Great Cultivation Era

A good book is messed up by a female character, and the main character is too stupid and naive, which is a perfect match for the female character.

Dog-licking article, no wonder you got bad grades

The background settings are weird enough, as well as the game settings. DOTA games are so fun. If you go around the starting point, when it comes to confrontation games, they are all DOTA games. All game developers are dead.

Even if you finish writing, you can still make a second part. For example, the protagonist Wu Can cultivates into a martial god and becomes an invincible martial sage. He suddenly wakes up and finds out that it was just a dream. Then he doesn't believe it. He tries to practice and finds that he can practice, and then the city slaps him in the face. He leads China and the earth to fly, and all the people practice martial arts and become the god of warriors. Suddenly I discovered that the author has a lot of ideas 👍

Why is it necessary to set the game to improve killing monsters? Can't killing monsters in reality improve? I can't stand watching the game written about it.

A real man is the one who can bend a man...

The content is getting more and more exciting, come on, okay [fn=2_3]

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This book is not bad, but the plot in it is similar to the plots in "The Master" and "Star Wars Storm". The Master also woke up and the world changed, but it turned into magic. This is martial arts. There is also a little bit that the writing style is a bit stiff. I hope the author can work harder. . 😃😃😃

The introduction takes up too much space and is very tiring to read.

How did supernatural novels become online games? ? ?

Zaizai, come on, it's getting better and better.

The writing is very good, don't pay attention to other people's silly comparisons, support it! 🤭

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I felt a little heartbroken after reading your book. The protagonist's mind is a little young and he doesn't handle things carefully enough. People in such an environment should pay attention to protecting themselves. After reading about half of Xinhui Potion, I found that the author is a bit lacking in the general content. When writing about martial arts, write well and don't add games.

Too many, it's a pity, I originally thought the protagonist would be a great sage

As a high school student, Wu Can naturally has his own mistakes in martial arts, martial arts, literature and history, but sometimes even Xiaolang can't find them, so he asks all book friends to help correct mistakes. Typos, wrong names, plot conflicts, plot suggestions, please feel free to enlighten me. Mr. Ye Liangchen and Brother Tianlong can also come and report!