A Journey Through the Mythical World

After reading Chapter 36, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I only have one thought, and that is that the author is disrespecting women. I wish you never find a girlfriend in your life, you're welcome.

Very good and powerful. After reading this book, four big words came to my mind: "Fucking retarded"

Seeing this, I suddenly realized that either the protagonist is stupid, or the author is stupid!

I really can't stand this book. It's too frustrating to read. I've also written a book myself. Wouldn't it be more lighthearted and cheerful? It makes people feel like humans and ghosts. It's a pity.

. . . I abandoned the book in the second chapter. The protagonist is not a good person at first glance~ Moreover, as a time traveler, it is very annoying to randomly change the plot settings or character settings of the original drama. . . (I don't know if it was changed later, but it seems to have been changed in the first two chapters. Is there such a Monkey King? Is there such a Tang Monk?)

Several heroines have lost their memory, and then what? What is the ending of the heroine? Can anyone explain it?

First of all, I think there is nothing wrong with what Sanqing and the others did. Maybe some people say that they can take away other people's lives casually, but if you don't kill them, then there will be calamities. Under calamities, if everyone is done playing, even if they all settle down to their destiny, who wants to die? Speaking of which, I would like to ask, readers, what would you do if you were in Sanqing's position? The Holy Mother does not kill others, and then sacrifices herself while struggling in the calamity? Everyone has selfish motives, so-called Taoist friends who are poor and undead. Pig's Foot's character actually collapsed in the later stages. After practicing Taoism for so many years and experiencing too much, his character is still so impulsive and unstable. What kind of Taoism is he practicing with such a state of mind? Speaking of Taoism, it is also called self-cultivation. What is cultivated is more about the heart, but the heart of the pig's trotters, I can only say that the pig's trotters are so NB. It is only thanks to his familiarity with the author, otherwise, he would have died many times earlier. The gods are aloof, the gods are indifferent, selfless, and the law of heaven is unkind. These are the real gods. As long as these gods don't provoke mortals, the death of the gods is none of Pig's Foot's business. Really, what I wrote in the front is good, but the character of Pig's Foot immediately collapsed later. It's almost over. Pig's Foot still has no brains to think about how to play and fight against the gods on his own. I can only hahaha. Speaking of which, what I'm curious about is Sanqing? Especially in primitive times, the great power who created the world in mythology was betrayed by pig's feet. How deceptive it is! (Yes, don't doubt it. In mythology, Hongjun is the eldest disciple, and originally he was the second disciple. The original one also had a name, Pangu. If you don't believe it, go read those unofficial histories of mythology. The List of Gods is just a novel written in the later period, and has little to do with the mythology of the Taoists.)

In fact, it's boring to watch too many protagonists who don't do everything well. There is no shortage of such works in Qidian. There is a high probability that life will always be unsatisfactory. The protagonist is a little more successful than the supporting role, but there will also be setbacks, but as long as you don't make this kind of setbacks life-threatening. Optimism and frustration are actually fun. For example, some novels are also made miserable by others. One of them is about how much the protagonist hates heaven and earth, or is about to burst out with the destruction of heaven and earth... This kind of plot is disgusting. As for the other one, even if the main character is beaten to death, it still makes me happy to read it. Reading this novel will not make you feel bored as if the main character wants to win the wind or get two, nor will you feel depressed and uncomfortable while reading it.

After reading Chapter 32, the villain's IQ has dropped, the protagonist is showing off, and Bai Suzhen doesn't look like Bai Suzhen at all except that she is called Bai Suzhen.

Really, I promise, I have been reading books for ten years, and there are so few that interest me. Obviously you won, and I feel like I don't want to read anymore.

I read the first chapter, Saving Sun Wukong, and I remember that no matter where it is in Journey to the West, Guanyin will tell the monkey in advance that he is going to be released from prison, so what can the protagonist have to save? And a treasure?

Awesome, you dare to think and write. I have read a lot of mythological time-travel novels, and some of them travel in the same plane but not in the same time period, but they have never mentioned or explained that they are two time-travels in the same plane at different times, but when they meet again, it is as if they have never met before. The character I am talking about is not the protagonist, and you are very different! Why? Because you wrote it out, Chang'e, Jade Rabbit and Wu Gang still have that chapter: "The official title is Bi Ma Wen." They are from the same plane and different time periods! Obviously, what they said means that our little Yangzi has definitely traveled before the Sun Wukong period. Although you haven't written it out yet, it would be great if you could bring it up to us. This is a very eye-catching idea. Although it is troublesome to come up with it, I can guarantee it! Readers will absolutely love it! The premise is that you have to highlight it at that time. Although it is a bit delayed when the protagonist thinks deeply about them saying such things, just like Bai Suzhen said he was a benefactor in the first few pictures, and then the protagonist slowly remembered it! Oh! He is like the white snake I saved! After one experience, will it be so troublesome to use it the second time? (I didn't look carefully to see if there were any typos.) Read more book reviews. This is where readers evaluate books. From here you can find inspiration, discard the dross and take the essence. Just because you can't think of it doesn't mean that others can't think of it. Those thousand-year-old bookworms have read too many novels!

Write well, author. In fact, your writing is pretty good, but you have to arrange the plot reasonably. Although you are not required to write according to the readers' requirements, I hope you won't go too far. Arrange foreshadowing and want the plot to be full. I understand, even if It's acceptable if you write about a sadistic master and a dead girl, but can you please stop writing about cuckold plots? I believe that readers will feel immersed in the novel when they read it and regard themselves as the protagonists in the novel. When you write about giving away a girl, doesn't this add to our hearts? The so-called reader is the author's God. If you make God unhappy, God will also make you unhappy. I think you have already felt this in the last book. Therefore, this book must be written carefully, not asking for a harem stallion, but just a word of pleasure.

Haha, after reading more than a dozen chapters, I was originally planning to complain about it. However, I found that many people in the book review section were criticizing the author, and suddenly I felt a little sympathetic. So I decided not to be venomous, and I hope you will write it down well.

Emmm To be honest, it feels like a lot of things have to be done this way. Maybe my level is low. Sorry, I really don't want to read anymore.

Emmm. How should I put it? It's a bit forced to lose amnesia for the sake of suspense, and to create suspense for the sake of digging a hole. It looks very tiring.

The protagonist has some benefits anyway, so he takes them away by force. As soon as I feel relaxed, I continue to torture. I don't know if it's considered an abuse, but it's just tiring to watch.

You're missing a seal. Did I pay to see why you were missing it?

Lucky for him, he lost all his coins and didn't continue to subscribe. The more he goes on, the worse he gets.

The protagonist is in his mid-twenties, ten years old?

Various reincarnations, amnesia, time in the future, unknown plots that happened, it's so gross

So far about 67 percent. I can't watch anymore. I feel very tired after the story of White Snake. So he gave up.

Nowadays, the cliché of a naughty and naughty protagonist is no longer popular. You have to either compete with others on writing skills or compete with other clichés. Unfortunately, you are an author who doesn't have either of these, so it's your turn to be cool.

Things start to get messy when you get close to pvp.

Your sister, the most annoying thing is that there are missing chapters, there are chapters 47 and 48.

It was fully booked back then. Are you still writing a book now?

The main character of the quick travel novel is a stallion, and it makes me sick to read it. At this rate, there will be a lot of women in just a few chapters.

This book doesn't have that many flaws, and it's not a group read. It's indeed more popular. Come on, finish this book well

Okay, Ruanfanliu, you are so high-end, I decided to take a look

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