Rune World

This book is actually pretty good, the writing is good, and the plot is enjoyable, but why is it so bad? I think the main reason is the missing back. The palace is so bad. Why do you say that? For example, let's take me for example, and now I'm reading a martial arts novel called White Robe. I haven't read a martial arts novel for several years. I saw a good title, so I went in and took a look. I was hooked and became an apprentice. There aren't many chapters there, but there are already several disciples and apprentices and a lot of trainees. In fact, I think the author of this book may be better at writing and the fighting scenes are more exciting than him, and I paid attention to this book earlier. So why do I have 590 followers in Fan 2? I think the reason is that there is a kind of protagonist who wants to be the queen. The plot of the palace so the results there are good. Brother, the author, please give me some advice. Hot-blooded novels only need a harem to be popular. I thought you would do something beautiful as soon as you came here. Unfortunately, none of the top ten goddesses are yours. They are all other people's sidekicks. Why do you think this is so cool? Look at who has some money and power now. Wife. Four. The protagonist of Concubine Erno Sanno Yue Niu Bi Yue wants several girls. God's foil makes the readers feel involved, and the results will be better after reading it. Now there are some people who say nothing as soon as they come. The palace doesn't want to see any killing. M is preaching. Waiting is silly. It makes you want to vomit when you hear the words. Don't listen to what you are trying to mislead you. Just imagine that in reality, nine wolves out of ten men and one other entered the palace. Who is rich, powerful and beautiful and still thinks of her as a queen? Supervisor? To say that we need a harem, of course, does not mean that we need to build dozens or hundreds of harems. That would be a misinterpretation. It would be better to build five or six high-quality ones. Also, don't make any mistakes in the article such as pairing this girl with that supporting role and that girl playing the supporting role with this supporting role. This is not good. Didn't you see that there are many novels where even if the main character doesn't want that girl, they would rather not assign her to someone else and would rather keep her as a nun than write it? For example, in the article, the peach girl is assigned to Xiaopang. Why are you so surprised? I couldn't tell it at all at first. It seemed like Miss Tao was the eldest sister when she appeared. Fatty is the younger brother, right? I thought I would fall in love with the protagonist, but why did he suddenly become a match for Fatty? . . . Alas, that's all

Not everyone can show off. .

A good book, I think it's going to be good, I'll add it to my collection and recommend it. Come on, author.