Bad Luck Bonus System

580,000 words, complete. The sky is as high as yours, and I have bad luck in my hands. I guarantee that you will be happy with your bad luck! "That genius over there, come and taste my bad luck!"

The four great classics, traditional martial arts, online games, traveling through another world, and system flow are all mixed together... This book tells the story of an adult who traveled through time and became a ten-year-old child. Due to being bullied by officials, his new parents died, and he was buried alive. This inadvertently triggered a bad luck system. The bad luck dolls he redeemed reminded me of the once-popular "Voodoo Dolls", which were meant to make others unlucky anyway. The next step is to upgrade the spiritual level, prepare to go to the Kamikaze Academy for further training through the ring, and at the same time lead to the suspense of the Luoshan Mine. What weird things will be hidden there? 2. Highlights of this book 1. I have strong writing skills. I have obviously read a lot of physical books. The Four Great Classics and Golden Liang and Wolong must be among them. The descriptions of environment, scenes, details and moves are very detailed; 2. The idea of making people unlucky, I don't know if it's new or not, it probably already exists, but if it can be controlled skillfully, it might be good; 3. Several characters have their own characteristics, such as the pitiful Hua Yan, Chu Bai who likes to steal and eat delicious food, the master master who likes gambling, the lustful Mr. Zhao... And the leaders of several major forces, they are all well portrayed. 3. Several flaws 1. The old problem is that the writing method of physical books has advantages and disadvantages. The long paragraphs of text are described in detail, which is incompatible with the online text. There is too much to express, and too little people have the patience to read; 2. The plot is really too old: I won't go into details to avoid spoilers... I don't know what the rest of the plot will be like, but the beginning is a bit discouraging anyway. 3. The existence of the bad luck system is too low, it is used too little, and there are too many side details. This really does not match the title of the book. It feels like there is a magic weapon that must be hidden away; 4. The pace is too slow and procrastinating. In fact, some popular books cost hundreds of thousands of dollars before leaving the novice village. But the key is to keep getting cool points one after another. You rely on fighting to accumulate cool points. For readers who are tired of traditional martial arts, they neither believe it nor feel happy. 5. I wrote it as a pretentious slap in the face, but it was not hard enough, not exciting enough, not interesting enough, and not surprising enough. A few modern jokes occasionally appeared in the article, but they were very forced and could not be let go at all. The car could not be driven, and the background was too heavy.

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