strength through experience.
A story about traveling through another world, relying on proficiency and ability, and constantly gaining strength through experience.
This book is quite amazing. It has been updated at least twice, and it is still read by many people. At least the comment section says it is good and they don't understand it. I almost stopped watching when I saw the protagonist entering the Chicken Crow Road (it's been a while, that's probably the name). The protagonist felt like a complete idiot, and the author kept emphasizing that he didn't feel safe. As a result, his subordinates (especially the fat guy who was controlled by the protagonist) kept causing trouble for the protagonist and didn't deal with it. Also, the protagonist has never understood how the entire cultivation level is divided. After practicing for a long time, he can't even figure out his own level, and he is confused and confused. I'd give it 30-40 points overall.
5Wizard I Have a Game Board
Fantasy巫师,我有一个游戏面板
Ink Falls On The Other Side Of The Flower
[2025 Editor-in-Chief Recommends Cool Works] Su Chen opened his eyes and found that he had arrived in the background story of the game "Glow of Truth" in his previous life. In the era of great development of wizards, he became a young man named Lore. Nowadays, the wizards have just defeated the gods and are focusing on research and development in various fields. Compared with the environment, it is barely stable. Elemental wizards, who study nature and transform nature, are ancient and comprehensive, capable of both offense and defense, but now they are gradually losing their power. Blood wizards study various magical creatures and transplant blood, and are famous for their complexity. The faith wizard is powerful enough to be independent from the blood wizard. It is a system discovered from the body of the god. ... However, even if he traveled to such a temporarily stable era and still had a game panel, he was not happy. Because even in this era, there are temple knights who will appear at any time for revenge and kill indiscriminately. Ten years from now, there will be turmoil among the wizards of faith. After that, there will be the era of the advent of the abyss, the era of the fourth natural disaster, and the plane... In short, each one of them can give people a headache. "Live as long as you can, it's better than dead." Luo Er sighed.
[2025 Editor-in-Chief Recommends Cool Works] Su Chen opened his eyes and found that he had arrived in the background story of the game "Glow of Truth" in his previous life. In the era of great development of wizards, he became a young man named Lore. Nowadays, the wizards have just defeated the gods and are focusing on research and development in various fields. Compared with the environment, it is barely stable. Elemental wizards, who study nature and transform nature, are ancient and comprehensive, capable of both offense and defense, but now they are gradually losing their power. Blood wizards study various magical creatures and transplant blood, and are famous for their complexity. The faith wizard is powerful enough to be independent from the blood wizard. It is a system discovered from the body of the god. ... However, even if he traveled to such a temporarily stable era and still had a game panel, he was not happy. Because even in this era, there are temple knights who will appear at any time for revenge and kill indiscriminately. Ten years from now, there will be turmoil among the wizards of faith. After that, there will be the era of the advent of the abyss, the era of the fourth natural disaster, and the plane... In short, each one of them can give people a headache. "Live as long as you can, it's better than dead." Luo Er sighed.
