The Great Magic Guide

The writing is quite interesting and novel. It is different from common novels and has its own ideas. But the writing is not very good. People's thoughts are not so simple. In fact, your book is a bit like the Once Upon a Spirit Sword Mountain at the beginning of the Invincible Edition. However, your writing is not as rounded and complete as the Spirit Sword Mountain.

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In my personal opinion, it is simply a SB setting. Let's not talk about the benefits of monopolizing knowledge. Let's just say that resources will not increase if there are more mages. Isn't this causing trouble for yourself? ? Things are rare and valuable, and if there are too many mages, they are worthless.

No newcomer can write a book of this level. It is already very good. It has its own style and captures the key points.

The first thing I care about every time I read is the plot, ahem, and of course the introduction, so Jian Yue is the most important. The author has some time to think about the introduction. A cool introduction is bound to have good results.

Not to mention anything else, I like to follow novels that are updated steadily. Therefore, it is cruel to stop reading, and it is difficult to pick up what is broken. . So, be sure to keep updating, otherwise...

Come on, it's not bad. Let's collect it first and keep it for a while.

This novel is very good, the story develops with great twists and turns, and the writing is very good. It can be called a rare masterpiece. But some work needs to be done on the description of the environment. Rome wasn't built in a day, and good books aren't built overnight either. Keep at it! Every new book has a lonely journey! To succeed, you have to be more diligent than others and keep working hard! Come on! Have confidence in yourself! A true writer must be able to resist loneliness and loneliness, stick to his conscience in the impetuous reality, and burn the spark of thought in the darkness. Have faith - good books will not be buried in the wind and sand after all, time can prove everything!!!

It's tiring to wait until it gets better, it's so troublesome, collect it first, and then kill it when you're done.

The writing is really good, the story is very suspenseful and interesting. I hope the author can maintain this style and continue with more updates. There are too few and it is not enough to read. I can't find more words to evaluate this book. To put it simply, it is one word, good. The setting is good, the story is good, the writing is good, and the style is good. If the only bad thing I have to say is that the updates are too slow, and I am impatient, I just want to say one thing. Why don't you hit the pig's feet all the way to the sky? Why aren't you surrounded by beautiful women? Wow, this book gives people such a strong sense of expectation and full sense of immersion. It also describes the characters very well and is very down-to-earth. I have a rather impatient personality, and I can't wait to see pig's feet stepping on people without limit, pretending to be pigs and eating tigers without limit, and then I'll slap and touch a beautiful woman when I see one. Hahahaha, okay, author, calm down, you write slowly and update slowly, I can afford to wait, but really don't be too slow, otherwise I will only read it once a week. I don't like to catch up with updates every day, it is too troublesome. If your updates in one week are not enough for me to read, then I will have to save up and read it once a month. What makes my eyes light up the most is not your setting, the author, nor the exciting rhythm. It's your characterization of details, which must be mentioned here, starting from the first chapter, all the way to the current update. Many authors tend to overlook details, but you handle them very well and make people feel very meticulous. The worldview and values ​​are very good. It's rare to see good Western fantasy books. Have you written any other books before? If it is really a new book written by a newcomer, it would be very good. The details make this book more three-dimensional and perfect. Big cheers and support.

Ouch! I watched the mountain go into the ditch. This is not to say that the author is in trouble, but that the plot of this book is really ups and downs~

There are so many characters that I feel a little confused when I look at them. I still haven't sorted out the characters in Dream of Red Mansions, so I hope the author's novel will not have many, many characters, otherwise I will be dazzled and I only have you in my eyes. Therefore, the protagonist, you are the real protagonist.

I strongly demand more chapters, please support me brothers! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

... The living Long Aotian

Hello Long Aotian, Goodbye Long Aotian

Chapter 30: The Iron Mountains have become elites in Fern and Komoz Chapter 34 En and Comoz also entered the elite realm

Even if he has been at home for three hundred years, he would not have this character. He is saying that he still knows how to use mobile phones, which means he can access information. . . Well, I can only say that this book is not my cup of tea. What I hate the most is the idea of ​​​​discussion between people I don't know, and the idea of ​​​​a draw. Of course, there is another saying that there is no most XX, only more XX. Let me add one more. Compared with the previous two, the character of the protagonist in Japanese animation is even more annoying. The inexplicable and incomprehensible Chuuniu. Well, I am talking about the protagonist of this book.

It is very disgusting and disgusting for someone else to learn their own abilities to attack the protagonist, even if she is not as good as the protagonist