Silver Knight

The novel is good overall, but more work needs to be done on the details. The use of the first person sometimes makes it difficult to tell who is who. Come on!

The understanding of "freedom" in 2-1 is quite profound. This is probably how people feel when they are freed from any oppressive environment. Give it a thumbs up!

2-2 European desserts are indeed memorable, and I feel full of happiness after eating them. It seems that the author has put a lot of effort into them.

I have read 3-2 today, and the writing is getting better and better. I keep reading.

I finished reading it today, and I look forward to the author releasing the next story as soon as possible.

Read it again from the beginning and study it carefully.

The first few chapters are pretty good.

There are a lot of things written about the school, which is not very attractive. It would be better to be more concise.

There is too little tension in the previous chapters, it would be nice to have a few more engaging points.