Abandoned Book Diary

Abandoned Book Chapter 7 Popular books Write EDG and black EDG! Every chapter is dark, from players to coaches. The author also has a strange God's perspective. He feels that the protagonist is not respected even though he has a system. Everyone in EDG is really XX😯 It may be a book specially written for EDG black fans, and there are hundreds and dozens of monthly passes. I have to admire the author's money-making thinking, making money by relying on black fans, 666

Abandoned Book Chapter Commentary Chapter Weird author, one Readers questioned the logic of the plot, and the author replied, "Do you really understand that I have to talk about logic when writing a bird novel?" Readers questioned the protagonist's dog-licking behavior, and the author replied, "I think as long as you fall in love with someone, you will become a dog-licking person." If you can tolerate the above two, maybe you can check it out 😂

Abandoned Book Chapter 5 In order to create a conflict, a bunch of unreasonable settings are set, which the author calls foreshadowing. In order to realize the frustrating result of the conflict, the collective wisdom is reduced and the character's personality is changed. The author calls it "you gain wisdom after every experience, my god." In fact, this is still a small problem. When a reader raised doubts, the author actually showed an attitude of "I like to read, but don't look away"? I remember that the author was quite modest in his last book. Could it be that his personality has changed drastically due to being criticized?

Abandoned Book Chapter 57 A story that takes Chinese gods through the Western fantasy world. To be honest, the IQ ceiling is too low. I gritted my teeth and looked down, but ended up dying of poison in Chapter 57. I couldn't persist. I don't even know whether to shoot a human or a horse first. I feel like the author has not finished elementary school!

Abandoned Book Chapter 109 In this time-travel story from Mei Entertainment, the protagonist has a sister named Voldemort, and then he fell in love with his sister's best friend, and they cheated on her before it was released. There's nothing wrong with you writing about a playboy, but the problem is that you keep emphasizing the hero's character as a good man, and end up cheating on her, which is disgusting. Fortunately, you cheated on her before it was released, which saved me some money. After reading the reviews, the book crashed even more after it was put on the shelves, so I decided to abandon the book.

Abandoned Book Chapter 127 The male protagonist is reborn after time travel, and the female protagonist is arrogant and yandere. The author describes the worldview as a world in which the cultivating class and the mortal class are extremely intensified. He always emphasizes that mortals are inferior to dogs, but the protagonist is also a person who is indifferent to mortal life. The male protagonist is set to be a person who doesn't like to show off, but the author likes to write show-off plots, which is very contradictory. The heroine is even weirder. She kills someone regardless of her own life because the person is a friend of a friend of her enemy! The question is, wouldn't it be better to find the enemy instead of fighting to the death? Why would you risk your life to find a friend who is a friend of your enemy? What's more, this person was very kind to her. Killing him was a sneak attack in full view of the people, and she couldn't survive even if she killed him! The author actually finds this reversal very satisfying and proud, which is really confusing.

Abandoned Book Chapter 12 Why are the grades of Internet articles always higher with higher numbers? To be honest, this is very poisonous, but you get used to it after you become poisonous. But this time! ! In an ancient officialdom novel, the first rank is the worst and the ninth rank is the highest. I really want to curse people. This is the first time this setting in an online novel is so disgusting! !

Abandoned Book Chapter 78 The most unbearable thing is that the protagonist named himself Ji Ba. Is there anything wrong with the author not reading it? Someone has already mentioned it in the chapter review, but I didn't expect that dozens of chapters later, it would be used as a dirty joke again, it's disgusting. I'll write the most intolerable part first, and the book review below. This book is very interesting. Each chapter begins with a story and ends with a biography and pseudo-history. The story is about the newly born Ninth Prince who travels back in time to an imaginary ancient China. The author's writing is good and the story is very interesting. However, the author writes the time span too casually. For example, the prince did not speak for five years, but almost nothing happened. For example, when he later wrote five years later, only the age of the characters changed during these five years, and nothing happened in the middle. For example, the boss hasn't seen the prostitute he likes for five years, and the prostitute hasn't had a client for five years. The person I slapped in the face before had not met him once in five years. When I met him again five years later, he slapped me in the face in the same way.

Abandoned Book Chapter 12 In fact, the real name of this book is, [I am the King of Ye Qiu]. This book tells the story of Ye Liangchen's time travel and playing football. The protagonist's strong love-burial style, Ye Liangchen's character, I am the best in the world, I have a system, why do I need to rob you? I have a system to deliberately humiliate you, so what? It's disgusting. If you don't have a correct outlook on life, you can still go to the starting point and recommend it!

Abandoned Book Chapter 60 This is a time travel and immortality novel with a licking master system. There are all kinds of simple women and complicated men in it. The story is well told, bland and interesting, and the life direction and climax control are both good. In Chapter 60, the author suddenly changed the order of [Heaven and Earth Xuanhuang] to [Tianxuan Dihuang], and then cited the Book of Changes as saying that Tianxuan Dihuang is Tianxuan Dihuang. Many readers have questioned whether the author is right, saying that Tianxuan Dihuang should be like this. May I ask why you use Heaven and Earth Xuanhuang to sort the 4th gear? It is precisely because of the universal understanding of the Thousand Character Classic that everyone knows that the order of heaven, earth, xuanhuang is used, so it is used in this way. If the author doesn't agree with this order, he can use A, B, C and D instead of throwing out a clever trick to impress!

