Return from the Immortal Heroic World

I've been reading it since you wrote the first volume, and I've been reading it until now. Although I had some time to see it in the middle. But that's also no money. That's what you said today. We are too embarrassed to watch. We're back to support you. Although I have no money, I still have money for subscriptions. We support you in spirit. Come on. A book friend who will always be with you.

I was reading the comments before and saw that someone said that the book "Two Thousand Years of Life" was well written. I left it excitedly, but I was defeated without reading it. Because I was disgusted by the author's tone! Let's not talk about how well the book was written, but the author's tone sounded like he was talking about 280,000 yuan. At first glance, he looked at that arrogant attitude and thought he was a great god like Jin Yong, Gu Long, and Huang Yi! The problem is that even Jin Yong can be open-minded and follow the readers' suggestions to make some minor modifications. And that guy was so crazy before he became a god. This reminded me of a saying - "A wolf in the sub-family will be rampant when he succeeds." There are indeed many unpleasant things about this book, so I won't list them all. Let me just say one thing. From the very beginning, this book is basically a show-off, with old friends (especially the female characters) being basically snobbish. There is nothing new in the plot, which will bore readers who have seen too many such plots. But this is a problem of the author's writing skills, not an attitude problem! We can tolerate an author's slow growth, because if he doesn't like it, he can abandon the book and leave. But an author's attitude towards readers is the most important. Except for DouM, no reader can tolerate a willful author! No matter how good an author's book is, if it offends readers, it is certain that it will be blacklisted by at least some readers, regardless of the results. This book does have a lot of shortcomings, and the author's writing skills really need to be improved. This requires everyone to help the author grow. But one thing about the author is very good, and that is his attitude of accepting advice with an open mind! I originally couldn't stand it after reading more than 30 chapters, but when I saw the few words the author said at the end of Chapter 39, I was moved and decided to read it patiently. Because, no matter how the book is written, at least the author is a person who can listen to other people's suggestions! It is important for people to be self-aware, and for authors with such qualities, as long as they persevere, I believe they will one day succeed. In this process, he needs our encouragement and help, not sneers and ridicule. After all, if you don't like it, you can just not subscribe or reward it, so why bother saying bad things? I originally wanted to say that I hope the protagonist has a bit of a temper (especially when facing women), and doesn't act as if he wants to do whatever he wants, or be indifferent. That kind of character is high-end, but readers may not be happy after reading it. But after reading later, I found that the author was already aware of this, so I stopped talking about it. But one thing to note is that the attitude towards women needs to change, but it does not mean that you have to go to the other extreme when facing anything. Finally, I would like to make a personal suggestion, that is, the favor to the Lin family should be repaid when he agreed to rescue Mo. I personally don't want the protagonist to owe the Lin family anything anymore, let alone have anything to do with the Lin family. To put it bluntly, I just hate that Yueyue! The author has successfully created a disgusting female character, but the author may not have thought that many people attach great importance to the first impression. Once a disgusting impression is formed, even if they try to reverse it later, the effect will probably be insignificant. Most readers don't care why she developed such a temper, if they don't like it, they just don't like it! And the same is true for me. I don't even hope that the author will change. In my heart, I can't accept that woman as the heroine unless she suffers enough! Therefore, I really don't want the protagonist to stay in the Lin family anymore, because as long as he is there, the protagonist will become a good person because of so-called favors, such as saving Murong and Lao Mo. This is really fucking annoying. I know that the author wanted the protagonist to hang out in the Lin family for the sake of the later plot, but I said that I am not afraid of the author being angry. Your writing power makes this need not recognized by me. Instead, I feel that after the protagonist returns, whether it is personality, temper, or the way he behaves and handles things, he has failed! The above is my personal opinion, and I have no intention of interfering with the author's writing ideas! It's just an ordinary reader venting his dissatisfaction after reading the book. I hope the author will not blame you.

How do you say it? Mingzhu doesn't tell secret words. That's right. I'm here to give the author a big shout-out. I have subscribed to all the books. I had repeated subscriptions on another platform before. All the monthly tickets were given to the author. Except for the votes cast by mistake, all the recommendation votes were given to this book. The fan value has also reached a master. In the future, if I have money, I will give the author a silver alliance or something (you guys are competing with me). If others can use this to say something, I can also say it. I don't think the author is good at all, but there are all the details that should be there, so that the story plot is full. Some people think that the process of the author's writing is too long. It is better to just write the climax, which is about one person and one character. I think the author's writing is pretty good. I also feel that whether in novels or in life, some things have a process or even a relatively long process before they have results. It is better than having direct results (I mean some things, ha~) I think the author's rhythm of basically two updates a day is pretty good. So what? Come on, you demon.

Great God, are you from Henan? Let me go, why have I been following you for so long without looking at your profile? Zhengzhou is very close to my place. I often go to Zhengzhou and I really don't pay attention.

Author, I read this book from beginning to end , to be honest, as a newcomer, you are indeed very good in terms of writing and conception, but don't you think you have made a big mistake? First of all, you wasted so much time just in Xiazhou, which obviously gave readers the feeling of trying to fill in the number of words. And don't you think you have fewer and fewer words now? What a good book wants is the essence, not letting readers savor your ramblings. I haven't given you a recommendation vote recently, and the number of people commenting on your chapters is getting smaller and smaller. Don't you have a little foundation in your own mind? This is all, take control of yourself, and really don't let us readers down again.

If you are short of books or feel depressed, you can read this book to express your emotions, but I personally find it difficult to follow it. It's a pretty cool article, but it's too watery! Basically Protagonist: Come here and die! Villain: I am so-and-so from XX organization/XX sect/XX family, you, you can't kill me! The protagonist takes action. Villain (Performance 1): Don't kill me, I can give you money,) I will give you status, beauty, and xxx... Villain (Performance 2): If you dare to kill me, the forces behind me will massacre your parents, your relatives, your lovers, and your friends! In the end, the protagonist kills the villain Anyway, I didn't find any developments other than these two, and it happens once every 3-5 chapters on average, and I can't even change a few words. It was okay at first, but the main character was a bit awkward at best, but who has no temper? But the subsequent dozens or hundreds of chapters are all the same and boring. Especially for the villains, what if some of the second-generation X generation don't know where to start and are trying to attack people everywhere? The leaders of the aristocratic sects that have been passed down for thousands of years are just confused when they come up. How do these organizations survive to this day? And the methods are all dirty tricks like kidnapping and threats... By the way, what I find more interesting is... I wonder if the author thought carefully when he chose the name. The "Demon Emperor" who established the "Demon Kingdom", the weapon he built for himself is actually called the Tianhuang Demon-Slaying Halberd! Kill the devil! Do I kill myself?

Team formation begins (1/∞) We are here to welcome Demon Emperor Xiao Fan, who will come back to rebuild the Demon Kingdom and dominate the Central Imperial Realm.

Can you recommend any invincible novels? Reading online articles is just for fun and enjoyment. The pace of this book is just a bit slow, the protagonist is ruthless enough, and it was fun to read. The devil doesn't know whether to open a new book or not. I pursued the previous Sword God book together with this one, and the results were both...

After this fight, the Demon Emperor will go to Zhongzhou and fight with a group of children. This fight will cost two to three thousand chapters. Then I ran to Shangzhou and fought with children again, and wrote another two or three thousand chapters.

Is this the great emperor's virtue? There are so many dungeons that a passerby would have to introduce them in detail, which is as good as my elementary school composition.