Careful and Meticulous; Unpopular Masterpiece; Excellent Writing Style; Sharp Criticism; Originality

[⭐⭐⭐⭐] [Infinite time travel] [Eunuch who died in infancy] [Hardcore fighting] [Ancient Martial Arts] [System Upgrade] [Fantasy and Supernatural] 〖Comprehensive score: 7 points〗 "Story narrative: 6 points" "Writing description: 9 points" "Cultural heritage: 7 points" "Ideological connotation: 4 points" "Characterization: 9 points" "World view composition: 8 points" "Creative topic opening: 6 points" "Though outline: 7 points" The main selling point of this book is the character design, which has the feel of ancient martial arts novels. He is free and upright, with three parts of evil spirit and seven parts of chivalry in his chest. The images of other supporting characters also have their own merits and are plump and three-dimensional. The power system is a quasi-fantasy system that combines the ancient Chinese mythology system and martial arts novels. It is somewhat creative but still within the framework of fantasy. Moreover, the author's control of "data" is not particularly good. He may want to add some elements to the book, but the effect is not ideal. The advantages and disadvantages are very obvious. The writing is excellent, the fighting is meticulous, and the rendering of the emotional environment is very good. It has the feeling of watching a movie. But the first world at the beginning is a bit discouraging, with a smell of old movies and a lot of dialects. And most importantly, this book! Too! Prison! Got it! (But there is also a tendency to fake corpses)

[⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐] [Fantasy World][Multiple Heroines] [Dystopia] [Light Novel] [Travel to Another World] [Serialized] 〖Comprehensive score: 7.75 Points〗 "Story narrative: 8 points" "Writing description: 8 points" "Cultural heritage: 7 points" "Ideological connotation: 7 points" "Characterization: 8 points" "World view composition: 8 points" "Creative topic opening: 9 points" "Though outline: 7 points" A very interesting and novel world view design and writing method, which integrates the world view setting of the unpopular mythology system, with golden fish, golden river, ruby mountain, and the protagonist wearing a different world. Going on adventures with the heroine in the "virtual realm" has some elements of heroic invincibility. But the main body is still a fantasy system text. At the same time, the "realistic" adventure of the protagonist is also quite interesting. The writing is solid, the supporting characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the pace is tight and not too clumsy, but it is not too fast or too hasty, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed (here I will name and criticize Dao Wei), which ensures the tension while also not lacking in short plot inserts to relax and expand the world view. It is also a novel with quite obvious advantages and disadvantages, compared with the anti-Utopia-themed country in the early and middle stages (the first two worlds). In the later period, not only did the pace of virtual and realistic descriptions collapse slightly (Criticizing Senluo by name), the protagonist and the new, unlikable female supporting character Niwai, the originally interesting dream bubbles that could be used in close-up (it's great that each bubble can be used as an infinite text to insert into the frame of a short story) were simply brushed off, and 90% of it was focused on the description of "reality". But it is a pity that compared to the previous two dystopian worlds, Senluo is not only quite tacky in terms of world view, but also has little development in the plot. But it is worth mentioning that the images of the supporting characters have been further completed and sublimated. It's a pity that the protagonist's image is still like that of Japanese casual light novels, with high and low quotient, and the image is not very likable. (This is a deduction point) However, in the fourth chapter of World of Stars, the above problems have been significantly improved. Although it is still not as good as the beginning, it is still gratifying and gratifying🎉.

Hanging on for now, I haven't read this book for a while. I'll review it when I have time.

[⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐] Let's fatten up first and then comment on it, but out of trust in the level of big eyes, I'll give it six stars first.

[⭐⭐⭐] [Unique Style] [Hardcore Technology] [Leisure Paddling] [Infinite Class] [History Travel] 〖Comprehensive score: 6 points〗 "Story narrative: 4 points" "Writing description: 4 points" "Cultural heritage: 10 points" "Ideological connotation: 8 points" "Characterization: 5 points" "World view composition: 5 points" "Creative topic opening: 7 points" "Though outline: 5 points" It is a novel with a very personal style. Its biggest feature is that it is filled with a huge number of links to papers and mathematical formulas. (Don't look at high numbers and run fast!) The author is very particular about the time, place, and characters of the time travel, and even consults papers. Overall, both the author's operation and the novel itself are too hardcore. The protagonist's behavior is to travel to the side of historical greats, and leverage the key points of history through his own influence. The butterfly effect and science popularization effect caused by this is quite good. However, the shortcomings are also quite serious. As an online novel, there are many disastrous problems, such as boring supporting characters, tacky settings, a dog that is cowardly and not very interesting, the writing style is quite amateurish, and the story narration is also quite average. If you really like this style, this book is quite good. If you just want to read normal online articles, I don't recommend getting into it.

[⭐⭐⭐⭐] [Western Fantasy Continent] [Magic World] [Leisure Paddling] [Light novel] [Farming development] [Travel to another world] 〖Comprehensive score: 6.5 Points〗 "Story narrative: 6 points" "Writing description: 6 points" "Cultural heritage: 6 points" "Ideological connotation: 5 points" "Characterization: 8 points" "World view composition: 8 points" "Creative topic opening: 5 points" "Though outline: 8 points" This is a novel that observes the development of the story in the western fantasy world from the perspective of a powerful mage (simply put, very powerful) who is blessed by nature. The story rhythm in the early stage is very tight, but the rhythm in the later stage is as dull as water. The author's understanding of DND is quite deep and extensive, and the creation of the worldview is very similar to DND. It can be seen that he has searched a lot of information. At the same time, there are many characters with various thoughts. The shrewd characters are really shrewd, and there is no forced supporting role for mentally retarded characters. The outline is relatively rigorous, with foreshadowing running through the entire article. But the shortcomings are also obvious. The pace in the later stages is too slow. There are very few protagonists in the plot. The descriptions are not eye-catching. There is nothing in the plot that can make people think deeply. Overall, it is similar to the Western Fantasy World Instant Noodles. If you like Western fantasy themes and have the patience to slowly enjoy the story, you can give it a try, otherwise I don't recommend it.

