Rebirth and Flying Against the Light

Although I am still reading this book and have subscribed, and I will probably do so in the future, I still want to scold the author! As for the reason, the book is okay. Although it has shortcomings, you can still read it, but it feels like the protagonist is reborn as a detective, really. Wrong classification. There must be many people feeling this way! And the plot is very confusing. I just wanted to curse a few words, but now that I think it's not easy for you to write a book, forget it.

1. The author's writing style is average, and the language and dialogue descriptions are a bit green. In terms of the sense of involvement, the author positions the psychological maturity of the protagonist at around 20-24 years old, with a youthful and sunny atmosphere and a somewhat deliberately smooth description. 2. The main line of this article has been circuitous. After rebirth, it is neither for wealth nor for power. Well, it has taken so long to write, but you are trying to be ambiguous. This style is not suitable for online articles. Is the style of life after rebirth one of enlightenment and disdain for money and power? There are so many ambiguous subjects in your article. Why do you have no money or power to ask? It will eventually break down 3. A rebirth story is written as a mystery story, and it is also brought into the main line abruptly. I would like to ask the author, is it clear whether this book is an urban rebirth story or an urban mystery story?

Do you need to wear the vest of rebirth when writing suspense? Are you so awesome that you need to be reborn? Hanging a sheep's head and selling dog meat! He also said that he likes to read other novels about how to use the knowledge of rebirth! You are not a novice! Why are you trying to be reborn? If you don't use the knowledge of rebirth, why are you reborn?

I read this book a long time ago, and it felt a bit like a flower girl's heartbeat. I liked it very much and wanted to keep it in my collection. I forgot about it as I kept it, but when I thought about it again today, I realized that the pig that I had worked so hard to raise (well, it wasn't hard work) died at a certain time that I didn't know. . I don't know if it will come back to life. .

This kind of literary style should be reserved for middle school and high school students. It's too embarrassing for an adult like me.

This book has probably been forgotten, haha!

It's still the old-fashioned way of saving so and so, the first thing to do after rebirth is to save the official career of parents and relatives (it just happened to be the time of rebirth), or to save a classmate who was raped, or to save someone who jumped off a building. You authors are not tired of writing such plots, but you are tired of seeing them. How can there be so many human life cases happening around you? You still know it clearly, your father, the director of the Public Security Bureau? ? And he helped your dad record various cases? ? ? ? ? ? ?

How can I become a detective and solve the case just by writing... Oh my god

. . . Is this a detective story? , Well, after reading it, I feel that the earth is very dangerous.

Lin Fan is like the sunshine in winter, which makes people look forward to more in the increasingly gloomy weather. After passing through layers of obstacles, he finally gets closer to the truth, allowing everyone to feel at ease; and Qin Rao is like a star in the snow, so pure and spotless, but floating on the ice, full of crises.

Mystery novel? Is it possible not to be reborn? The contrast is too great and it's not interesting. Is it just for fun?

At present, it is certain that this book has multiple female protagonists, which is acceptable. But personally I don't like stallion harems. Because if there are too many, the scenes will be scattered and the personality characteristics of the female protagonists cannot be written. Besides, the male protagonist does not have the ability to control ten women at night, and too many female protagonists will not be enough to feed. Currently, the policewoman and the goddess she had a crush on in her previous life have the most scenes and the most distinctive personalities, while the bestie duo is a bit less so, and Susan has the least. I think these are the number of female protagonists, and there can be at most one more in the future. Also, it's time for the male protagonist to consider his own career, whether it's one he likes but doesn't make much, or one he doesn't hate but makes a lot. It is absolutely impossible to have no money. Only when you have the strength can you speak loudly. Blindly relying on the background of the heroine is not a long-term solution. Career may not be the focus of this book, but it must be a part, because this world is very realistic, and no matter how smart you are in solving crimes, you can only play a small role. The way the author uses cases to connect the plot is very creative and wonderful. I look forward to the next story.

It's very beautiful, and it feels very immersive. It's really cool to outsmart others.

Very nice and youthful flavor. . . Stay tuned. Come on, I hope the update will be great! 😄

Well deserved: amazing talent and beauty!

🌹Keep up your hard work, author! Our school days, our memories!

After reading the first part, I thought it was the Great Nirvana. The suspenseful reasoning part at the end is very powerful and I couldn't stop following it.

I don't know how to write book reviews, and even if I do, I can't write anything constructive. All I know is that your book is right up my alley. I like to watch. I support it. I was happy to see it. I vote.

[Fn=2_7] Come on, author

I am a loser. The story contains my past and resonance. It also contains my regrets. I regret that I don't have many hobbies. I would like to walk through this book with you.

Author, how did you come up with such a powerful plot? I feel so happy now that I see it!

A combination of suspense and literature, the plot is unconventional, with twists and turns that are unexpected! Is the title of the book wrong? [Fn=2_4]

The author's writing skills are good, and the animation covers a lot. I'm tired of seeing the harem. He can write about the wealthy young lady Manman, the arrogant and arrogant young girl Gu Yanran, the contrasting cuteness and aloofness with girlish sentiments Qin Rao, and the royal sister policeman Onai Sang Xinchen. Are the four of them fighting?

Although there are many novels recently, it is really not easy to find such an excellent novel. You must read it carefully!

It is already taking the path of physical books, and can develop into film and television copyright development. It is a very good book, and I hope it will have a happy ending.

Such a wonderful novel, I read the latest chapter in one go. I hope the author will update it more quickly. Come on!

I really envy the person who can write such a wonderful story. The author must be a very imaginative and meaningful person, unlike me, alas, my handsomeness has been monotonous throughout my whole life.

Haha, the story written by the author has a compact plot, one link after another, the context is clear, and the skill is so profound. In just a few chapters, the character's personality is vividly displayed on the page, a magical pen! The entire structure of this novel is easy to understand, concise and attractive.

Although it is set in a youth campus, it unfolds from a suspenseful perspective. The author's various whimsical ideas and delicate writing style create a charming world. The novel is exciting and unique. Watch out for you!

He said that the last time he gave rewards and subscribed was when he was reborn in Nirvana... The book is good, keep up the good work! PS: What's a bit dissatisfying is that it seems that Lin Fan doesn't have any advantage of rebirth. . Have you read more about Detective Akatsuki? 🤫