A Knight's Delightful Journey

I always feel that the author is a bit literary, and goes into too much detail in some places. It might be better to write more concisely.

The first chapter said that he was shot through the chest by countless arrows, and then fell into a pool of blood. The third chapter talks about being surrounded by a group of ghouls and bitten to death. . . Couldn't he be shot through the chest by countless arrows and fall into a pool of blood, still alive, and then be surrounded by a group of ghouls and bite him for a long time before dying?

The age of the protagonist has never been determined. At first it was said to be around 16, but later the female mercenary said in another conversation that it was around 20. .

The characters and locations in the book look like those of the Centenary Knights of the Gods.

After reading about ten chapters, I feel that the author's writing style is excellent, and the scenery is described so accurately that it feels like being there! However, the character portrayal is a little thin and lacks depth. The main problem is that the plot design is far-fetched. (Most online article authors are unwilling to focus on this aspect, and just fill in the content after a routine.) This often causes logical contradictions and affects the fluency of reading. For example, the pig's trotter in this article has obviously just traveled through time (the memory of its predecessor has not been fully found). He just got involved in the civil strife of his family. The predecessor of the pig's trotters does not seem to have a "stirring up" job and personality. (In the article, the pig's trotters are also "eager to try")

The rhythm is very good, not too slow or too fast, and the content is rich and not boring. The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters is just right. The supporting characters will not overshadow the protagonist, and the supporting characters will not have their own roles at all. It's just that I can't figure out who is who in terms of names. Each name is so long. Up to now, I only remember Edward, Alan, and Webber. I can't even remember who the lord and the lord's wife are. So far, the power system and levels of this world are unclear. A single servant has the strength to kill dozens of ghouls, and I don't know how a real knight can be killed. Magic only appears when the ghouls appear, and the wizard doesn't seem to have any means other than ghouls. It makes me feel like a pseudo-magic. All other battles are manifestations of force. However, in my opinion, the amount of power does not have an absolute relationship with the level of the knight, but depends on the achievements made and whether the lord is willing to reward him. The content is generally very interesting, but there are still very few chapters, which gives people a feeling that it is not enough to read. I look forward to writing more, but the style should not change because of this.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

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