Urban Scholar

The first suggestion is, is it really good to write these four words (Haoran Zhengqi) every time the protagonist uses Haoran Zhengqi? It's too monotonous. It would be nice to write something special, such as a righteousness song. How about some poetry? Also, shouldn't Haoran's righteousness fall into the category of saying things according to the law? For example, if the protagonist writes a few lines of poetry or something to express Haoran's righteousness, it feels so inconsistent if he doesn't put it with his fingers. Let me give you an analogy. The protagonist reads: The child is silent, and the strange power confuses the spirit. Then something like Haoran Zhengqi appeared. (The current attack is too monotonous) Second, Confucian magic weapon refining category, such as book bar, you can use Haoran Zhengqi to write a book of your own theory. This book should be his magic weapon. (I feel like to become a real great Confucian, you must write a book like this, otherwise you will not be able to become a great Confucian by studying all your life) There are other things, such as jade pendants, jade nourishes people, people nourish jade, jade pendants that are often baptized with righteousness have special effects, folding fans, how can a scholar not have his own folding fan, write poems with righteousness on it, and draw on the side, look cool when nothing happens, use it as a weapon to explode when something happens. The sword is a Confucian sword that is upright and nourishing. The sword never leaves the body or comes out of the sheath. It constantly instills righteousness. When it is really needed, the sword can be drawn out with overwhelming aura. (Ultimate move, one-foot explosive type, but the sword is also warmed, so it will be easier to instill the aura of awe next time). In fact, in ancient times, few scholars drew their swords. The Four Treasures of the Study, this is something that a scholar really likes. The protagonist is a Confucian and Taoist arrogant person, but he has no hobbies at all. He should at least have some love for this thing. After several trips to ancient tombs, I didn't get any of the Four Treasures of the Study to put at home. Talking about the piano, this thing was loved by scholars in ancient times. Why didn't the author focus on writing about it? The third suggestion is more personal preference. For example, the theory of small worlds interested me very much. I added some personal preferences to it, such as other treasures that the protagonist can obtain, and then enter the so-called small worlds. These small worlds can go to the world of Ghost Story. In which world is there more than just Taoist military strategists? There is also a Confucian Zhuge in the prison. You can also go to other worlds to study, etc. It feels too monotonous to write about the modern earth, and it is not conducive to pretending to be X. I hope the author can think carefully after reading some of my suggestions. They are completely personal opinions and you can express them if you don't need to.

After reading it for several hours, I no longer wanted to write a novel, and now I have read more than ninety chapters. There are several women as the protagonists, but they are well controlled and there is almost no ambiguity. In the scene at the mountain village elementary school, the sentence "everything that should have happened in one night happened" simply made me dizzy. In the context of the current strict investigation, this is how it should be written. However, after reading more than ninety chapters, after the Confucian protagonist made a low-key breakthrough, Taoism, Buddhism, military strategism, and Yin-Yang sect appeared one after another. The vision was so amazing that it was normal for experts to see it, ordinary people could see it, and the whole world could see it. There were experts commentating on the Internet, and it felt like a bad atmosphere. For this part, let's not talk about the breakthrough vision that steals the limelight from the protagonist. It is the kind of vision that suddenly turns a modern city that is close to life into a high-tech city. It feels like a big span! ——————Personal words, please don't take offense! But because I really like this book, I would like to share my opinion and support its rapid update. Hundreds of thousands of words are not considered fat...

Does anyone have an author?** Can I ask what's going on? It's been so long and I haven't updated it for two years.

Very well thought out. Very poor writing. No wonder I can't write anymore. It feels like a junior high school student or at most a high school student (the kind who barely passed the exam) is piecing together a doctoral thesis.

Burning incense, paying homage, the soul returns

Hello everyone, I am the author. Some things are different even after they are cut off. They will not come back and cannot come back!

Eunuch, funny, shabi

Come back and write a book quickly. Why don't you stop writing if it's good?

Damn, when will this book be updated? I have been chasing him for two or three years.

The soul has returned - what a fart it has come back, the grass on the grave is already three feet high, it can't be summoned back.

Good subject matter, but it doesn't have the mood and connotation, which is a pity In a few years

Write less articles to spread the word. . Be careful of warning or blacklisting, the author regulations are written. I think it's better to have a lump sum Confucianism: It starts with the skin and ends with etiquette. It's not good to seduce a woman like this. Even if you are writing a novel, you should not have such thoughts. Just say it casually, whether you accept it or not is entirely up to the author. Connect with Confucianism in your heart

Good book, support the author, follow your own ideas and don't listen to those bird people who are chirping too much. This is the best way to go. Book it with a monthly pass.