I abandoned this book when I saw that the main character was a level two or level three wizard. On the whole, it does not describe the wizard's sense of pursuing the truth and conquering the world, and it does not have the flavor of the classic wizard style. Not recommended, 20-30 minutes
6长生,从选择海克斯强化开始
Ad 2024
Xiao Chen traveled to a world of cultivating immortals where dangers were everywhere and demons were rampant. With ordinary qualifications and no background, he can only become a handyman disciple at the bottom of the Lihuo Sect, with no hope of success in this life. Fortunately, at this time, he activated Hex Enhancement. From now on, every time you break through the bottleneck, you can trigger Hex's selection. First choice: [Opening: You cannot practice any practice in the next three years. After that, you will advance to three minor realms and obtain two hundred spiritual stones. Xiao Chen: "Is there such a good thing?" Three years into his career, he drinks tea every day, takes a walk, and lives a leisurely life. Three years later, he had an 'enlightenment' on the spot, broke through the middle stage of Qi refining in one fell swoop, and was successfully promoted to an outer disciple. Second choice: [Featherweight I: The speed of practicing yellow-level skills is increased tenfold, and the power of spells is increased tenfold. Xiao Chen decisively gave up the Xuan level skills and chose the lowest level Huang level skills. Ten times the training speed, your training progress will take off immediately! Ten times the power of spells, he is invincible in a battle of the same level! Third choice: [Buy one, get one free: Every time you refine a batch of elixirs, you will get an additional batch of identical elixirs. When other disciples in the sect, for a little bit of spiritual stone, work hard every day and take risks to take on sect tasks. Xiao Chen could easily earn dozens of times the income of other disciples. ... Several years later, Xiao Chen stood at the top. Someone asked: "How can I be as strong as you?" Xiao Chen replied with a smile: "The reason why I am where I am today is all because of my extraordinary talent..."
Xiao Chen traveled to a world of cultivating immortals where dangers were everywhere and demons were rampant. With ordinary qualifications and no background, he can only become a handyman disciple at the bottom of the Lihuo Sect, with no hope of success in this life. Fortunately, at this time, he activated Hex Enhancement. From now on, every time you break through the bottleneck, you can trigger Hex's selection. First choice: [Opening: You cannot practice any practice in the next three years. After that, you will advance to three minor realms and obtain two hundred spiritual stones. Xiao Chen: "Is there such a good thing?" Three years into his career, he drinks tea every day, takes a walk, and lives a leisurely life. Three years later, he had an 'enlightenment' on the spot, broke through the middle stage of Qi refining in one fell swoop, and was successfully promoted to an outer disciple. Second choice: [Featherweight I: The speed of practicing yellow-level skills is increased tenfold, and the power of spells is increased tenfold. Xiao Chen decisively gave up the Xuan level skills and chose the lowest level Huang level skills. Ten times the training speed, your training progress will take off immediately! Ten times the power of spells, he is invincible in a battle of the same level! Third choice: [Buy one, get one free: Every time you refine a batch of elixirs, you will get an additional batch of identical elixirs. When other disciples in the sect, for a little bit of spiritual stone, work hard every day and take risks to take on sect tasks. Xiao Chen could easily earn dozens of times the income of other disciples. ... Several years later, Xiao Chen stood at the top. Someone asked: "How can I be as strong as you?" Xiao Chen replied with a smile: "The reason why I am where I am today is all because of my extraordinary talent..."
After reading about 300 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore after Two Realms. Before, Yuanying could still be read as a normal golden finger upgrade flow, but every time the protagonist upgrades, the current level is garbage, and it is inexplicably spread. Overall, it is barely readable (ignoring some minor logical problems). I will give it 40 points.
7苟成圣人,仙官召我养马
Let Me Laugh
As a servant, Gu An accidentally broke a jar of spiritual flowers when he was young. When he was panicking, he discovered that he had actually lost twelve years of life! A road to immortality is now unfolding before Gu An's eyes! In order to cultivate immortality stably, Gu An chose to become a handyman disciple of Taixuan Sect, planting medicinal herbs every day to take away the lifespan of the medicinal herbs for cultivation. Through the evolution of his lifespan, his basic skills continue to evolve, from basic skills to supernatural powers! Era changes, stars change, and the world changes. The legend of immortals gradually began to appear in the world. Gu An, known as the Immortal, spent half of his life to help him cross the limit of the Immortal Way, attain the realm of a Saint, and be superior to the Way of Heaven. However, one day, an old man in white with a fairy-like demeanor came to visit Gu An. "Pindao is the Xuanqing Star Lord in the sky. Emperor Taihao heard that fellow Taoist has done many good deeds in the world and saved all sentient beings many times. His merits are immeasurable. He specially sent Pindao to the lower realm to summon fellow Taoist to join the immortal class and hold the position of immortal, the official of the divine horse." "May I ask what the position of the official of the divine horse is?" "There are divine horses in heaven, which can cross heaven and earth and escape into Yin and Yang. The official of the divine horse is responsible for taking care of and feeding these divine horses." Huh? Raising horses?
