Kingdom Made in Heaven

There are no nutritious comments in the comment section. Let me just tell you how I felt after reading it. From the talent selection at the beginning to knowing that the plot starting from the first copy is very bland. Like, very bland, I basically guessed everything except the specific talent content of the protagonist. After all, the plot is limited, and if the talent is not great, no one will want to watch it, right? Before the start of the first copy, the interaction between Wu Laoer and the protagonist was quite interesting. After all, it is a game without krypton gold means, and the protagonist's bachelor-like thoughts are also quite interesting. Unlike in actual online games nowadays, you still have to worry about scammers stealing money and equipment. Games without so much scheming are quite interesting The content of the first copy is quite interesting The characters are just too thin Except for the doctor in the memories, the images of all the other characters cannot even be made up to a specific image. The main reason is that you did not carefully portray these characters, including the BOSS, the black hand, and the teammates. They are all too vague. Except that the second brother is a funny guy who can let people know, everything else is impossible to figure out.== Then there is the second dungeon. After entering the dungeon, the author's deliberate meaning is too strong, and the description of the scene is too little. When I first saw the sword tomb, I thought that the interior was white earth, blank space, and countless swords floating in the sky. However, you shattered my imagination with a few words in the next few words, and also made me not even understand what the specific scene was... Generally speaking, the plot design is not bad, but the description and characterization are too thin 😭 Maybe what I said doesn't make you happy. I just expressed my opinion. Don't pay too much attention to the author.