The Divine Pawnshop

I couldn't hold back my tears when I read "Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils." Given Duan Zhengchun's personality, how could he possibly give away several wives for his own life? When Dao Baifeng and the others were killed, he committed suicide out of love. Even the basic character traits were distorted. And he's been acting like a great master from ancient times to the present, completely ruining such a good premise.

The author's setup is so inconsistent with the capabilities of a pawnshop! Take Alice at the beginning, for example. Thankfully, she only needed food. What if she wanted weapons and equipment more powerful than anything in the Resident Evil world? Even if Alice could produce the corresponding items, the pawnshop owner should at least have what the customer needs!

My younger cousin, who's seven years younger than me, once teased me, saying how cute she was as a child, but after a year or two, she's turned into a scheming girl. 😭

Qi Yu's niece is absolutely deadly! What does she have to do with the main character? She acts like an idiot, constantly yelling "Cuckold King, Cuckold King," and claims it's some kind of supernatural power. I think she's just brain-dead.

The subject matter was good, but the writing was terrible; what a waste.

Why does the main character look so silly?

The author keeps using the word "shocked," it seems like they can't think of any other word that conveys the meaning of "shocked."

It's a great subject matter, but the plot that's written is all unpleasant.

You might as well have started by making the protagonist single. The biggest problem with this book is the relationship between the protagonist and his ex-girlfriend. Maybe you wanted to portray the protagonist as magnanimous, but let me tell you, if a man can tolerate being used and then discarded by a woman, stepping on her to get ahead, that's not magnanimity, that's cowardice!

While the subject matter is appealing, it feels a bit disorganized, the plot isn't clearly structured, and the constant interweaving of stories makes it quite difficult to read. I hope the author can start with simplicity and gradually increase the complexity. Although it's already finished, I still want to say this! It definitely increased the reading difficulty.