Game Ultima

I feel that the author's writing is pretty good and smooth~ Please update it soon, I read it all in one go! 4 Votes are given!

Don't be a eunuch. It's originally a niche, and there are few people writing about it. Without more support, no one will write about it.

The Book Thief is good-looking, with gore, violence, demons,... You know.

It can be seen that the author has made full preparations to write this novel. The road to becoming a god must be very difficult. I support the author greatly!

Write slowly. I don't care if a book is updated quickly or slowly. I only care whether the book is worth reading. I don't want to say anything about writing, because when you write a book and look back at it, you will definitely have a lot of emotions. Never give up. Because we are with you on your way

😄😁Just vote from now on. Not posting. Too tired. If convenient. Essence.

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The text control is very good, and it would be better to strengthen the psychological description of the characters. There are some imperfections in the writing style, but the plot is attractive and the characters have their own characteristics. It can be seen from this that the author has carefully laid out the direction of the book before writing. It is a masterpiece that enriches the soul. It is worth reading, tasting, and thinking deeply. It is indeed good. I appreciate and look forward to it!!!!! Brother, I support you!

The article is delicately conceived yet unrestrained, the writing is realistic yet equally gorgeous; the plots are interlocking and enchanting, with a coherent flow, and the emotional expressions are clear, implicit, and accurate; the characters are vivid and lively on the page, and they feel ready to come out, as if they are standing in front of the readers, and their movements leave a deep impression on people. I have collected and read your masterpiece and fully support you! I wish you success and immediate success! 😄😄

This is indeed a rare good book, especially in terms of writing, which can be said to be first-rate among modern fantasy novels. It will not be a problem to make it a classic if it continues like this, but the plot development is a bit immature. If the author can slightly strengthen the control of the rhythm and highlight the character creation, I believe more people will like it.

Opening the door to two complete strangers? It's really unreasonable. Could it be that I banged the door of the author's house so hard that you dared to open the door at night without knowing anything about the situation? If you hear someone threatening to call the police, you can't open the door. Please, you are in your own home, not a thief. Besides, you said it yourself in the last 20 minutes, how fast do you think our big ** can send the police? 20 Minutes, even if the police station is next door to your house, it is not that fast. Wait for those two birdies to register their names and contact information and then explain why you didn't do anything well when they broke down other people's doors. You actually let strangers into your home under such threats. You are mentally retarded. What if someone comes in to rob and kill someone?

It means that the current update volume of this book can no longer keep up with my reading speed. Author, please break out, break out, break out!

And it's quite detailed. . Come on

It has been added to the collection. Thanks to my friends for their support. I will definitely read this masterpiece. My eyes lit up when I saw the word "brain-opening"!

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Come on, I finally saw a game novel that was not copied from others! ! Is Orange Light the heroine? I don't want a harem.

Looking at the protagonist's appearance, people who didn't know better thought they were going to kill him. Let's not talk about anything else. The protagonist is now considered a moderate celebrity. People should at least be wary of dealing with him, other things like business, taxation and so on. It's okay to do a little favor, but I'm not that young subordinate! Now that the Internet is so developed, which civil servant dares to make random moves, especially since the protagonist is relatively wealthy. Which official nowadays is clean? It's really easy to spend millions to get a small official. Also, the protagonist's company is just a small company now. If people in this city are trying to punish him, wouldn't he change to another city? Do you have to stare at one place? If you move the dead tree and move the living person, you may not be able to stay here. China cannot go to foreign countries. At least foreign laws are more sound than domestic laws. It is not that easy for people to try to punish you. At least the protagonist has not infringed on their patents.

I have a problem with reading articles. I read the copy first. If the copy is not good, just click on it. Originally, I almost disliked this novel. I also read it patiently. The author writes about a game world, but unfortunately I know nothing about games. However, what the author wrote at the beginning was really confusing to me. The protagonist got a robot. The robot developed a very powerful game interface or something. In short, it was a very powerful thing, and the protagonist also had fun playing it. The later plot may be more exciting than the previous one, but actually this is not a good idea. Only if the previous plot is exciting can it attract more people to watch it. Okay, let's continue reading. You can feel the tone of the entire article set by the author. It has a large framework, many ideas and foreshadowing, and there are also many foreshadowings. This is good, but probably the writing is not very mature. It looks messy to readers. Especially for people who have never played games, the more simple and interesting the introduction, the better. The author does not seem to have mastered this aspect well. If many game terminology or things that happen in the game are not written concisely and clearly enough, it is easy for readers to go into misunderstandings and abandon the article. To put it simply, the author has a good idea, but his writing style is a little bit lacking. In fact, there are many articles like this, but some authors make them much more interesting and enjoyable to read. This is where the article fails. The language and plot are a bit simple and bland. It is a good story. Although it is not mature enough, it also has its own advantages. The character created by the author is very good. He has grasped it so well that people will remember the protagonist immediately. The writing is not bad, and the plot is fascinating. Maybe I have read too many books, but I have also read a lot of good and bad ones. Therefore, overall I am satisfied with the author's novel. I can't say that the writing is good, but the reading is catchy. Especially if you compare the context and context, you can clearly feel the author's progress and the story becoming more and more exciting. However, I still hope that the author can deal with the details in the article and hope to be more detailed. Some unnecessary cumbersome things can be deleted if possible. There is always something right about being concise and funny. The framework of this article is very large, and I can feel that the author probably wanted to write the story well. This can be seen, but maybe because the author is not willing to do it or in some other aspects, the expected effect is not very good, because the writing style is obviously childish in some places. Even a little pale. It may be a good work for people who like this kind of subject matter, but for someone who doesn't know much about it, it's actually very boring. What I hope is that the author can make people read with gusto regardless of the readership. This takes time and requires a lot of energy from the author himself. On the whole, I still hope that the overall framework and overall intention of this article can be maintained well and not stretched too thin. This subject matter is still very attractive in a certain way. In fact, many people are not afraid of flaws in your writing, but are afraid that your plot will be old-fashioned and the entire story narrative will not only be incomplete but also messy. The rich characters, rich plot, and overall feel actually make this article interesting. So I hope the author can stick to it.

It would be best to change the description of the protagonist's friends being dissatisfied with the protagonist. I believe that, like me, I saw the point where the protagonist's friends are jealous of the protagonist in Chapter 23? There are many people. Originally, I was tired of all the intrigues and intrigues in life, so don't bother others by writing about them. I was completely in no mood to look down. That's it, no matter how good your writing is, you are not in the mood to read it.

I believe that everyone who likes to read game novels has a game dream of his own, or a good idea or two. I hope everyone will speak up and talk about the game in your mind, or the game elements you are looking forward to! 🤭🌹