Great Wei Nengchen

This book is really good. I have read some other historical novels, and the writing was a bit flimsy, but the author's writing is really good, and some of the dialogue, environment, psychology and other details are not embarrassingly described. The language is also very stable. Some of the content described by the author may cause discomfort to some readers, but I think this is a good story, because nothing is perfect, just like the paragraph where Jin Yong describes Yin Zhiping in a big way, some people will be uncomfortable. So, don't persuade someone to quit or try the poison if it doesn't suit your wishes. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it and leave silently. Don't listen to others saying that the wind is wind and the rain is rain. The quality of a book depends on everyone's understanding and the criteria for determining whether it is good or bad. Please do not comment on books you have not read; those who have read them are happy to share their opinions, but please do not belittle the author's hard work. Writing a book well is quite difficult. Come on, author, I really like your writing style 👍

This book is really stupid. Give it to your daughter. Spoilers.

What are those authorial words and brackets? It seems that when I was doing that, I suddenly said "Is it cool?", So I asked the author, what do you think?

Dare I ask, how often does it take to publish a new book?

It's updated once a day. You are determined to get so many points. Why don't you leave yourself some way out? Earn enough, this is

Too little, not enough to watch.

I just read a few chapters and I got poisoned and died. Could you please stop talking about the general in the future as soon as you meet someone? Just write and write. The ending is almost finished in the opening chapter. How can I still read it?

It looks pretty good from the front, but what about the stallion when you get to the back? The details are still the same as before. It feels like the person has not aged, but he is already the father of several children, and he is still young with a black face?

If the author sees it, please reply to me. I know that online articles need to be very exciting, otherwise the plot will not be attractive, but now, the description of malaria in the chapter is very incorrect and seriously violates medical common sense. I must report that chapter to Qidian. Com! First of all, malaria is a disease caused by the parasite Plasmodium. It is an insect-borne infectious disease contracted through the bite of an Anopheles mosquito or the transfusion of blood containing Plasmodium. It cannot be transmitted through contact, hugging, meeting, or sneezing! The incubation period of malaria parasites lasts for 12 to 30 days, and then enters the chill period, which is the period of symptoms of "trembling all over and chattering teeth", which is somewhat different from what is described in the novel. Then it enters the febrile phase, with symptoms such as "fever, convulsions, unconsciousness, severe headache, herpes, etc." And finally the sweating phase, when the patient is sleepy, sweats profusely, and calms down. The treatment of malaria requires the drug quinine. Quinine, commonly known as cinchona, is an alkaloid extracted from the bark of the Rubiaceae plant Cinchona tree and its congeners. The chemical name is "cinchona base". It is a theobromine and 4-methoxyquinoline antimalarial drug. It is a rapid blood schizont killing drug. As for the introduction of the protagonist's blood medicine, first of all, the article mentions that the protagonist's body has antibiotics and immunity. There is no corresponding antibiotic that can treat malaria, because malaria is a parasitic disease, not a bacterial infection. Even if the protagonist had experience in treating malaria in a modern hospital before traveling through time, he would not be able to transfer antibodies to the patient through his own blood. This is an idea that violates the common sense of traditional Chinese and Western medicine. Please let the author mention the protagonist Xiao Yi again in the article. This approach is completely incorrect. If you are infected with malaria, please go to a tertiary hospital for formal treatment immediately, report to the police and epidemic prevention department that malaria protozoa are present in the area, and ask the relevant departments to cull the Anopheles mosquitoes! Thanks!

I discovered this book only after it was free. How to put it, it's a time-travel novel, but it's not an orthodox cool novel. Let's talk about the protagonist not being a lord but a subject. There is no problem with this. Historical novels are not just about role-playing. Everyone has their own preferences. Forget about spoilers, it doesn't matter as long as the plot is interesting. But! ! ! "Giving a daughter away", this plot is not something that ordinary people can accept, right? If she is not the heroine, then don't describe her as a future heroine. She doesn't even need to appear. Is it necessary for the plot? ? ? Does she violently promote the development of the plot, or is she a turning point in the plot that turns 360 degrees without any dead ends? ? ? If it is, the author who is not good at writing in this way will generally collapse, collapse, collapse, collapse, and the earth will collapse. If not, excuse me! Lift the next one out!

Is the protagonist sick? The time traveler doesn't know where Chibi is heading?

It should be like this, don't spray...

If you are not talented, I have a poem to send you. The sand wall is missing by the sky, and the dusk and dawn are quiet. The poem smiles and lifts the sword, and the bird strides swiftly. In spring, there is white mist, and square ditches are opened in the fields. If the fragrance is not penetrated through the mud, it will be covered by the numbness when lying on it.

Update

This princess is really poisonous and annoying to death. I will either accept it or drive her away. I will not read any chapters with this girl in it recently.

The author may have remembered something wrong. Xiao Yi has cried three times. The first time was the death of his master, the second time was the death of Guo Jia, and the third time was the death of his father-in-law Cao Cao. This is the fourth time I have cried when Baicai passed away

This is completely nonsense. Even poetry had not developed in the late Han Dynasty. The main ones were the Book of Songs and Yuefu Poems. It was not until the Ming and Qing Dynasties that novels developed from scripts and folk tales. Return to the end of all schools of thought and talk nonsense

After reading the book for ten chapters, you will die from poison! To warn future generations.

I just saw about 20 of them, and they seem really poisonous. . .

I can't stand it any longer. Let me just say a few words. Author, can you not delete all those things about the future, decades later, future generations and so on? It will really make it uncomfortable for people watching it, you know? ? ?

It's always about future generations and stuff, it's really annoying to watch! ! ! We already know the ending, so what else are we watching? ? ?

Baron, you still need a postscript for us book friends.

After chasing it for so long, I really couldn't bear to see the three words of the finale. This is a different Three Kingdoms. Even if Xiao Yi, as an outsider, messed it up, I still like it. I like it indescribably. . . Where did the black lightning at the end take the little queen and Xiao Yi? I really look forward to seeing the world with Xiao Yi again, maybe in Hei Jue's next book. To be honest, what would it be like if Xiao Yi traveled to a fantasy world in the second book, a world of cultivating immortals... Haha. Thank you for writing this book. Thank you very much. I look forward to the next book and to meeting you again...

Lao Hei, I am second on the fan list. I have supported you for so long because of your good writing! But after reading these 180 chapters, I found that you were a bit perfunctory, your logic was incoherent, and you were a bit out of shape! Although there were times when I said I would give up my book, I never left! I think you should stop writing and re-outline the framework and sort out the logic and character relationships. I will wait for your performance in another fifty chapters, don't let me down!

It ended before I knew it, and I couldn't bear to let it go. This book is really good.

Damn it, the work has been lost now 🤫

Why do you want to lose contact! !

Why did I lose contact?

In the next few chapters, the battle of wits definitely failed. When they were desperately trying to break through, Wei's generals of the opposite sex came to the rescue at the last moment.