Rank•support Good Works

Fantasy + supernatural + Sherlock style detective elements. Well, the main character's name is Sherlock. When the dark wizard took Sherlock's body to sacrifice to the evil god, he pulled the protagonist's soul over, so the protagonist merged into Sherlock's body and became the agent of the evil god. There are only twenty chapters, and I won't introduce the plot. In short, it is a detective-style supernatural novel in a fantasy world. Defects The writing style is still good, but it needs continuous practice. Come to think of it, this kind of novel requires very high writing skills. The style must be stable. I am worried that it will turn into a struggle among gods for hegemony in the later stage. It is recommended to weaken the gods. They are just embellishments of the world's North Pole. No, I'll look at the author later.

The end of the world is coming, bloody killings, and the strong will survive. This book is about a young man who has been reborn. In his dream, he not only retains the memory of his past life, but he can also accurately predict the meteor falling in the capital of Shu. Therefore, he spreads "apocalyptic rumors" on the public Internet while actually seeking refuge from the government. Sure enough, the capital of Shu fell, with very few survivors. The dead mutated into night demons, animals evolved into monsters, and the capital of Shu became a purgatory on earth. In order to pursue the truth of the apocalypse and survive in the apocalypse, the protagonist improves his strength in the battle to kill the night demons. With the obsession of revenge in his previous life, he cooperates with the remaining army to explore the meteorite pit, subdue the abyssal beast, fight against alien races, and reveal the fortress conspiracy... Highlights of this book 1. The writing style is above average. Although there are many typos in the beginning, fortunately there are not many bad sentences. The plot is quite smooth after the fourth chapter (that is, the legendary "three chapters of seeking death", so capricious!); 2. The plot of the first volume is generally complete and highly readable, and there are still a lot of enjoyable moments; 3. The plot of the girl who feeds the night demon is undoubtedly the most exciting part of the book, and may also be the first breakthrough of the book. If it continues to be developed, it may become more attractive; 4. The war and fighting scenes are well controlled, the atmosphere has been rendered, and the picture is full of sense; 5. The new order, survival logic, and social relations of the end of the world have been initially established, and the world structure is considered complete. A few flaws 1. The first failure: the first time I met the commander, I was slightly outwitted, and the dialogue was awkward. The commander's IQ was not online and inconsistent with his identity. It can show the arrogance of the protagonist, but it should not be used to set off the commander's stupidity; 2. The second failure: the Qinglin Giant Beast suddenly changed from a scary monster to a little lolita, which is inherently scary and has a huge psychological gap. Moreover, it is named after Xiao Qing, so the dialogue does not matter, but the narrative may be more interesting if it is called Qinglin Beast; 3. The third failure: The plot of the gangster at the beginning of the second volume is too cliche and seriously demoralizing. It is purely an embarrassing plot of "Mr. Dee is really a god!"; 4. The author may not be too familiar with titles in the military. Colonel Zhang is wrong. He can be called Colonel directly, or he can be called Commander Zhang, Zhang Dabao, or Director Zhang, but he cannot be called Colonel Zhang; 5. Although talking to oneself and murmuring in dreams have an auxiliary narrative function, a few sentences or even long sentences from time to time not only make people feel irritated, but also destroy the integrity of the chapter, and can also cause mild drama; 6. In the second volume, the reason why the protagonist forms an alliance with Yang Chenjun and the armed police team is really baffling and unbelievable.

The four great classics, traditional martial arts, online games, traveling through another world, and system flow are all mixed together... This book tells the story of an adult who traveled through time and became a ten-year-old child. Due to being bullied by officials, his new parents died, and he was buried alive. This inadvertently triggered a bad luck system. The bad luck dolls he redeemed reminded me of the once-popular "Voodoo Dolls", which were meant to make others unlucky anyway. The next step is to upgrade the spiritual level, prepare to go to the Kamikaze Academy for further training through the ring, and at the same time lead to the suspense of the Luoshan Mine. What weird things will be hidden there? 2. Highlights of this book 1. I have strong writing skills. I have obviously read a lot of physical books. The Four Great Classics and Golden Liang and Wolong must be among them. The descriptions of environment, scenes, details and moves are very detailed; 2. The idea of making people unlucky, I don't know if it's new or not, it probably already exists, but if it can be controlled skillfully, it might be good; 3. Several characters have their own characteristics, such as the pitiful Hua Yan, Chu Bai who likes to steal and eat delicious food, the master master who likes gambling, the lustful Mr. Zhao... And the leaders of several major forces, they are all well portrayed. 3. Several flaws 1. The old problem is that the writing method of physical books has advantages and disadvantages. The long paragraphs of text are described in detail, which is incompatible with the online text. There is too much to express, and too little people have the patience to read; 2. The plot is really too old: I won't go into details to avoid spoilers... I don't know what the rest of the plot will be like, but the beginning is a bit discouraging anyway. 3. The existence of the bad luck system is too low, it is used too little, and there are too many side details. This really does not match the title of the book. It feels like there is a magic weapon that must be hidden away; 4. The pace is too slow and procrastinating. In fact, some popular books cost hundreds of thousands of dollars before leaving the novice village. But the key is to keep getting cool points one after another. You rely on fighting to accumulate cool points. For readers who are tired of traditional martial arts, they neither believe it nor feel happy. 5. I wrote it as a pretentious slap in the face, but it was not hard enough, not exciting enough, not interesting enough, and not surprising enough. A few modern jokes occasionally appeared in the article, but they were very forced and could not be let go at all. The car could not be driven, and the background was too heavy.