As a servant, Gu An accidentally broke a jar of spiritual flowers when he was young. When he was panicking, he discovered that he had actually lost twelve years of life! A road to immortality is now unfolding before Gu An's eyes! In order to cultivate immortality stably, Gu An chose to become a handyman disciple of Taixuan Sect, planting medicinal herbs every day to take away the lifespan of the medicinal herbs for cultivation. Through the evolution of his lifespan, his basic skills continue to evolve, from basic skills to supernatural powers! Era changes, stars change, and the world changes. The legend of immortals gradually began to appear in the world. Gu An, known as the Immortal, spent half of his life to help him cross the limit of the Immortal Way, attain the realm of a Saint, and be superior to the Way of Heaven. However, one day, an old man in white with a fairy-like demeanor came to visit Gu An. "Pindao is the Xuanqing Star Lord in the sky. Emperor Taihao heard that fellow Taoist has done many good deeds in the world and saved all sentient beings many times. His merits are immeasurable. He specially sent Pindao to the lower realm to summon fellow Taoist to join the immortal class and hold the position of immortal, the official of the divine horse." "May I ask what the position of the official of the divine horse is?" "There are divine horses in heaven, which can cross heaven and earth and escape into Yin and Yang. The official of the divine horse is responsible for taking care of and feeding these divine horses." Huh? Raising horses?
The plot is illogical, there are too many stacked boxes, the realm names look like they were written in AI, and the title is misleading. . Give 30-30 points
8One Magical Power Every Day
Xuanhuan每日一门神通大成
Try To Eat Fish
Others have practiced hard for thousands of years just to gain access to magical powers. Chen Fei took a deep breath-- [Jishan breathing method, perfect! One thought destroys illusion, one anger buries the heavens. From the time I was a mortal, Step by step, build the supreme avenue and conquer all realms!
Others have practiced hard for thousands of years just to gain access to magical powers. Chen Fei took a deep breath-- [Jishan breathing method, perfect! One thought destroys illusion, one anger buries the heavens. From the time I was a mortal, Step by step, build the supreme avenue and conquer all realms!
The plot is too cluttered, the plot is repeated endlessly, and the boxes are stacked endlessly. It's dry and looks very boring. Overall I'll give it 20-30 points.
9长生修仙,与龟同行
Running Squid
[Mortal Flow] [Pseudo Immortality] [Gou Dao Cultivation] [Slow Heat] Introduction to Chen Jianghe version: Chen Jianghe traveled to the world of immortal cultivators and became a fisherman and farmer in a cultivating immortal family. He accidentally exchanged lifespans with a spirit turtle. Not only does he have an extra spiritual pet, his lifespan is three times that of a monk at the same level. Therefore, Chen Jianghe was cautious in his words and deeds, avoided fights, made good friends, and steadily managed his path to immortality. Time flies, eras change, and the life of cultivating immortals is long. Chen Jianghe witnessed countless immortal supreme beings, demonic giants, unparalleled monsters, and evil cultivators, from their rise to their demise, disappearing in the long river of time. Only Chen Jianghe, the true king of Xuanwu, will live on forever and will never be destroyed. Introduction to the turtle version: "I was born with a disability and my lifespan is less than half of the same kind. Fortunately, I have a golden finger." "As long as I complete the task according to the instructions, I can get rewards, improve my cultivation, and increase my life span." "With this golden finger, I believe I will definitely cultivate the true form of the holy beast Xuanwu." "Okay, no more talking, I'm going to feed the fish."
