Steam Dawn

I have been a eunuch for so long, but this name still appears in the search results

There is no one in this book, I am SB😏

The subject matter is good, and other things can be used to see the effect.

But why do so few people watch it?

Author: Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Of course, the characters in the novel don't know what the "Slaying Archetype" is. The characters are well described. Fear and fear are innate to human beings. Becoming strong is not something you are born with, you have to work out step by step. From the beginning when the pig's feet were trembling with a gun, to when they turned into non-human beings and couldn't accept it for a while, the author neither talked nonsense nor exaggerated too much. So far, it's okay. One small request is that the character of Pig's Feet doesn't cross too far. In the first few chapters, he is still a hot-blooded young man, but in the next few chapters, he immediately turns into a cold-blooded killer. This type of plot is unacceptable to ordinary readers. Although Holy Mother is not popular nowadays, you should not be too cold-blooded and keep a certain degree of control. Don't always encounter bloody plots where people are jealous of you and want to kill you, and you kill them again. You can have female protagonists, one or two, it doesn't matter, but don't write that as long as they are female, they have a crush on pig trotters. Nowadays, many readers hope to see the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in a novel, instead of blindly going to stud. There are not many words now and I can't comment too much. I hope to work harder in the future. By the way, can you change the description of the protagonist's abilities? The description of the "black lines" is very inconsistent.

I hope all book friends can actively speak in the book review area Allowing authors to work harder on their writing I also hope that this book will get better and better as it gets written. Big cheers for the author