Nightmare Paradise

I wish the author's wife a speedy recovery, and you can buy some broken Ganoderma spore powder to eat. Works very well

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Let's finish things at home first, straighten out the plot, and be the first to subscribe.

The disappearance of the tarot cards is just an introduction. It will appear again after the protagonist enters the professional stage... Of course, [Tarot] will undergo some changes, but its essence is still a card.

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Actually, what I want to say is that family is important. I probably don't have much time to spend with them when I write books. So when you're sick, just spend more time with them.

By the way, why do ordinary items without attributes have to be exchanged? Can't they be bought directly with money in reality? Does the protagonist have no money?

Take the ghost flight as an example. The language of the passengers on it is almost the same routine, and they are all Western styles that make people unconsciously look at the drama. However, from the previous article, it can be seen that the country where the protagonist of this novel is located is clearly China, so the speech of ordinary people should be more in line with our Chinese language habits. I won't tell you what it is specifically. You will know by looking at it. It's just that some people don't care about these issues, and some people care about such details, such as me. . . 😟 I hope the author can broaden his mind and pay more attention to the language and dialogue of the characters. 🥱

Although this completely covers the entire story, it may not highlight the shining points of each chapter. Well, this is just a personal opinion. I have tried to use Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and so on before. Later, a reader reminded me and said that I was too lazy to even think of chapter names~~

I won't talk about the writing style. I prefer the supernatural and fantasy, and I don't reject apocalyptic writing. It doesn't seem like the author wants to write that kind of dark, inhumane writing.

The tarot cards were indeed a bug in the early stages, and the author's forceful erasure of them made the plot seem blunt. After getting Tarot cards inexplicably and losing Tarot cards inexplicably, the author is digging a big hole. No matter how it is written, the following skill values ​​cannot be used as decorations.

Although from the current point of view, the author has no intention of writing a female protagonist, the author should consider that the style of this book is not suitable for a vase heroine. It is difficult to write a female protagonist, but it is necessary to have one. The author can write several female characters, but does not specify which one is the female protagonist.