[Mortal Flow] [Pseudo Immortality] [Gou Dao Cultivation] [Slow Heat] Introduction to Chen Jianghe version: Chen Jianghe traveled to the world of immortal cultivators and became a fisherman and farmer in a cultivating immortal family. He accidentally exchanged lifespans with a spirit turtle. Not only does he have an extra spiritual pet, his lifespan is three times that of a monk at the same level. Therefore, Chen Jianghe was cautious in his words and deeds, avoided fights, made good friends, and steadily managed his path to immortality. Time flies, eras change, and the life of cultivating immortals is long. Chen Jianghe witnessed countless immortal supreme beings, demonic giants, unparalleled monsters, and evil cultivators, from their rise to their demise, disappearing in the long river of time. Only Chen Jianghe, the true king of Xuanwu, will live on forever and will never be destroyed. Introduction to the turtle version: "I was born with a disability and my lifespan is less than half of the same kind. Fortunately, I have a golden finger." "As long as I complete the task according to the instructions, I can get rewards, improve my cultivation, and increase my life span." "With this golden finger, I believe I will definitely cultivate the true form of the holy beast Xuanwu." "Okay, no more talking, I'm going to feed the fish."
The first few chapters are very toxic. Every chapter is inseparable from feces and urine, which is purely disgusting. I felt sick after watching the beginning, so I'll give it 10-20 points.
10Immortal Mansion!
Xianxia仙府!
A Boat Full Of Light Dreams
[Farming stream] [Mortal stream] [Business stream] Ji Yuan traveled through the world of cultivating immortals, and although he was lucky enough to become an immortal cultivator, he also ended up working as a fisherman for the sect of cultivating immortals. With this start, he originally thought that he would probably only be able to follow the path of not being poor when he was young, poor when he was middle-aged, or poor when he was old. But I never thought that a building upgrade panel would be awakened unexpectedly. [Fish Pond Level 1: Fry growth speed +20%, semi-spiritual fish have a certain chance of evolving into spiritual fish] [Cave lv1: self-healing wall, basic dust-proof barrier, nighttime aura concentration +20%] [Chicken Coop lv1: Spiritual eggs are laid once a day, contain a trace amount of spiritual energy, and can prevent grains] [Pigsty lv1: The spirit dolphin gains 100 pounds of muscle in seven days, its flesh and blood contains body-tempering medicinal properties, and can accelerate wound healing] [Lingtian lv1: Crop cycle -30%, output contains weak wood spiritual energy] ...... From the most basic [Fish Pond] to the Immortal Realm [Alchemy Room] and [Item Refining Room], as long as they are Jiyuan buildings, they can all be upgraded. "Cultivation of immortality is not about fighting and killing, but about long-term vision." A few years later, the arrogance of heaven collapsed, the holy land decayed, and the great power fell. Only "Ji Tianzun" became immortal and will last forever.
[Farming stream] [Mortal stream] [Business stream] Ji Yuan traveled through the world of cultivating immortals, and although he was lucky enough to become an immortal cultivator, he also ended up working as a fisherman for the sect of cultivating immortals. With this start, he originally thought that he would probably only be able to follow the path of not being poor when he was young, poor when he was middle-aged, or poor when he was old. But I never thought that a building upgrade panel would be awakened unexpectedly. [Fish Pond Level 1: Fry growth speed +20%, semi-spiritual fish have a certain chance of evolving into spiritual fish] [Cave lv1: self-healing wall, basic dust-proof barrier, nighttime aura concentration +20%] [Chicken Coop lv1: Spiritual eggs are laid once a day, contain a trace amount of spiritual energy, and can prevent grains] [Pigsty lv1: The spirit dolphin gains 100 pounds of muscle in seven days, its flesh and blood contains body-tempering medicinal properties, and can accelerate wound healing] [Lingtian lv1: Crop cycle -30%, output contains weak wood spiritual energy] ...... From the most basic [Fish Pond] to the Immortal Realm [Alchemy Room] and [Item Refining Room], as long as they are Jiyuan buildings, they can all be upgraded. "Cultivation of immortality is not about fighting and killing, but about long-term vision." A few years later, the arrogance of heaven collapsed, the holy land decayed, and the great power fell. Only "Ji Tianzun" became immortal and will last forever.
