Test Poison and Eliminate Mines [Available on the Main Female Channel Website]

Seriously OOC, I don't even understand the basic settings of the original work. The character's name is misspelled, Greedens is written as Gladden, and Butterbeer is written as wine instead of wine. The opening chapter is simply a series of poison point critical hits. Not to mention the protagonist's various dances and performances, Dumbledore's reason for not using Legilimency turned out to be that "his intuition told him not to do that"... Goldfinger is inexplicable.

The setting is very novel. In the early stage, the Dark Magic Defense Professor is Death's Truant Diary Sigma, which is very amazing. The character's personality and jokes are all very stable, and I even thought that the author was a top student. I checked through various channels, but couldn't get any relevant information. The shortcoming is that when it comes to the introduction of LOL heroes, it favors writing methods that use third-party complaints and jokes, which is difficult for people who are not familiar with LOL-related memes to understand. And the writing technique of frequent interludes and flashbacks in multiple chapters makes it very jumpy to read and the plot is incoherent, making it very tiring for readers to understand the sequence and logic of the unfolding of events. I didn't want to use my brain when reading novels, so I gave up.

It ends in an anticlimax and ends in a hurry. The early setting is very good, the biologist wears baby clothes, and the Muggle born joins Hufflepuff... All very reasonable. Becoming a top student is based on a smart mind, the integration of knowledge and diligent practice. The three views are very correct. Some people say that the protagonist was too stubborn in the early stage, but considering his background and age, he was able to get by. The more problematic point is the lack of emotional description and foreshadowing, and sometimes the progress seems abrupt and inexplicable. The heroine's possessiveness, jealousy, and yandere lines in the later period were also not natural enough, making her less likable. Personally, I don't like the way the female protagonist becomes sour in the later stages. She cannot help the male protagonist at all, and is not considerate of the male protagonist. She will only complain that the male protagonist does not accompany her, and she is jealous many times and interrupts the normal interactions between the male protagonist and other female characters. Then there are some things that could be expanded and written, but I didn't continue. I'm really looking forward to the plot of the male protagonist inheriting GGAD's changes and saving the magical world, but it hasn't been developed in detail yet. Only the rules of Quidditch were changed, and the integration of technology and magic was only mentioned briefly, so it was considered unfinished. As for the changes to the plot of the original work, the author was too obsessed with changing the apparent plot line. He only saved some characters who would die in the original work, which filled the regrets of the original work. From a look and feel point of view, it lacked its own plot characteristics and lowered expectations for plot changes.

The setting is pretty good. Updates are unstable.

A female channel can serialize more than 2,000 chapters of farming articles, so you can imagine how embarrassing it is. The pacing is slow, the villains jump around repeatedly, and various villains are introduced to add to the plot, but the routines of all villains are very similar. Xiaobai Mary Su Wen, you need to be careful when entering the trap.

After reading the beginning, I can see that the writing style is very different from that of Red Mansion, and it's a bit out of place. The integration of the protagonist and the original character is not enough, and the original character is out of character. It seems to be the author's early work, so it is not recommended to get into it.

I ordered this book in full, but was very disappointed in the end. The writing style is humorous and joyful, and the characters have their own characteristics. I don't know what happened to the author, but it ended so suddenly that he was a eunuch. The pitfalls buried in the early stage have only been roughly explained, and the endings of many characters have not been explained. It's very anticlimactic.

The introduction is very attractive, the author has many works, and the quality is guaranteed. The shortcomings are that the plot rhythm is slow and the word count is quite serious. The villain and supporting character repeatedly jumped around, which greatly affected the mood of reading, so I abandoned the plot.