The Divine Pawnshop

When I saw Tianlong, I couldn't help it. With Duan Zhengchun's character, how could he give away several wives for his own life? When Dao Baifeng and others were killed, he committed suicide and died in love. Even the basic character of the character was distorted. Moreover, I have been pretending to be a master since ancient times, and I failed to write such a good subject.

Isn't the author's setting too inconsistent with the capabilities of the pawn shop? Let's talk about Alice at the beginning. Fortunately, what they need is food. What if they want weapons and equipment that are more powerful than those in the Resident Evil world? Let's not talk about whether Alice can take out the corresponding things to pawn them. At least you, the owner of the pawn shop, must first have something that someone needs. As you described at the beginning, when someone wants food, you have to ask others to wait. You have to go to the Suiren tribe to get the food before giving it to Alice. If someone wants a rocket launcher or something, where will you get it? Go grab it? Isn't this retarded? If someone else needs a spaceship or something someday, you won't have anywhere to grab it, right? Isn't this writing too rigorous? At any rate, you can learn from [No. 8 Pawnshop]. Whatever the customer needs, as long as the value is equal, it can be taken out with a wave of his hand. This is in line with the capabilities and style of your contract pawnshop! I think, as a magical pawn shop, this should be possible! I hope the author can think carefully!

My cousin, who is seven years younger than me, complained about her. She was so cute when she was little. But after not seeing each other for a year or two, now she has turned into a scumbag 😭

Qi Yu's niece was so damn poisonous to me that she had something to do with the protagonist. Like a retard, he kept shouting cuckold, cuckold, and said it was demonic. I think he is mentally retarded.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is not good, and it is all in vain.

Why does the protagonist look so stupid?

It's always "shocked". The author can't write any other word that means "shocked" except this word.

The subject matter is very good, but the plot is unpleasant.

You might as well set the protagonist to be single at the beginning. The biggest problem in this book is the protagonist and his ex-girlfriend. Maybe you want to show the protagonist's magnanimity, but I want to say that if a man is burned down by a woman and stepped on to get the upper hand, if he can bear it, that's not magnanimity, that's cowardice! I don't want to think about what would have happened if there was no such so-called system. I won't talk about the part about resolving the inner demon. It is simply self-deception. Otherwise, the protagonist never loved his ex-girlfriend, so he didn't care about being cuckolded. Later, the star repeatedly made trouble for him, and he still pretended to do it. As long as he had the backbone, he would just do his best. Don't you feel disgusted when you read it yourself, author?

Although the subject matter is very attractive, it feels a bit messy and the arrangement is not particularly clear. It is very difficult to read if there are constant stories interspersed with it. I hope the author can make it simple first and then make it more complicated slowly. Although it is finished, I still want to say it! Increases the difficulty of reading