Well... This is a novel that I followed many years ago. From my point of view at the time, it was a good book. Later, because it was discontinued, I never read it and it has always been on my bookshelf. Let's leave it here for now, and I'll read it again when I get a ticket later and then write a detailed review.

[⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐] [Western Fantasy Continent][Magic World][Heroes Return] [Industrial Revolution][Farming Development][Completed] 〖Comprehensive score: 9.25 Points〗 "Story narrative: 10 points" "Written description: 9 points" "Cultural heritage: 10 points" "Ideological connotation: 10 points" "Characterization: 10 points" "World view composition: 9 points" "Creative topic opening: 7 points" "Though outline: 9 points" There is no need to go into too much detail about the big-eyed book, from the sect-level worldview concept that started in the first book Xiling Empire, to the subsequent unusual worldview supplements, and then to the new development of this Sword of Dawn. Compared with the previous two parts, the style of Sword of Dawn has changed a lot. In the overall relatively serious writing style, a few lines of cold humor are often inserted at the right time, which makes people smile knowingly but is not as nonsensical as Xiling and Abnormal. Excellent balance of humor and seriousness. The content is impeccable, relatively flat but each has its own characteristics, and there are an extremely large number of NPC supporting characters. The few sentences that can touch people's hearts, the sophisticated writing skills, the unique style accumulated in many books, and the core connotation that make people think and remember make this book a T0-level work with a small starting point. Overall, this book is more mature and realistic than other time-traveling novels. Reform requires death, and bloodshed and sacrifices are required on the road. And the protagonist positions himself very correctly. Believing in the wisdom of people from other worlds, all I have to do is emancipate their minds and guide them with the successful experiences of future generations. Compared with other works of the same type, which are full of elite ideas, I prefer the mass view of history expressed in this book. The only shortcoming is that compared to other aspects of the book, the creativity is not particularly outstanding, and due to the length and group portrait description, the character creation is relatively flat, but it is still far above the average level, and the flaws are not concealed. All things considered, this book is worth a try and highly recommended.

[⭐⭐⭐⭐] [Cyberpunk][Urban Future] [Science Fiction Cultivation][Complete] 〖Comprehensive score: 7.375 Points〗 "Story narrative: 7 points" "Writing description: 6.5 Points" "Cultural heritage: 7 points" "Ideological connotation: 6.5 Points" "Characterization: 7 points" "World view composition: 6 points" "Creative topic opening: 10 points" "Though outline: 9 points" The story takes place in a future world with a cyberpunk worldview, where technology is extremely advanced and almost magical, large companies monopolize resources, oligarchs control the world, and the bottom resources are basically satisfied but spiritually deficient. The protagonist, as an ordinary person who traveled from the "past" to the "present", starts from the bottom and climbs up step by step through agency calculations and chance coincidences. One of the main selling points of this book is the creativity of blending martial arts fantasy and cyberpunk. Why martial arts? Hammer the tendons, forge the bones, train the skin, and wash the inside. Nothing more than this. Nano-muscles, alloy bones, super-textile skin, high-energy-supply internal organs. Implanting a cybernetic body into one's body, isn't it a kind of martial arts practice? And what is the secret mind method? It is nothing more than repeated behaviors in a certain order and train of thought. So what is the difference between it and the prosthetic body running program? Starting from this idea, what is the difference between reshaping consciousness into data and uploading it to the Internet and ascension? Immortal, fleeting, thousands of miles, and incarnations. The magnetic fluid flying sword has hundreds of millions of changes, supplemented by hundreds of billions of carefully designed orbits. How is it worse than the sword fairy? Pointing to heaven, using orbiting satellites to assist in calculations, isn't it a kind of invitation to God? Taking big data as the core, supplemented by global Internet cameras, detailed and complete personal information. Isn't the super artificial intelligence that rationally judges everything and can use satellites to impose sanctions the "way of heaven" in Xianxia novels? People are doing it, God is watching #physics There is a god at the top of your head #Physics Those who do evil will surely die #Physics The author re-created (revived) The Six Arts of the Gentleman and The Diamond Sutra. In extreme cases, it is both carefully thought out and extremely reasonable. This combination of creativity will undoubtedly brighten the eyes of readers who have become tired of looking at too many industrial mass-produced works. At the same time, the author's outline is extremely thorough and rigorous, which is extremely rare in online articles. Implement the main plot of the entire article. The detailed foreshadowing echoes everywhere, and the meticulous thought that must be filled in when digging holes. Undoubtedly, the entire article is tightly screwed together and inseparable. To avoid spoilers, no further details will be given here. The third advantage is the author's cognitive understanding of "cyberpunk". It is obvious that the author has a considerable degree of preparation, understands the spiritual connotation of the cyberpunk style, and actually embodies it. It truly depicts a lucky bottom who survives all kinds of calculations from the top, rather than an Aotian who breaks the sky with one sword. And the author's poignant comments on the operation of social capital in the middle and later stages are also an excellent bonus. Of course, the shortcomings of this book are also quite obvious. It has an interesting world view but it is not developed. Moreover, as a web novel, the pace is too slow, the interludes are too long, and the protagonist is frustrated along the way, which all led to the book being thrown off the street # sigh