Abandoned Book Chapter 115 The story is interesting and the plot is compact. It tells the story of traveling through the Marvel world with the DC template system, and many characters such as Brotherhood and Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles are mixed in. The main reason for abandoning the book is that the protagonist has serious problems with his outlook on life. He can ignore human life in order to show off, and he can do things to see tragedy happen for the sake of points. If there is a problem with the protagonist's outlook on life, I can continue reading. After all, the character can be made cold-blooded. However, after more than 100 chapters, I have discovered that it is the author's outlook on issues. Chapter 113 adds a setting that destroys the three views of the system: you will not get any justice points if you resolve the crisis in advance. Instead, you will have to wait until the crisis occurs to solve it before you get points. Moreover, the greater the damage caused by the crisis, the more points you will get. I was shocked and quickly quit reading.

Abandoned Book Chapter 200 The time-travelers who studied and struggled in the era of Western mythology wrote more rigorously at the beginning, but gradually transformed into refreshing prose in the later period. The story is actually okay, but I really can't stand the obvious errors. Many settings are set in one chapter, and later I find out that I made a mistake in the previous chapter, and then forcefully explain it, and the same mistake appears again two chapters later. Of course, watching it with your eyes closed is still a good way to pass the time.

Abandoned Book Chapter 81 It should be plagiarized from the setting of a certain light novel "The daughter who wants to be an adventurer goes to the capital and becomes an S-class adventurer" When the plot started to be plagiarized, it was quite interesting. When it came to the original plot, it immediately changed from "My daughter is so awesome" to "My dad is so awesome"

Abandoned Book Chapter 49 After the male protagonist was reborn, he was bound by a cheat and forced to chase his ugly girlfriend. It turned out that his girlfriend turned out to be a weirdo who pretended to be ugly all the time. The plot was hilarious and full of shit, which was very interesting. The result is written, dog food turned into dog blood, The female protagonist was teased in front of the male protagonist, but in order to observe the performance of the female protagonist, the male protagonist actually let the female protagonist be completely molested? The heroine, who has always been strong, is suddenly bullied for no apparent reason. The hero disguises herself as a woman and rushes into the women's restroom to rescue her. No explanation is needed afterwards? I guess I ran out of creativity later on, so I actually made up some stories, like two people bungee jumping on a date, and the safety rope broke? Such a bloody plot, eh The more you make it up, the less likely it is to make sense, so throw it away.

Abandoned Book Chapter 73 The theme is to promote traditional Chinese martial arts. The protagonist has been practicing martial arts for fourteen years, has a martial arts plug-in, and likes to be arrogant. Well, yes, he doesn't like to show off, but he likes to be arrogant. The characters in the book generally have low intelligence. I feel that the author is trying his best to write something that is not a novice, but the result is that the more he writes, the more he writes. For example, in a scene in Chapter 73, the protagonist was surrounded by 20 people with knives, and then he was unwilling to cheat and was stabbed to death. Can you believe it? Poison!

Abandoned Book Chapter 70 It's a very interesting book. The protagonist was an undercover agent before time travel, and he still became an undercover agent after time travel. Goldfinger has a shadow clone, a shadow clone in the true sense. The clone can hide in the shadows and wait for opportunities, and has the same strength as the original body, infinite speed in the shadow, immortality and invulnerability and other invincible characteristics. The plot is quite interesting at the beginning. The protagonist pretends to be a dog at the same time. The author also writes it very well. Various settings are random and various accidents are used to advance the plot. To be honest, if I keep writing like this, it will become a brainless and enjoyable story. It can be a bit more exciting to watch the protagonist cry every time without tears. It is actually very enjoyable to see the protagonist still unable to escape the fate of being an undercover agent after exposing himself. As a result, starting from about 50 chapters, it suddenly changed into a passionate novel. By chapter 70, the author suddenly wanted to round out all the unreasonable things before? As a result, there were various logical errors and inconsistencies, which successfully detoxified me.

Abandoned Book Chapter 20 Time-travel system flow, the protagonist travels through Japan, comes with a swordsman system, light novel style, lack of environmental description, and mostly relies on dialogue and scene switching to advance the plot. The author is a seriously partial person, very poor at mathematics, and the system settings are a mess. And often spend a huge amount of time explaining primary school mathematics theory, but the explanation is not clear or even wrong 😂

Eunuch Good entertainment article But because of the title, I put it in the wrong category. Many readers thought it was an e-sports article, only to find out that it was for entertainment, and started scolding it directly. It is a pity that readers who like entertainment will be blocked by e-sports titles. If the author explains it in the introduction of the work, or changes the title of the book, I think the results will be better. After the author discovered the problem, instead of changing the classification back, he rewrote the competitive article, killing most of the remaining audience in one fell swoop.

Abandoned book chapters: 12 chapters People who have traveled through time remember a few good songs, but how many days did they copy an entire book? Otherwise, you can bring the system or add a super power or something, which will appear more logical.

Abandoned book chapters: 26 chapters A standard novice novel. At first, the author said he didn't know anything, but later he learned perfume, wine, and even made facial masks. And there is no timeline, there is no time scale in the whole book, everything has only the beginning and the end, and the time of the process is all swallowed up. Since the writing was acceptable, I was encouraged to continue reading, but it turned out that the army was short of food, and the male protagonist was still drinking wine in the general's mansion, and was directly poisoned to death.