Systematic writing, the plot is too vulgar, and the author thinks that the design is very original. For example, the protagonist's friend is not dead at all, but is easily accepted as a disciple by a powerful person, and the neighbor's daughter is directly the root of heaven. This is a very common plot. Overall I can give 30-40 points
11从须弥开始命格成圣
Send Dakang
(Both orders are 7,000, and progress has been made again. Welcome to read) This is a world where the body is nourished and the destiny is sanctified. The monks nourish the life element, seek the fire of life, and determine the fate pattern to seek longevity. Jing Qian has a good nature, but he is haunted by the aura of calamity. He can only stand up with a sword and form good relationships with ghosts, gods and demons. I only ask you fellow Taoists to lend me your vitality, give me your soul, be my firewood, and help me recast my destiny and achieve immortality. ... [Fate: Tide] Sing on the waves, dance on the tide! [Fate: Xumi] [A mustard seed contains Xumi, and a mote of dust hides a thousand things. [Fate: Tushita Furnace] Induced by false words, delighted in the joy of being rude. ... When the fire of fate burns my body, I am determined on the path, riding on the waves and singing, forging swords like dragons, stitching souls and weaving souls, tutu cauldrons, I carve my own stele to forge immortality. ... Nearly two million copies of Xianxia masterpieces have been completed. This book has been mentioned in Sanjiang, and it is pleased to be ranked first in the new book list of Xianxia. At that time, I was extremely inflated, and I realized that I had the Holy Body of Internet Literature, and I wanted to use my pen to preach. Little did he know that the sky was high and the book would collapse as soon as it was put on the shelf. I collected 30,000 and ordered a thousand for the first time. Only when the book was almost finished could it be regarded as a masterpiece. It was a waste of a great opportunity. The group sent him the nickname "Sanjiang Shame" and forced him to recommend his younger brother! This time I enter reincarnation again, I hope all fellow Taoists will support me!
(Both orders are 7,000, and progress has been made again. Welcome to read) This is a world where the body is nourished and the destiny is sanctified. The monks nourish the life element, seek the fire of life, and determine the fate pattern to seek longevity. Jing Qian has a good nature, but he is haunted by the aura of calamity. He can only stand up with a sword and form good relationships with ghosts, gods and demons. I only ask you fellow Taoists to lend me your vitality, give me your soul, be my firewood, and help me recast my destiny and achieve immortality. ... [Fate: Tide] Sing on the waves, dance on the tide! [Fate: Xumi] [A mustard seed contains Xumi, and a mote of dust hides a thousand things. [Fate: Tushita Furnace] Induced by false words, delighted in the joy of being rude. ... When the fire of fate burns my body, I am determined on the path, riding on the waves and singing, forging swords like dragons, stitching souls and weaving souls, tutu cauldrons, I carve my own stele to forge immortality. ... Nearly two million copies of Xianxia masterpieces have been completed. This book has been mentioned in Sanjiang, and it is pleased to be ranked first in the new book list of Xianxia. At that time, I was extremely inflated, and I realized that I had the Holy Body of Internet Literature, and I wanted to use my pen to preach. Little did he know that the sky was high and the book would collapse as soon as it was put on the shelf. I collected 30,000 and ordered a thousand for the first time. Only when the book was almost finished could it be regarded as a masterpiece. It was a waste of a great opportunity. The group sent him the nickname "Sanjiang Shame" and forced him to recommend his younger brother! This time I enter reincarnation again, I hope all fellow Taoists will support me!
The plot is okay in the early stage, but it sucks in the middle stage. If you cross too many levels and get instant kills, the logic slowly breaks down. I can give it 40-50 points.
