Super Creator

What a cool protagonist, be sure to like it

Support each other! Let's work hard together! 🌹

Although it reminds me of the novel My Model System, the author seems to be better. I would like to mention that it is better for the protagonist to keep working hard to become stronger!

Overall it's pretty good, keep watching and waiting for updates

In the first chapter, he was clearly beaten by his classmates in Taiyang Mountain. Why is it said in Chapter 18 that he was shot by a sniper? There are too many chapters that are not connected. Please correct it, the author.

I feel like King Ada really hates saying that about SABER. You can question why SABER is a woman, but the following sentence is obviously insulting. The protagonist should just destroy her so that she dares to talk about my king.

B also has a lot of pretensions, but it will collapse after not many words. I can't stand it anymore when I see the birthday banquet.

I like the setting of this book very much, and the results of the surgery at the beginning are also very interesting, but the problem is that the protagonist is actually excusing Hou Chaoxian (do you intend to clear his name?). Normally, when arranging this kind of rebirth after death scene, the two sides should be life-or-death enemies, and after that, the protagonist just teaches him a lesson. Also, the protagonist obviously does not take the exposure ability seriously, whether it is releasing the Quincy Bow or blatantly using the fruit of surgery, especially after the brain was replaced, the brain was stuffed into the stomach (the author is not sure about the body of unnatural death, can he basically dissect it?) This kind of supernatural phenomenon can easily attract investigation. The division of levels is also quite unreasonable. The author mentioned that the highest level of power in ancient times was 9 stars, while 6 stars in modern times is extremely unreasonable. The implication should be that the strongest person currently is 6 stars. As a result, a waste from the four major families in the world has a guaranteed standard of more than 2 stars, and Ruoxin actually has 4 stars, and the title of master is 5 stars. The difference in strength is too small. And why did the protagonist realize that there was only one two-star person after his awakening, wasn't there a bunch of three-star ones? He couldn't even compare to one two-star person. Even if it was mentioned in the article that the injured three-star-blooded real person was the two-star person, it was an exaggeration. And the protagonist exposed his abilities many times and even shot arrows in the sky, but no one stepped forward to take care of him? The same goes for the squad leader. With such a family background, he didn't show up when he was about to be taken away? After a month of retreat, he went out to eat with friends. Food? Nothing happened after that assassination? The squad leader obviously had something going on and actually said he didn't want to talk about it so he didn't ask? (As a boyfriend, even if he is fake, he doesn't care.) Overall, this book is very exciting. It feels like I write whatever comes to my mind. The settings are also changed as I write. I see that the author wants to fix bugs, but I have to say that with this way of writing, bugs cannot be fixed. I still have a lot to write, and I am too hungry to think of anything. I hope the author can give some feedback after reading it.

I finally got a novel cover, but you actually use it too. It's so embarrassing. What a shame.