The Greatest Superstar

A singer usually has his own personal style. If he catches a song, he will sing it by himself. Sometimes he is rock, sometimes he is folk, sometimes he is electronic music, sometimes he is rap. How can he do this? Copying is not like this, right?

The emotional intelligence of the characters is too low. It feels like they are all junior high school students playing the same characters in the book, with all kinds of embarrassing plots 🤭

Writing entertainment articles always involves a few family members, and there are so many younger brothers and sisters. If there aren't many scenes, don't write about so many younger brothers and sisters. This is an entertainment article, not an urban article that focuses on daily life

Your protagonist wastes these songs, yes, it's a waste

Nowadays, the more I read entertainment books, the more angry I get. Finished testing poison

To be fair, I couldn't stand it after reading twenty chapters.

Both the total number of words and the number of words in each chapter are too few. I saved up the chapters for a week and finished them in a while.

Can we have less to do with reality? Poisonous point!

However, there is one biggest shortcoming, the lack of sense of substitution. Secondly, it lacks excitement. At least so far, it has always felt too bland.

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