I'm Just Afraid of Forgetting Which Books I've Read

The more I read this book, the more interesting it becomes. It is wise and not perfunctory. Let me focus on: 1. The heroine died soon after she appeared. She remained hanging until the end. Well, this is an innovation, and there are not so many tired children in Taoism, which is really good. Because the emotional descriptions of some immortal cultivators are simply unreadable, this evasive approach in this book is actually very responsible. 2. Switching maps too frequently. Continuously jumping between maps, first of all, the continuity of the plot is not very good. The connection between the maps mainly depends on the protagonist's cultivation progress and thoughts or force majeure, which is a bit far-fetched. Secondly, there is a feeling of completing dungeons and picking up treasures. When you can jump to the map, frequent map jumping seems too purposeful and lacks a sense of life. In addition, the heroes of other characters are not so three-dimensional.

Stomach hurts from laughing

Yes, this is the book I want to recommend most. At first, I was intrigued by the title of the old book, and started to fall in love with it. But after a quick look, I realized that it was too serious! The key is to be very serious! I think this is the most satisfying book I have read so far! Although the author has been ill recently, lacks motivation, and has slowed down production, I, like many other book fans, rely on reading existing chapters over and over again to survive! Just because it's great enough! The theme is clear enough, obsession! So this book had a soul from the beginning. The details are the biggest highlight, especially the process of the protagonist creating moves and upgrading. It is not a natural process of increasing mana and understanding, but it is out of sync with mana. If power is the material foundation, then realm and moves are the superstructure. The opposition and unity between the two are clearly reflected in the contradictions and conflicts. In particular, the creation of moves is based on the protagonist's personal experience and insights. It has a strong personal characteristic and subjective color. It is completely different from other works that blindly comprehend the natural way, copy a section of the Tao Te Ching, and then obtain skill points. Well, let's talk about some shortcomings. For now, the traces of brushing copies and stallions are a bit too much. Especially in the dungeon, the process of defeating monsters one after another, upgrading equipment and capturing beauties at the same time, might be a bit too much? I feel like the plot doesn't have enough differentiation. However, after meeting Sword Ancestor, the author's carefulness and wisdom can also be seen by using "many smiling faces" to cover the previous copies and stallions!

It's funny and the plot is exciting. It's just that the opportunity to reach the state of freedom in the end was not explained clearly, and it felt like it ended in a hurry, but the overall plot was still very good. It's just that the language needs polishing, various inappropriate wordings, and the repeated use of "immortals" really make people complain!

It's a good book, but I really didn't like the ending!

The plot is good. In the early stage, it was a bit stiff, and the various strategies and layouts felt a bit stiff, and there was a sense of being able to see through them, and it felt like imposing an aura of intelligence, but it got better later on.

Funny, not coquettish, not watery word count is a virtue