God-Level Salesman

I didn't want to watch it when I had the VIP volume, but it was okay at the beginning. Mainly because the protagonist turned into something similar to a mantis monster, which is inexplicably a bit~~~~

The writing is full of talent, and the description of the characters and their style of life reflect your profound understanding of human nature and the world. This makes your novel feel authentic and credible, with a strong flavor of life. Hope to see new chapters sooner! Keep up the good work!!!

It means that I will never be satisfied with your update speed unless you update five times a day, and so will my friends.

This book has a good beginning and the content is refreshing. One of the highlights is that the protagonist can be stupid, but gradually becomes smarter. I also recommend that the author develop more funny and outrageous stories, but don't limit it! Only with stable updates can we create a world and gain countless readers. Respect! I hope the author will work hard and earn his own piece of the world!

I hate watching a sadistic main character, who makes the main character act like a fool. Who can watch it?

[Fn=2_9]It's getting better and better

It seems that he has entered the state. Tongtian strives to become a great god as soon as possible.

Very busy these days! Now go to Qidian and finish reading the chapters I haven't read! The condition is not very good! You can pay more attention to rest.

As can be seen from the settings in the previous chapters, the protagonist's shoulder pole is unreliable, selfish, and designed to deceive the protagonist. I think this is okay, and the salesman's sail should be set as a thing that is also intelligent. He should be specifically considered for the protagonist and set up to benefit the protagonist, just like when a person has an idea, there are two concepts, pros and cons. Why did the salesman's sail lose it? This is a foreshadowing. For example, the salesman is jealous, unpleasant, and selfish, and he specializes in cheating the owner. This requires the author to measure it, and then the function of the salesman... I am looking forward to it!

If you take the perspective of the salesman and treat it as the protagonist, then you will have a great time watching it [fn=2_4]

I just read the second volume and saw this sentence. It felt awkward to express myself as a student of biology. For this kind of content involving science, I suggest the author read more about Baidu Encyclopedia.

First of all, let me tell you that I have two accounts, and I can vote for you 11 times a day. I try my best to keep voting. The second is my evaluation. It's hard to agree on. Novels are like cooking, but I like your more reasonable way of writing, which is closer to reality. No one transaction has the power to rule the world, and one transaction will lead to a plot like a magic god's brother. I like your feeling of slowly farming. Of course, I have read other comments. When I brush points (that is, the protagonist upgrades), I hope it can withstand more scrutiny. That is to say, I hope the author will write more carefully about the inner thoughts of some characters, the struggles and choices of transactions, the authenticity of social issues, etc. In fact, the author said that he will rewrite the second volume or revise it in the future. Personally, I feel that online articles are rarely read a second time, and even the best masters rarely read them again. Therefore, I hope the author will put more thought into the subsequent plots and try to avoid novice problems. Finally, some suggestions: You can exchange trading points for knowledge! That is similar to consciousness instillation. Knowledge is very important for protagonists who face diversified transactions, I personally think. Although some people may say that all knowledge is useless when trading with high-tech planes or other extraterrestrial civilizations, in fact, as long as there is communication, all knowledge and common sense are hidden strengths that can improve the protagonist's ability. For example, you can first exchange for some knowledge and even experience in survival, combat, investigation, etc. In the elite force (personal understanding, Knowledge is learned, and experience is integrated into the human subconscious, such as the difference between typing and touch typing), and then various negotiation skills, psychological knowledge, observation of words, etc. Of course, these may require the author to check a lot of information and spend more energy. The choice is up to the author himself. The setting is that it can be exchanged for everything in the universe. Does it include parallel universes? Black technology? Martial arts? Superpower? Of course, this is the author's positioning of the work, so be sure to grasp it and don't be biased. This suggestion is just that the protagonist, as an ordinary person, needs to constantly enrich his brain in the process of growing up, otherwise it will inevitably appear as a novice in the future, because the protagonist will definitely stand at a very high height, so he must have the brain and knowledge to match it. Therefore, some knowledge in the army can be exchanged in the early stage, so that the protagonist's halo during the transaction process should not be so blunt that it affects the reading sense.

It's been a long time since I've read such a wonderful novel. Usually what I read is very serious =-= After seeing this book, I couldn't help but want to continue reading. Hmm... I'm not very good at speaking either. But it's really a good book, 🙂 I hope to continue reading it~🌹🌹

Wearing a salesman's uniform, carrying a salesman's load, holding a salesman's flag, and shaking a salesman's drum? The drumbeat that plays when others are most desperate, "Go out, go out, go out, go out," comes from far and near, and hits people's hearts like rain after a long drought. A salesman appeared at the end of the sky in the most unlikely place, like selling water in Taklimakan. The water buyer could hear the sound of the salesman's drum in a daze. He tried to look up and saw that there was a salesman in ancient costume at the end of the sand dune, walking slowly with a drum, a banner, and a load. Just one sentence when we get closer, can we be objective? Is it a human? Is it God? Or a fairy? After a transaction was completed, the drums were shaken, the flags were shaken, the flags were carried, and the burdens were carried as they walked further and further away, slowly disappearing at the end of the sand dunes in the sky. Only the sound of the drums could still be heard from a distance: "Hey, boom! Boom!". Is it a human? Is it God? Or a fairy?

The first seven or eight chapters were very good, but later on I felt like the writing style changed and the character attributes were wrong.

Li Niu died for him in the second volume. . The protagonist only wants revenge~~~What should Li Niu's parents do? ? ? This volume just opened is even more so? ? ? ? Yang Xiaozi rescued him and helped him. As soon as he came, he took a bath with all the water in the house. . This will determine how people will live in the future. . Although Young Boy may not live long? ? ? ? ? If the protagonist wanted Yang Xiaozi to leave with him, then it would be even worse. . . . To make people hopeless just to force them to take adventures with the protagonist? ? Not to mention whether the protagonist can take Yang Xiaozi out. . I don't think the protagonist is capable of taking people on adventures. . . Could it be the second Li Niu? ? ?

I feel that the most successful part of this book is the first few chapters of "Grandpa's Death". It writes about emotions, depicts customs, and has a strong visual sense, but it cannot be said later. So far, the second volume has not been mentioned. As for the third volume, the pace is a bit fast, and then what happens to the protagonist in real life is just like that. The writing is a bit not very good. It is not a plot problem, but a narrative problem. It needs to be carefully considered to write true feelings. It should not make people feel like they are keeping a running account. It should make people feel that the people in the story are flesh and blood, and the emotions and dialogues, as well as the design of the scenes, are very important. Real life is also very important. Don't let the protagonist always run around doing tasks. In the future, you can slow down the pace of tasks appropriately and write more about things and changes in real life, so that people have a sense of the main story. Overall, I feel that the theme of this setting is quite good, and I hope the author can write it well. 😄😁

The book was written by myself. It's impossible to do everything according to your wishes! After reading it, if you are not satisfied with anything, tell me. I humbly ask for advice. Change it if you can! If you have any opinions, please mention them! I accept it! It cannot be changed, it cannot be written well. You are unhappy. Then I won't ask you to see it! But! ! Who the hell comes up and curses people again, don't blame me for turning against you! Still nauseous? I beg you to read it. I felt so sick that I went home and vomited. Can you still read it if you feel nauseated? Call me a tease? I'd love to! I'm just kidding, please buy it? Everyone, I understand that you don't appreciate my hard work. You are upset, and I understand! However, no one is perfect, let alone a book written by someone? As for coming out and scolding me? Not much to say, I can only write as well as possible! I beg you to bear with me if I make you unhappy. If it feels like it stains your eyes. Top right corner? , No more words. I give it to you all...