Platinum Age

The story was originally very smooth, but because of this foreshadowing, the rhythm dropped a bit. From the perspective of online writing, if this paragraph is placed after 500,000 words, and the protagonist has accumulated a certain amount of experience, it should be a good idea. However, if it is placed at this rhythm point of Chapter 16, it cannot but be deeply regretted. Maybe the author won't think there's a problem with the pacing, but after reading this, most readers may lose the patience to read on. If I had to give a reason, it would probably be that I didn't master the rhythm.

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First of all, let me state that I haven't read much of the author's book, and I'm not a troll. I just have some suggestions. I won't talk about the writing of this book, not to mention I don't think I'm qualified to comment because I can't write it myself. My suggestions are from the industry perspective. I think the author should establish a better standard on the domestic Internet. Some people say that there are two Internet worlds in the world, one for the world and one for China. Because Chinese Internet companies all develop domestically and rarely go global. But from a practical point of view, the gap between China's BAT and some companies in the United States was not very big at first, but later the gap became very large. There are many factors involved, so I won't go into more details. I can't explain this clearly. The reason why I suggest this is that I think these companies are actually capable of going abroad to compete with those companies, but it has not happened in reality. This is something that makes me feel regretful. I hope the author can let the protagonist drive those companies to look at the world. To be honest, you can make a lot of money in China, but more money does not necessarily translate into influence. I personally think that simply having a market value is not very important, because your influence is not large internationally. For example, the market value of BAT is very high, but what influence does it have abroad? It is just that its influence is relatively large domestically, but its international influence is still much lower than that of GAF in the United States. I hope that in this book the author can see several giants that span the world. In fact, China's BAT all have this potential. If the protagonist rises alone and spans the world, while other companies are relatively weak, this is not bad, but I think it is a bit flawed. Okay, I have said so much, I don't know if I have made it clear, but my writing is not good, I'm sorry. I wish the author better and better as he writes. Finally, add some juice! It's not easy!

The book is very good, I support 🤭

With hundreds of millions of protagonists, other network information technologies can be developed.

It's the most annoying thing to wait for the update.

It's not just me. I just took a look and found that this is the case with many new chapters that have not yet been released. It must be a problem with the website. I hope everyone will wait.

This book would have become popular if it had less of a gory attitude at the beginning. Keep up the good work and keep an eye on you.

This book is the most enjoyable book I have ever read, bar none.

Fatten the chickens before killing them, finish writing before reading...

There are too many books. I finally found a good book. After reading two editions, I was attracted. I want to read it carefully. 🌹🌹

It's more fun when a loli appears 😚

It's like trying to buy something. Although I don't think I need it, I see others buying it, so I go up and buy some. I didn't want to take refuge at first, but when I saw that all the children from famous families had gone to join him, and they looked very promising, I changed my mind again.

After reading and updating, why do I have the urge to read this book again? Author, please update quickly, I can't help it anymore!

The action descriptions in the novel are quite good, with a very delicate feel, which perfectly brings out the characters' personalities.

I haven't watched it yet, so I don't know what it's like. Let's talk about it later

😊I personally think that as long as you have perseverance, there is nothing you can't accomplish, just work hard! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I've never been there before but it's as good as the author said! Although it only takes about 50 minutes to drive anywhere! ! Our Xitang and Wuzhen are not good either.