Shenmen

To be honest, I have read about 770 chapters so far. Originally, I read this book to kill time, just to start making fun of it. After reading more than 100 chapters, I almost gave up because of the poisonous points such as the protagonist forcing himself to act stupid, and the plot of being slapped in the face by a passerby, which was completely copied from beginning to end. The first reason to continue reading is because after the identity of Yun Qingwu, the young master of the Demon Clan, was revealed, he truly admired this resourceful woman. The huge layout was truly amazing. The second is to see when the entanglement between Chi Guyan and Lao Fang will be clear. The third one is Shuanglong, who is at the top of the list. He is a genius who is astonishing to the world and can bring peace to the world. Whose interpretation is it? Then I reached more than 770 chapters in one reading. Up to now, Yun Qingwu has led the two demon clans and continues to plan something. Chi Guyan and Fang Zhengzheng are so even in strength that there is still no winner. There is a high probability that the holy words of heaven refer to the male and female protagonists, but what they are in the end has not yet been revealed. These factors still attract me to continue reading. But there are many problems. The scenes of passers-by being shocked and slapped in the face are still so poisonous (I'm used to it...) The author forcibly lowered Lao Fang's IQ more than once in order for the protagonist to write a plot in which Lao Fang makes a comeback and slaps everyone in the face, and also drank countless amounts of water along the way. . . Moreover, before the plot of pretending to be slapped in the face, there must be more than ten or twenty chapters about how Lao Fang and his friends were tricked and tortured. I kept wanting to scold the author while reading it. In general, this book has many advantages. Guanzi sells well and there are many foreshadowings. The hundreds of pictures from the protagonist's redress of his crime after being deposed to the end of Thousand Avenues entering the holy realm are really interesting. However, there are so many shortcomings that I won't go into details. I am very tired after seeing this. The classic taste is too bland. If you don't eat it, you'll be curious about how delicious the next one is. . . That's all.

This is a rubbish book. It has too many poisonous points. I don't recommend it. I won't criticize people anymore. I hope people who recommend books in the future will be more careful and don't recommend them blindly.

I feel that what scares me most about reading a book is that the author writes it very happily and fucks the readers directly. Confused

I saw him as a deacon and couldn't bear it anymore. The poison later was really unbearable. Spend money to feel disgusted

Not to mention the plot, the psychological descriptions, scene descriptions, and dialogues all looked confusing. I want to express everything comprehensively, but my writing is messy and messy. In order to express the dialogue between superiors, the author made riddles. The key point is that you didn't lay any groundwork before, so you just insisted on adding a wave of language. Not only does it make the readers confused, but it also makes the whole article look confusing and illogical.

The beginning of this book is very toxic, because the character of the main character is really bad. Even if it is a good book, I can't read it. . .

Don't write about harem if you don't have that kind of strength. It's so embarrassing. I thought I could finish it even with my anti-drug ability. It turns out that I was too naive. When I flipped through One Thousand and 13`14, I really couldn't stand the idiot male protagonist. It was a trap. He was still hesitant to say anything to someone so many times. A person who had shown murderous intentions to him so many times and played tricks on him so many times did not even think about whether what they said was true 🙂🙂🙂. So stupid. . . . . . . It takes half a mile to travel a hundred miles, but I finally decided to quit the drug in more than a thousand chapters, 90% of the whole book, 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂. I strongly recommend that anyone who wants to write a novel get a pirated copy and write the opposite of this book, you will definitely succeed 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

Chapter 24 is so poisonous! Forced wisdom!

What an ink mark. Twenty chapters were written for a county literary test.

This book must not be read with a brain in mind. All the opponents are brainless. Only the protagonist has an IQ of 79.

The writing is quite interesting, but the world view is a bit confusing and the layout is a bit small.

See Chapter 500. It's getting weirder and weirder as I can't stand watching anymore. The non-protagonist group will be killed no matter what they do. They can still get 1vN if their level is one or two different. The combat power system is too completely broken. The protagonist and others have infinitely low IQs. I originally wanted to read it as a fun article, but there were too many loopholes to make it fun. There are so many saints in the five major sects, how come the dynasty has not heard of any of them.

What you wrote at the beginning is okay. It would be great if you continue like you started at the beginning. Look at what you wrote at the end. You can't bear to read more than 400 chapters! I really can't stand it anymore! Are you a tongue twister or are you planning to draw a maze? ! Make up the word count! The protagonist has traveled to the past without any IQ? How many realms of people can be defeated by three strikes, five strikes and two strikes? It is only suitable for beginners, and it may be a bit confusing to get started. The beginning and the middle of the book were not written by the same person, right? Can a famous author write like this?

When I opened this book, I felt like I had read it before, but I had no impression of it. It wasn't until I read Chapter 25 that I realized what was going on. It's really poisonous, and it's poisonous without any brain. I don't know how the author managed not to leave any intelligence in the pig's feet. After reading books for decades, this is the first time I have seen such a pig's feet with no IQ. No, it should be the author's fault. For the first time, I had the urge to curse at the author, but forget it, impulse is the devil.

Ju Tama was disgusted. After reading for a while, I started reading ten lines at a time. After reading for a while, I started reading one page at a time. Then I finished reading the table of contents to indicate that I had finished reading. **Male protagonist, **Novel

There's so much nonsense, the cool points are written in a mess, it's too watery

I really don't understand how this book got into the premium section.

The novel is still very good. The character creation, plot direction, and layout are all good. It's great.

The part about the Southern Territory was completely destroyed by you. It was too messy. A bunch of things were written together. Don't you think it's too crowded? !

