Returning from the World of Immortals

If you are short of books or feel depressed, you can read this book to express your emotions, but I personally find it difficult to follow it. It's a pretty cool article, but it's too watery! Basically Protagonist: Come here and die! Villain: I am so-and-so from XX organization/XX sect/XX family, you, you can't kill me! The protagonist takes action. Villain (Performance 1): Don't kill me, I can give you money,) I will give you status, beauty, and xxx... Villain (Performance 2): If you dare to kill me, the forces behind me will massacre your parents, your relatives, your lovers, and your friends! In the end, the protagonist kills the villain Anyway, I didn't find any developments other than these two, and it happens once every 3-5 chapters on average, and I can't even change a few words. It was okay at first, but the main character was a bit awkward at best, but who has no temper? But the subsequent dozens or hundreds of chapters are all the same and boring. Especially for the villains, what if some of the second-generation X generation don't know where to start and are trying to attack people everywhere? The leaders of the aristocratic sects that have been passed down for thousands of years are just confused when they come up. How do these organizations survive to this day? And the methods are all dirty tricks like kidnapping and threats... By the way, what I find more interesting is... I wonder if the author thought carefully when he chose the name. The "Demon Emperor" who established the "Demon Kingdom", the weapon he built for himself is actually called the Tianhuang Demon-Slaying Halberd! Kill the devil! Do I kill myself?

I specially downloaded the app to comment. Normally I never read unfinished books, but I saw that your book has more than 2,000 chapters. I thought it would be almost finished if I didn't finish it. To be honest, the writing at the beginning was really good. When I finished the Earth Chapter, and when I entered Xiazhou and saw a sect with more than a dozen geniuses, I guessed that the rest of it was just a running account, but I still read on. I really can't stand it when I see 1200. You are too outrageous. Chapter 2000 is still in Xiazhou, and the progress of the main plot is slow. I calculated that the completion of your book will require at least 6,000 chapters. I will not be able to finish it in my lifetime. Moreover, the most important thing about the invincible cool novel is to expose the identity and fight back. If the pig's feet are fighting back from the beginning to the end, there is no passion at all. In addition, there are a lot of running chapters, being despised by the minor characters, and countless supporting characters, which is a waste of words. Just look at the title of each one. I'm so sorry, goodbye.

Damn it, Xiao Fan's performance was so good, it was a bit cheap, I laughed. The bloody man was kicked out of the live broadcast room because of his excessive words

You fight so much nonsense with just one routine every time! The villain looks like a mentally retarded child, so just don't write it.

I've been following the book for two years, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a happy ending.

It has gotten better and better since the mid-term, and there have been a lot fewer problems, but the pace is still a bit slow. It makes people feel uncomfortable watching it. It is recommended to speed up some main plots (recovery of strength, the connection of 72 Xiazhou Gate) (Every time I see the plot about the Demon Kingdom, it always makes people excited 😃)

I just looked at how long it took the author to write this book. It took almost 5 years to write this book and it only has a few million words. It's too lazy.

Can you do it more neatly? It's uncomfortable for everyone.

How to say it! In fact, it is really a pity. I have been following this book for almost five years, and I have always hoped to continue reading and finally see the ending. Now that the matter has come to this, there is nothing to say. I hope that the demon can cheer up. Your book friends and I are looking forward to your new book and look forward to you 👍{"NickName":"Crazy Demon","UserId":210612975}

It's amazing how long it took four years to write a book, and more than two thousand chapters using the same formula. When they go to one state to cause trouble there, the main supporting characters first set the stage, this one is shocked, that one is terrified, this one gets together, that one gets together, and then they all get excited with each other. The protagonist leaves at the critical moment, and then is dragged to the next location. This shock, that horror, this one gathers together, that one gathers together. It feels almost the same, and the protagonist slips away again. Then continue to the next one, and finally it looks like it's almost done. Kill this state uniformly and go to the next state. Then the news couldn't get out, and some people were blocked and others didn't dare to talk about it. Go to the next state, and then be looked down upon, and then offend this person and that person, all kinds of cycles, all killed together. Statistically speaking, when you arrive in a state - mess with this and that supporting character - move forward and backward - kill in one place - block information - next state - mess with this and that supporting character - move forward and backward - kill in one place - block information - next state. . . . (It seems that the author said that there are thousands of xiashu, and it is estimated that he can write about 100,000 chapters), and then the supporting characters are all kinds of self-hypnosis and pretending to be asleep. I really want to know if Zhongzhou will still be like this when I write about it later. But I was bored enough to follow this book for four years. . . . (According to the more than two thousand chapters in four years, more than one thousand of the two thousand chapters are in Xiazhou. If you write down Xiazhou, count 10, one hundred thousand divided by one hundred and ten thousand, ten thousand times one thousand, ten million divided by five hundred, 200,000 years, you can write until 202019 🙂🙂🙂🙂 Do not count and go to the middle and upper level)

Yes, the title I saw is correct. It is the same as my mood at this moment. It is unspeakably exciting. You finally updated, I thought you had another problem. I've been worried about you for a while. Everything is done, except for the black and white photos. Results. . .

Didn't you say you wanted to leave? I'll give you a trap, the group of people I brought here from Earth.

Stop procrastinating so much. It's best to finish it after Chapter 100. I'm tired of watching it.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, there are many unreasonable places, but one thing is very interesting. In every chapter, many friends make crazy comments, and while making comments, they do not delay in continuing to read the book.

Don't worry, the author said it will be updated normally.

Brother, can we write faster? 😭

I forgot, can anyone tell me who Ye Keer is? Waiting online😥😥

I'm a student party member and I don't have the strength to give you an umbrella or a monthly ticket. I plan to relax for a while, and I will vote for you during this period! Welcome back! Your biggest fans, Yuewen writer Heng Gu Xingyan, here's to you!

Waiting for the update. I have been pursuing this book for so long. I hope the author can finish it.

I have been saving updates since the end of March... I started reading Global Gaowu. I saw the current progress of Gaowu after a month and found that only 20 chapters have been updated... 😳 I wonder if I should re-read The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality before reading this book 😎

There are problems with details, neither big nor small.

I can't get enough of it. This author's writing suits my taste. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The writing is very good. I don't know why I want to criticize the author. You are so awesome, why don't you write something yourself and support the author. Come on. The author's writing style is also mature and is nothing compared to literary talent. You *** can't appreciate it...

Nothing to say, monthly pass 5

It will probably take a few years before I finish writing this.

After painstakingly collecting more than 20 chapters, I returned to the pre-liberation period in the last one to two hours.

After reading Chapter 2433, I always feel that there is something wrong with Lao Yao's description, but I just can't find it.

"Don't think Xiao Fan..." Xiao Fan glanced at Lin Shan, Qing Ning and others, then shook his head and said

The villain is about to die and yet he shows his face and lets people beat him, which is a bitch

Support the author😫