12长生修仙,从画符开始
A Bowl Of Dumplings
[Mortal flow, proficiency, stability, and normal outlook] Lin Changan traveled through the world of Xianxia and became a casual cultivator who was unsuccessful in the Xianmen sect. After twenty years of hard training, when he was disheartened and ready to return to the mortal world to enjoy the wealth and wealth in the world, he awakened the proficiency panel. As long as you study hard and practice hard, you will succeed if you work hard. One certificate, forever! From now on, he is the master of talisman painting. ... "In the world of cultivating immortals, although spiritual roots are poor, there are still hundreds of skills in cultivating immortals. This enlightenment has created countless legendary monks. The most amazing person in the past five hundred years is none other than Lord Aoki, who was born with low-grade spiritual roots." Listening to the widely circulated legends in the world of immortality, Lin Changan couldn't help but feel filled with emotion. "I've been walking on thin ice my entire life, and it's all because of my talent that I've made it this far." ... Time goes by, eras change, witnessing the vicissitudes of life, and before he knows it, he has stood on the top of the immortal path, living as long as heaven and earth, and shining with the sun and the moon.
[Mortal flow, proficiency, stability, and normal outlook] Lin Changan traveled through the world of Xianxia and became a casual cultivator who was unsuccessful in the Xianmen sect. After twenty years of hard training, when he was disheartened and ready to return to the mortal world to enjoy the wealth and wealth in the world, he awakened the proficiency panel. As long as you study hard and practice hard, you will succeed if you work hard. One certificate, forever! From now on, he is the master of talisman painting. ... "In the world of cultivating immortals, although spiritual roots are poor, there are still hundreds of skills in cultivating immortals. This enlightenment has created countless legendary monks. The most amazing person in the past five hundred years is none other than Lord Aoki, who was born with low-grade spiritual roots." Listening to the widely circulated legends in the world of immortality, Lin Changan couldn't help but feel filled with emotion. "I've been walking on thin ice my entire life, and it's all because of my talent that I've made it this far." ... Time goes by, eras change, witnessing the vicissitudes of life, and before he knows it, he has stood on the top of the immortal path, living as long as heaven and earth, and shining with the sun and the moon.
The description of the battle lacks the essence of Gou Dao, and the plot is unreasonable. You have to pay taxes in the city, but there is no inspection. Jie Xiu can do anything in the alley (at the sixth or seventh level of Qi training) without fear of being discovered. The panel data is even more broken, the writing is rubbish, the sentences don't make sense, and there are many typos. The conclusion is that I can only give it 20-30 points, and it is not worth watching.
13移动城市种田指南
Feeder
[Lord] [Farming] [Exploration] [City War] Li Ye accidentally traveled to a wasteland world. Tide of zombies, mechanical life, mutated creatures, monster civilization... This world is far more dangerous than he imagined. The survivors rely on the magical [Mobile City] and gradually strengthen and build their own city to survive by collecting resources, recruiting talents, and hunting other [Mobile Cities]. While Li Ye was thinking about how to develop, the intelligence system quietly arrived. [1. There is a group of steel-blade hyenas looking for food 5 kilometers ahead, please avoid it. ][2. Tomorrow morning, a level 1 iron mine will be refreshed in the swamp, and it is expected that 452 units of ore can be mined. ][3. The Lord of the Conqueror is currently in urgent need of a batch of lava spider silk, and is willing to purchase it at a high price. ][4. The young man working in the maintenance shop in the lower city of Roland Fortress was once a gunner. ][5. On the edge of the Rotten Land, a convoy is trapped in a tide of corpses. ] Survive, farm, fight... On the wasteland, a small mobile city grew from scratch into a new civilization that stands tall in the world.
