Shenmen

The content is good, and the plot is okay, but I don't have enough book money. The protagonist's handling of each one is quite strong, with a classical Chinese personality and a bit of literature, not bad! ! ? ? ?

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The first few chapters were okay for me to read, but when I turned fifteen, the whole flavor changed and it was hard to read. Especially when it came to the Taoist examination, the writing was just like his meow play. Since fantasy power is written into it. Will the examiner be like ordinary people and not know that you are cheating without seeing you? This is obviously the beginning of a novice's level of writing. Although the previous writing is not rigorous, it is still okay. Why did it suddenly become a piece of writing? There is still something to read.

Recently, there was a girl named Yang in the city who was selling her body to bury her father. The prince passed by and bought her for a simple purpose - the family lacked a servant to sweep the house. As a result, less than a night later, the girl escaped during the night. Prince Wang couldn't figure it out: Why did she run away? Butler: Immortal dance, young master. Prince Wang: Is she a fairy? Butler: No, it means you were cheated. The girl had been cheated all the way by selling her body to bury her father, and she never failed. She escaped from the city and was about to go to the next city to play fairy dance. She was knocked unconscious within two steps of leaving the city gate. When she woke up, she returned to the Wang family. Prince Wang sat opposite her with a gentle expression: You... Before he could speak, the girl burst into tears: Master, I know I was wrong. I just want to show my father the cemetery... Prince Wang was embarrassed: That's it. Prince Wang was a good man and continued to let her stay and work. At night, Miss Yang planned to escape again. As she was trying to turn outwards, she saw Mr. Wang standing on the wall and thought she had seen a ghost. Miss Yang screamed and fell down, but was caught by him. Prince Wang: What? Didn't you see a satisfactory cemetery last night? Miss Yang knew she was meeting a master this time. Immediately, he knelt down and said, "I am blind and cannot recognize Mount Tai. It turns out that the young master is a Jianghu man!" Miss Yang is an orphan who has grown up struggling. In this world, there are not many options for orphans. They must either become a monk, become a maid, sell themselves, or do hard work. She wants to break into the world. So I relied on immortals to jump all the way to the south, hoping to go to Mount Emei. Prince Wang: Why do you want to go to Mount Emei to perform Immortal Dance? Housekeeper: Master, she means that she wants to become a female disciple of the Emei Sect. As for why it is the Emei sect, it is because the girl was saved by a master of the Emei sect when she was a child, and she has been yearning for him ever since. Relying on the immortal dance is not an option. Prince Wang said, how about you stay at my house as a sweeper, save up your wages, and then go to Emei when you have enough money. In this way, you don't have to lie to others or pretend to be a dead father. Wouldn't it be nice? Miss Yang was alert. She thought so at first, but the man who bought her revealed his true colors on the first night. Mr. Wang didn't know what to say: Forget it, you can do whatever you want... Girl: At this time, wouldn't you tell me "Don't be afraid, I'm a good person"? Mr. Wang: Good people generally don't emphasize that they are good people. But Miss Yang stayed. Working in the Wang family is not bad, every day is fine, and the prince behaves well. He lived a simple life, reading some miscellaneous books, sitting by the pool in a daze, and going out to discuss business. Miss Yang couldn't help but ask: You are so good at kung fu, don't you want to go out and make a career in the world? Prince Wang smiled: Is Jianghu fun? It's definitely more fun than begging for food on the street! The girl told him vividly and vividly about the stories she had heard about rivers and lakes, and she told him for most of the day. There are only a few people in the Wang family, and no one usually talks to the young master. It is rare that a lively Miss Yang comes here, and the house is not so boring. It was time to go out to discuss business, but Mr. Wang listened intently until Miss Yang finished speaking before going out. Late at night, Miss Yang was called up and told to "go help." When I went to the backyard, I saw blood on the ground. A man fell next to a dry well with his head dismembered. Mr. Wang was wiping the blood on the Tang knife in his hand. He was very embarrassed and said, "Please help me clean it up." Sorry, it usually doesn't happen like this... Miss Yang was confused. Prince Wang: Don't be afraid. We usually kill people for money. This person is a traitor in the house and was expelled just now. The Wang family is a life-buying family in the world. It is a black and white family. It is a private and official family. As long as they can afford it, they will do business for anyone. Miss Yang locked herself in the room and refused to come out again. The young master said outside her house, if you want to enter the world, killing someone is inevitable. There are vendettas, casualties, and life-buying. You can't break out of the world if you lock yourself in it. Miss Yang didn't open the door, so he stood for a while and then left. At night, she secretly pushed the door open, trying to get out and run away. Under the moonlight, the prince sat on the wall again. Miss Yang froze there, not daring to move. Prince Wang looked as gentle as ever: Just go. Girl: Are you going to keep silent? Mr. Wang: Everyone in the world knows that the Wang family is a family that buys lives, so there is nothing to keep silent about. Prince Wang smiled: It's okay if you leave. If you stay there for a long time, you will become trapped like me. Prince Wang gave her a hand and let her fly safely outside the mansion. He said, you go away and make your way into the world, taking my share with you. Later, the girl went to Emei. There are many disciples of the Emei sect, who practice Kung Fu and run errands every day. The girl recalled that the prince once listened to her tell stories about rivers and lakes. He knew from beginning to end that she was just making it up, but he listened to it all with a smile. She is the only one who can talk about the world with him, and he is the only one who likes the world she talks about. One night, the girl was sleeping soundly when someone suddenly covered her mouth. Prince Wang was by her side. Prince Wang: It's nothing. I was passing by and came to see you. Just take one look and leave. He's leaving. But Miss Yang always felt uneasy. She followed him to the mountain gate: What's wrong with you? Why did you come to see me suddenly? Prince Wang sat down on the stone steps of the mountain gate: I suddenly wanted to hear your story. The house was too stuffy and no one told me that. She was too embarrassed to tell any more nonsense: you already knew it was false. Prince Wang: But you are serious. His eyes were very bright and beautiful in the moonlight, and he looked at her with a smile. Miss Yang sat down next to him: At this time, you should tell me, "Don't go into the world, come with me"! Prince Wang smiled bitterly, wondering where she learned the words. Miss Yang: Tell me quickly! Prince Wang said this and she laughed. But he looked at her and said again: If you follow me, your world will be around me. Miss Yang stopped laughing: Really? Prince Wang: I lied to you. My world is a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood. You can't follow me. The prince is gone. Miss Yang shouted at his back: If it is true, I will really go with you - I will not go into the world! Let's go to the sea together! After a few years, she was able to go down the mountain to practice, so she first went to Wang's house to find him. But the prince was gone, and the housekeeper accompanied another new head of the house to see her. --The prince was purged a few years ago. He took over the business of assassinating the head of the Emei sect, but he didn't do it. He came back to kill him himself. The body was thrown into the dry well according to the rules. The girl went to see him for the last time and looked at him for a long time at the mouth of the well. They couldn't figure out what she was looking at. Only she knew that she was looking at her world.

