Immortal Mansion!

I had lunch a little early today. I felt a little sleepy after the meal and took a nap. I hope it doesn't rain. I was still drying the quilt outside.

The protagonist upgrades the rented house and property at the beginning. Isn't he afraid of being taken back?

Refining a building as a natal magic weapon

After reading some of this book, it's okay. There's one thing that makes it uncomfortable for people who like to read harem stories. I can accept that the author's writing style is not good and he can't write about men and women, so he doesn't write about it. Or he can write about a female protagonist but basically doesn't describe it very much. But you wrote about the male protagonist who has so many admiring female cultivators who have a good relationship with him. The second sister, Senior Sister Dong, and probably Wen Ling in the future, and then Senior Sister, Master, and then none of them are eaten. It's hard to give a bunch of far-fetched reasons. It's really just all kinds of flirting but not getting involved. The protagonist also laughs at other Taoists when they do it. Men are short-lived. No matter how short-lived a person is, he is still a man. You are not even a man. That thing can be cut off. If the immortal cultivator really breaks up with love, how can there be so many second-generation immortals in the cultivating immortal world? What kind of Jindan family, son of Yuanying? Forget it, maybe he is not compatible with me.

The character of the protagonist is just disgusting to watch. If you have sex, you just like to go out and have fun If I don't follow the right path, I will practice the Yin Qi Formation. If I practice puppets, I will practice corpse puppets. It's so scary to watch that it could crush the protagonist to death. The author also keeps saying that he writes about the fairy dream he longs for.

Can the author stop eating books? In Chapter 374, there are still more than 120 bottles of the Fountain of Youth, but the problem is that in Chapter 364, there are still 130 bottles! The protagonist got a total of 132 bottles and traded 2 bottles with the Li family. Moreover, this pirated copy of the Fountain of Youth states that drinking alcohol cannot improve your cultivation, and the protagonist cannot drink it himself, so there are still 130 bottles anyway! In Chapter 382, ​​Yao Tusha writes that the protagonist has 2 coins and 0.02 Taels! The author says that 1 tael is 10 and the money is 0.2 Taels, which is an extra 0! And the protagonist should have 1 catty and 3 coins! ? In Chapter 355, Xing Shuang gave the protagonist 1 gold. In Chapter 356, Ling Juexiao passed the level and took 1 money. After passing the level, he died and gave the protagonist the storage bag. The protagonist passed the level by himself and received 1 catty and 1 money. How come the protagonist has 1 catty and 3 money! How did the author calculate the 2 dollars! Please, the author, can you please stop eating books! If the reader sees the writing idea, can you change it? Author, do you want to force the readers?

Author, the title of the book is so good, why did you change it? The first title is a nod to what the entire novel is about.

A man who starts off cautiously and doesn't even want his wife, but in the blink of an eye can trust Qian Hai, a guy he only met once after crossing over? The protagonist just said hello to him after traveling through time. The author just wrote this, where did the brotherhood between the two of them come from? After a while, the protagonist will be able to fight the crushing game alone. It must be done like this

Why is it necessary to build a foundation by building a foundation pill? Is it impossible to become an immortal without a foundation pill?

It is a breath of fresh air in the mortal stream. The main line is very clear, but I have to mention the shortcomings here. The high-level monks came too early and too early. When the protagonist was still in the late stage of foundation building, he got involved in a large group of Nascent Souls. After all, there is no direct relationship, but Dong Qian's part is really meaningful. I don't know. I have inexplicably set myself a goal of refining the void. It's very tiring to watch like this. How long has this kind of plot in which the protagonist is ridiculed and then slapped in the face? If you say that you can beat back the protagonist Yuanying, it's better. It is reasonable to speculate that it will take a thousand chapters to reach the refining stage, right? I personally (and I believe most people) don't like to eat the pie. Instead of drawing a pie in more than two hundred chapters that will only be available in a thousand chapters in the future, it is better to let the protagonist focus on his own affairs and use less external description. In short, for the growth of the character, the goal of two or three realms is better for the readers. Reading interest has a certain driving effect and will make readers want to see what it is like when they reach Yuanying. However, if you inexplicably set a goal that is higher than five or six realms, especially in the context of the mortal stream where the realm is strictly set, it will only make readers feel tired. I will stop here. I hope the author sees it.