It's okay, not that bad, and it's a good idea to read without thinking. There are no particularly bad points at the beginning of this book. If I have to say it is Chi Guyan. What she did to the protagonist was ruining his future. In the world of immortality, it would be considered a death-defying act to end a person's future. This is not good. But now that I have finished the book, I can't say anything more. The author's writing style is still very good. After reading serial novels for so many years, I have never liked finished novels, because finished novels always give people the feeling that there are no secrets. Apart from the few completed novels I read at the beginning, this is the first completed novel I have read in six or seven years.

This is my first time posting, and I really can't stand it anymore. It was originally a good book, but it dragged on at the end. There are dozens of chapters in one story. It's so long-winded.

Don't you think the male protagonist truly loves Yan Xiu? ① "However, when I left Yanjing City, I made an appointment with my friend, saying that I would meet again at the palace examination. Of course I couldn't break the promise." "Is a small agreement more important than life?" Wu Yu'er obviously didn't understand. After all, Fang Zhengyi was not a stickler for rules. "The agreement is not important. What is important is the person who made the agreement. "Is it Yan Xiu?" "Yes. " ② "Yan Xiu, how are you?" Fang Zhengzheng got up from the ground immediately after falling into the ring and hugged Yan Xiu from the ground. ③ No! I said that I want to defeat you, so I must defeat you. You! Fang Zhengzheng gritted his teeth, changed from passive to active, and rushed towards Yan Xiu. "Boom!" With a palm strike, Fang Zheng stood up straight and felt like he was about to fly, but before he could fly, his hands still reached Yan Xiu's side. Br> Subconsciously, he grabbed Yan Xiu. "Let's fly together!" Fang Zhengzheng had only one thought in his mind, so he held on to Yan Xiu tightly without letting go. ④ "You know you can't beat him, but you still want to go?" "How do you know if you don't try?" "Then if I tell you that the Southern Mountains are now almost completely controlled by the demons, it is impossible for a few people to come back alive from this martial arts test! You still..." When Wu Yu'er said the last thing, he couldn't go on. "If this is the case, I will go even more. "Why? "Because, he went. "Who?" "Yan Xiu!" "It's Yan Xiu again, are you even willing to risk your life for Yan Xiu?" Wu Yu'er knew that Fang Zhengyi had a good relationship with Yan Xiu, but she never thought that Fang Zhengyi could do this for Yan Xiu. "Yes." Fang Zhengzheng affirmed. I don't think I'm just looking at people with my evil eyes ==

The comment section made me laugh to death. A lot of people criticized the book 8 years ago. The performance of this book 8 years ago shows that this kind of book was very popular at that time. If one criticizes books with previous achievements based on current tastes, then looking at Doupo from today's perspective, isn't Doupo also a garbage book? Made me laugh so hard

There is so much rubbish. I have watched 90% of it, and it is getting more and more rubbish. I really don't know what I am spending my money on. It is really just to kill time.

I took a look at the plot and found it to be quite good. Jiangling Sanren came to visit with his humble work "Records of Mountains, Seas and Ghost Valleys".

The book is already poisoned after the protagonist becomes a saint. The first part is wonderful, but the second part is poisonous and extremely poisonous.

It is not recommended to read. The protagonist is a history major. History makes people wise. If you don't say that you are full of poetry and calligraphy, can you stop being like a little gangster? No, little gangsters are not so brainless now. . Isn't this how you behave when you are bohemian? . . . In short, it has too many flaws and has been withdrawn.

Why not kill Yun Qingwu? This kind of green tea biao is annoying to watch. There is also Chi Guyan. Just because she is the heroine, she can frame the protagonist all the time. Yun Qingwu has killed the protagonist several times, stabbing her once with a knife. In the end, the protagonist patted his butt and said: I am lucky, you can't kill me. Then he continued to lick the dog and was played around by the two women.

I really admire this protagonist, who is timid in doing things and endures it all day long. Why don't you talk about Unlocking the Map of All Things just because you're afraid of being beaten by Chi Guyan? Didn't you think that the Shenhou Mansion would definitely take it seriously if they found out? That aunt of the Li family is so mean, how can the protagonist tolerate it? Thanks to the fact that the protagonist said he had the temperament of a twenty-year-old in his previous life, the Li family bullied them all the way to their doorstep, and the protagonist's revenge was just like that of a child! This plot is also amazing. With his father losing his arm to save the village, more than a hundred households in the village are all ungrateful people? No one has a good relationship with your family? After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can tell that the protagonist of this book must be an enemy of the world. Wherever I go, there will be people who dislike the protagonist and want to step on him.

After reading four hundred chapters, I really can't stand it anymore! ! ! As we get to the end, I get more and more angry and want to curse. The first two hundred chapters are okay, but later on the plot feels more and more unreasonable. The opponent is much stronger than the protagonist, and the author starts to find various reasons and excuses to make the author and opponent evenly matched. If you are like other cool novels and the protagonist is invincible, then that's it. Damn it, you just wrote the protagonist before the fight, and you felt that there was a huge gap between you and your opponent, and there was no way to win. You still wrote nonsense, and then you used some means to level up the strength, mmp, is there a way to win or no way to win? And it's okay for you to be funny as the main character in the past. You are still funny every time when you are about to die. Are you sick? Don't you feel disgusted? And the traces of pretending to be a slap in the face are too obvious. Forget about the first two hundred chapters. Every time after that, others will mock you without thinking, and then the protagonist will slap you in the face. The key is that you didn't even pretend to be cool. There are too many such episodes. Especially the character of the protagonist is really unbearable. I shouldn't have read this book. I regret it so much. I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder. I feel as uncomfortable as eating the book after reading it. I really can't watch it. I thought I was looking for a good book to read, but mmp, I gave it up.