Kingdom of God Eternal

The book is a good one, and I'm not a novice, but I gave up when I got into Gryffindor. Why would anyone like Gryffindor? I hate naughty kids the most.

Is this Kingdom of God a combination of farm and ranch? The protagonist has inherited the legacy of a god. If he wants to learn extraordinary abilities, he still needs to go to Hogwarts? ? ? Moreover, HP's wizards are really weak in terms of combat power. There is no denying that some magics are very good, but other systems are not without them...

The author's writing of Harry Potter in American comics is a real failure. In an American comic that is full of perverts and is not as popular as a star, what can HP's system do? What's the use besides water word count? The HP system is closer to that of a bloodline wizard. The prerequisite for learning magic is to awaken magic (those who cannot awaken are called Muggles) and be able to use it (those who cannot use it are called squibs). Releasing magic is just like a joke. There is no need to understand the principles, and there is no arrangement of runes, magic circles, etc. Magic can be released as long as the pronunciation and movements are accurate. There is no meditation method for magic power, which increases directly with age. It's better to go to Kama Taj to learn magic from Ancient One. At least he can extract magic power from different latitudes to match the protagonist's kingdom without having to borrow or steal the power of those dimensional demons. Writing HP, the protagonist has been developed for so long and is still a weakling. He can't even protect the people around him. Even with a powerful plug-in like Kingdom of God, he can develop like this. This book is indeed not a show of pretending to be slapped in the face, but a story of the protagonist being pretended to be slapped in the face.

The idea is quite good, but you failed to write it well. There is no main line, the details are vague, and the layout is too big. The problem is that you can't handle the details even if you only write about them. I hope you can continue to work hard.

Due to the limited vision and mentality of the pattern, God is put into the dust, wishful thinking, and the human heart is unclear and does not know. It is written with the innocence and innocence of children.

Disgusting

The first few chapters feel like the Middle Ages, but then a TV suddenly appears, and the picture is very contradictory.

After reading the free chapter, I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do.

It was really boring to watch. There was no main plot, and I just saw the protagonist wandering around without any purpose.

This book is a complete abuse of the master. First, they talk about how powerful the Kingdom of God is, how good the protagonist is in boxing, and how powerful the protagonist's technology is, and then a random soldier comes and presses the protagonist to the ground and rubs him.

The first chapter was poisonous because the author was not writing about China in 1987, but the United Kingdom in 1887. In 1987, the UK's per capita GDP was US$12,000, and in 2017, China's per capita GDP was US$8,000. In 1987, the level of social development in the UK was even higher than that of China today. In addition, the UK had free medical care. Didn't the author know that? Although this kind of free medical care has been criticized in various ways, the UK was a modern developed industrialized country in 1987. What the author describes is basically a pre-industrial society.

If it hadn't been for the divine cheat mentioned in the introduction, I wouldn't have been able to watch the first three chapters. The rest of it would have been acceptable as it was dull and lackluster, but after entering Hogwarts, the protagonist's character has obviously dropped a lot in age, right?

There are so many typos, it's a torture to read.

What are you writing about? Do you keep a running account? I have no idea what the author is trying to write! I don't know how the author insisted on writing more than 700 chapters, so awesome

It's already Chapter 4 and the plot hasn't started to unfold yet.

After reading a little bit, I always got the same feeling. Every time I do something, there is always no detailed description, which is a bit inexplicable. I also live in a bungalow with pig's feet, but I am not strong enough and have no industry. I suddenly recruit a group of people including bodyguards, paralegals, assistants, etc. For those who don't know, I think it is a big company. With so many people living in a small bungalow, are they not afraid of exposing their secrets?

I think the main characters of this book as a whole are the various horses. And it's open to all ages, including brats under 80 years old. Think about how old Spider-Man's aunt is, and look at the wrinkled protagonist in the movie who fucked her too.

I was also drunk. The whole novel was made up of declarative sentences, and the sentences didn't make sense. It seems that some words have been missed in many places, and I have to make up for it, but there is no sense of substitution... Appraisal of random writing method completed

What is written is baffling. At least the background of the whole book can be explained.

It feels like a mess, so confusing

Captain America, Captain Britain, Captain Star Wars, Captain Iron Blood, etc.

Here I go! I just discovered that I could grab red envelopes, but the red envelopes were gone!

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The dog days of summer are not yet over, and it is the beginning of autumn again; the remaining heat has no hope of disappearing, and the autumn wind has not yet felt cool. The moon is starry, the river is quiet, and the night rain is all over the mountains. I think about the autumn mood in front of the screen, and the clear light is full under my finger.