The biggest flaw of the entire book is the heroine in the novel

Author, you have to tell the truth. Did you learn from Confucianism and Taoism? You have to be honest!

I don't want to give a high score. It was okay just now, but the more I look at the pig's feet, the more useless I am. I was abused by girls, by Chi Guyan, by the young demon master, by the master of the Shadow Sect, by the princess, and for hundreds of chapters. What do you think? ? ?

The power system haha, the background settings haha, the character settings are extreme, the same person forcibly changes their IQ, when it is low, he looks like a fool, and when it is high, he plots against everyone. I have read hundreds of chapters, and there is intrigue throughout the process. The character level upgrade is unknown, and it all depends on the author forcibly improving it. Change the subject, you are not suitable for fantasy.

You can tell in just one chapter that this book is not good. First: the character of the protagonist is not good. In ancient times, meat was very precious and could only be eaten during festivals. The current standards for stealing chickens are similar to stealing cars. Second: Can a five-year-old beat a cock? Don't be afraid and don't know what the three rural hegemons are. Third: God can see at the age of five that it will bring disaster to the country and the people. Are you future-sighted? Fourth: If you meet a person who can break a big rock with one palm, will you kick him into the water? Especially since you can only move in a small area. Don't mention children. Children don't distinguish between good and evil. Especially in ancient times, human life is not valuable to wealthy people. It's not too much to break your legs.

How can I put it, the male protagonist has a fatal weakness that he will do whatever it takes for a beautiful woman. Even if the woman will definitely kill the male protagonist and his brother, the protagonist will still not hurt a woman, and will only kill the male. The whole story basically revolves around several beauties constantly killing the protagonist, destroying the protagonist's homeland, killing his parents, killing his brothers, killing everyone around him, constantly provoking wars, and then the protagonist rescues and releases the beauties again and again regardless of the lives of his brothers and parents. The women have never been hurt in any way. Even if the woman stabs the protagonist's heart with a knife, she still thinks about how to eat some tofu. Well, that's one weakness.