
Cyber sword Fairy 2121
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Cyberpunk that is neither cyber nor punk. New book "Alien City"
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Such an average book scored 9.9, It tricked me into being addicted... There are more than 400 chapters and only 15 comments, all 5 stars, they are all brushes, right?
It feels very average. The 9.9 Rating is probably fake.
Looking forward to the follow-up😘
Characters, Plot The author has really brought out the characters. The lines of each character are intertwined and interwoven, creating a feeling of a stage play in a small scene. Moreover, he has absolute control over each main character, which is not available in most other online novels. Not to mention that this article is still in the first person. Maybe this is an article with an outline! Setting Before looking at the details of the content, setting is the main factor that attracts people to read on. The combination of cyber, immortality, Jiu Ge and other elements are very reasonable, and the writing has that flavor. It's a pity that Da Luotian's role is outside the main plot, and the online world is also a part of cyberspace. There is also the role of the policewoman, whose motivation to help the male protagonist is not very reasonable, and it always feels like a deus ex machina. A pure sense of justice? The pursuit of justice? It feels like I have directly crossed over many people to become friends with the male protagonist and help him. This may not be a problem in other texts, but it is very abrupt when compared with other parts of this book, and the female police officer cannot be ignored and interferes with many main plots. The female police officer is not like the three spears or the old military doctor, who have profit motives and are purely tool people and NPCs. I have just written about the policewoman's dream, and I look forward to the author's follow-up. Update soon.
Abandoned the book, the author's scientific literacy really needs to be improved.
From adrenochrome to extracting bone marrow, which will lead to excessive blood loss, I found that the author lacked basic knowledge of biochemistry and medicine. It was ridiculous, just like a drama, and there was also a kind of prejudice, as if doctors or scientific researchers often conduct dark human experiments. If you say this is a setting, it is quite outrageous. Moreover, the philosophical discussion it writes is quite awkward. It takes up half a chapter and only a few paragraphs without any depth. It seems to be very in-depth, but in fact it is very commonplace and really unnecessary.
It's really outrageous that the rating is so high.
Is it a related account?
Writing science fiction at least has some scientific literacy
Adrenochrome and other outrageous rumors have been used as setting
Why does it look so much like Apocalypse?
Outrageous, really. I guess the comment will be deleted and charged soon.
Outrageous, really. I guess the comment will be deleted and charged soon.
Great writing
The author depicts the characters very well, the writing is smooth, and the interpretation of multiple personalities has brought the characters to life, and also brought out the flavor of technological fantasy. You can tell at a glance that the author has worked hard, and then there is the plot characterization. In addition to the previous things, The female police officer seemed to go with the flow and was not abrupt at all. I was surprised by the change in the male protagonist's personality, which made people suddenly emerge from the picture. I like the feeling that a painting has 180 angles, and the veil is slowly unveiled in front of you from every angle. I really like it, highly recommend it!
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Official(29)Scraped 22d ago
Did the author delete the comment?
Such an average book scored 9.9, It tricked me into being addicted... There are more than 400 chapters and only 15 comments, all 5 stars, they are all brushes, right?
It feels very average. The 9.9 Rating is probably fake.
Looking forward to the follow-up😘
Characters, Plot The author has really brought out the characters. The lines of each character are intertwined and interwoven, creating a feeling of a stage play in a small scene. Moreover, he has absolute control over each main character, which is not available in most other online novels. Not to mention that this article is still in the first person. Maybe this is an article with an outline! Setting Before looking at the details of the content, setting is the main factor that attracts people to read on. The combination of cyber, immortality, Jiu Ge and other elements are very reasonable, and the writing has that flavor. It's a pity that Da Luotian's role is outside the main plot, and the online world is also a part of cyberspace. There is also the role of the policewoman, whose motivation to help the male protagonist is not very reasonable, and it always feels like a deus ex machina. A pure sense of justice? The pursuit of justice? It feels like I have directly crossed over many people to become friends with the male protagonist and help him. This may not be a problem in other texts, but it is very abrupt when compared with other parts of this book, and the female police officer cannot be ignored and interferes with many main plots. The female police officer is not like the three spears or the old military doctor, who have profit motives and are purely tool people and NPCs. I have just written about the policewoman's dream, and I look forward to the author's follow-up. Update soon.
Abandoned the book, the author's scientific literacy really needs to be improved.
From adrenochrome to extracting bone marrow, which will lead to excessive blood loss, I found that the author lacked basic knowledge of biochemistry and medicine. It was ridiculous, just like a drama, and there was also a kind of prejudice, as if doctors or scientific researchers often conduct dark human experiments. If you say this is a setting, it is quite outrageous. Moreover, the philosophical discussion it writes is quite awkward. It takes up half a chapter and only a few paragraphs without any depth. It seems to be very in-depth, but in fact it is very commonplace and really unnecessary.
It's really outrageous that the rating is so high.
Is it a related account?
Writing science fiction at least has some scientific literacy
Adrenochrome and other outrageous rumors have been used as setting
Why does it look so much like Apocalypse?
Outrageous, really. I guess the comment will be deleted and charged soon.
Outrageous, really. I guess the comment will be deleted and charged soon.
Great writing
The author depicts the characters very well, the writing is smooth, and the interpretation of multiple personalities has brought the characters to life, and also brought out the flavor of technological fantasy. You can tell at a glance that the author has worked hard, and then there is the plot characterization. In addition to the previous things, The female police officer seemed to go with the flow and was not abrupt at all. I was surprised by the change in the male protagonist's personality, which made people suddenly emerge from the picture. I like the feeling that a painting has 180 angles, and the veil is slowly unveiled in front of you from every angle. I really like it, highly recommend it!
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In fact, I saw a book on the same subject last year called Cyber Cultivation 2077, which was quite interesting, but it was a eunuch. Fortunately, this one is also good. Come on, the author. The good thing about this book is that the stories are coherent and intertwined. Fortunately, the author is really passionate about the word cyber. There is understanding and content. Fortunately, the setting is layered. I personally think it is in-depth. Cultivation 2077 is more about fantasy, cyber-style madness and humor. This book has some sci-fi imagination of the cyber background, and more and more delicate stories about ethics and human nature.




I caught up with the paid chapters in one go and it was surprisingly good!




Apart from another popular cyberpunk book in recent times, it is the most "authentic" cyberpunk book. The first chapter is very well written, echoing from beginning to end, making it enjoyable. There is a lot of humor in the writing. What makes me personally uncomfortable is that the power system has not been fully developed. The protagonist of the previous 200,000 words basically relies on intelligence, and has not really begun to practice his own power and enter the theme. I hope the level will not drop in the future. 9.5/10
