[Lord] [Farming] [Exploration] [City War] Li Ye accidentally traveled to a wasteland world. Tide of zombies, mechanical life, mutated creatures, monster civilization... This world is far more dangerous than he imagined. The survivors rely on the magical [Mobile City] and gradually strengthen and build their own city to survive by collecting resources, recruiting talents, and hunting other [Mobile Cities]. While Li Ye was thinking about how to develop, the intelligence system quietly arrived. [1. There is a group of steel-blade hyenas looking for food 5 kilometers ahead, please avoid it. ][2. Tomorrow morning, a level 1 iron mine will be refreshed in the swamp, and it is expected that 452 units of ore can be mined. ][3. The Lord of the Conqueror is currently in urgent need of a batch of lava spider silk, and is willing to purchase it at a high price. ][4. The young man working in the maintenance shop in the lower city of Roland Fortress was once a gunner. ][5. On the edge of the Rotten Land, a convoy is trapped in a tide of corpses. ] Survive, farm, fight... On the wasteland, a small mobile city grew from scratch into a new civilization that stands tall in the world.
If you like wasteland farming, you can check it out. The quality is poor and the logic is irrational. For example, two second-level mobile cities were beaten out of their wits and were killed by the protagonist. Regardless of the protagonist who is eyeing the first-level next to him, it is pure and simple. The description of the battle is not detailed and has no visual sense, it is purely relying on it. The conclusion is that if you are in a book shortage, you can check out the free section. Food and grass don't count, so I can give you 30-40 points.
14我的模拟长生路
Angry Squid
The path to immortality is so difficult! What's more, the world of immortality has been completely changed by a plague! Mortals are infected with diseases, and once immortals come into contact, their cultivation level will decrease at first, or return to the heaven at worst, so immortals and mortals will be separated forever; immortals cannot practice together, and the entire world of immortal cultivation has become a huge dark forest;... Li Fan came through time, and although he had great ambitions, he could only wallow in the mortal world and waste his life. Fortunately, when I was dying, I finally awakened to the strange treasure, which was able to turn truth into fiction, turn real life into a dream, and return to the time when I just traveled through time! Thus, Li Fan began his long journey of life! In the second life, Li Fan finally gained power over the world after fifty years, but he searched the world and found no trace of the fairy. Only at the end of life can we see traces of immortals. In the third life, Li Fan tried his best and planned in every possible way, but in the end he was no match for the immortal sword! The fourth life... I, Li Fan, am a mortal, I will never regret it, but I hope to live forever!
The path to immortality is so difficult! What's more, the world of immortality has been completely changed by a plague! Mortals are infected with diseases, and once immortals come into contact, their cultivation level will decrease at first, or return to the heaven at worst, so immortals and mortals will be separated forever; immortals cannot practice together, and the entire world of immortal cultivation has become a huge dark forest;... Li Fan came through time, and although he had great ambitions, he could only wallow in the mortal world and waste his life. Fortunately, when I was dying, I finally awakened to the strange treasure, which was able to turn truth into fiction, turn real life into a dream, and return to the time when I just traveled through time! Thus, Li Fan began his long journey of life! In the second life, Li Fan finally gained power over the world after fifty years, but he searched the world and found no trace of the fairy. Only at the end of life can we see traces of immortals. In the third life, Li Fan tried his best and planned in every possible way, but in the end he was no match for the immortal sword! The fourth life... I, Li Fan, am a mortal, I will never regret it, but I hope to live forever!
Before Chapter 1300, it's a combination of grain and grass + novel, with a reasonable layout and no traces of grass and snakes. The setting is also very novel. After 1300 chapters, the author just ran out of money, stacked boxes infinitely, and the character's image completely collapsed. There was no growth and he was incompetent and furious. Pure disgusting reader. The entire book is based on combat, even if there is no combat, and the author does not know how to write about combat. Counting the unfinished work in the later period, I can give you a grain of salt as a whole. I recommend you to read it after finishing this book. This author is chasing readers even more disgustingly. The content is repeated every day in the chapters, and he slowly changes it.