The Greatest Superstar

A singer should generally have their own personal style. Don't just grab any song and sing it yourself—one minute rock, the next folk, then electronic, then rap. That won't do. Even plagiarism shouldn't be done like that.

The characters' emotional intelligence is so low; they all seem like middle school students playing roles from a book, resulting in various awkward scenes. 🤭

Writing entertainment stories and constantly dragging in family members, with so many younger siblings! If they don't have many characters, don't include so many younger siblings. This is an entertainment story, not a slice-of-life urban novel.

Your protagonist wasted these songs, yes, wasted them.

These days, the more I read entertainment books, the angrier I get. (After trying them out...)

Honestly, I couldn't continue after reading twenty chapters.

Both the total word count and the word count per chapter are too short; a week's worth of chapters can be read in no time.

Can we please reduce the connection to reality? This is a major flaw!

However, its biggest drawback is the lack of immersion. Secondly, it lacks exciting moments; at least so far, it has felt too bland.

Where is 131?