Horror City

It is not recommended to enter the trap, it is a bit similar to harem literature, and there are also situations where you are shy when you see women, can't walk, and touch your nose. Because I saw someone saying that the protagonist can become stronger by entering the gray world and killing monsters, but did not report it to GJ, and the protagonist only thought about his own development, and fell into the trap selfishly. At present, I have only read Chapter 21, and I feel something is wrong. I looked for book reviews again, and I have summarized the bad points for your reference. 1. There is a heroine, and some supporting characters with ambiguous women, but it seems that there are not many descriptions of them. The heroine just writes about her (basically hey hey) 2. When seeing women, he is shy, can't walk, touches noses and other similar situations 3. There seems to be pets, a dragon who wants to keep children at home, and a arrogant phoenix who wants to be public. . . 4. The question of adding points is that instead of adding strength and speed, martial arts is added. It seems that boxing is also added. . . Do you fight monsters with your fists? Forget it about improving martial arts, knowing that in reality it would take decades of practice to achieve any level of proficiency, why not rush to the gray world to gain points, saying that you can save attribute points by practicing for a while first. . . Isn't it so hard to save dozens or hundreds of points just to farm some monsters and get them back in minutes? Also add cooking skills. . . However, there is an explanation for this. It is said that you can make dishes with added attributes, but you can't make more in reality? Also give it to the apprentices who have been accepted. . . 5. Accepting a disciple, alas, there is not much to say, just being a nanny, and pretending to be B, highlighting the role of the protagonist 6. Forming a team to fight monsters, pretending to be B, highlighting the role of the protagonist's role 7. Wait for example, some plot fragments are scattered and have no main line.

A book of 1 million words contains at least 300,000 words describing the attributes. Almost every chapter must list the protagonist's current attributes. I bit the bullet and read dozens of chapters, vomited, and decided to abandon the book and leave a negative review!

More than five million words are made out of water. The attribute panel was deliberately broken down into a bunch of attributes and written at least once in each chapter. I didn't know it until I watched it later. I was extremely speechless in the early stage. A normal person's IQ is 10, but the male protagonist's is only 7. This is the most mentally retarded male protagonist I have ever seen in a system novel. The male protagonist is indeed a person with an IQ of only 7. He has no money to buy the energy needed for martial arts training, so he goes to a noodle shop to eat several bowls. I don't even understand how to save money by cooking for myself. And he was very confident that he didn't add any IQ and thought it was enough. Not only can you think of more ways to make money if you increase your IQ, you can also have more ways to fight monsters. Then I still have this level of IQ, and I dare not tell the master about my martial arts progress, for fear that the master will think that I am just starting out. The author doesn't know if he is referencing too many fairy tales about killing people and seizing treasures. The male protagonist lives in a normal society. That's right, this novel can be summed up as the adventures of a brainless and violent man in another world.

I can't help but complain, the author has been a veteran for more than ten years, and his pen name is such a powerful name as Taoist Tiger. Even if the characters in the novel are not sophisticated, can't they be written in a more mature way? ? If you bare your arms at all times, you will be shy and blush. If a girl talks to you for a few words, you will blush and your heart will beat faster. You would like to find a hole in the ground to crawl into? Do you find perverts trudging arrogantly every time you take the bus? ? Is it realistic? ? No wonder I found so many comments when I read this book. Both the author and the protagonist have the same mental age as a child, and there is no sense of empathy at all.

The author of "Feelings of Family and Country" has dealt with the awkwardness of reading, and it's quite good to add some points at the beginning. Why is it that after the hundredth chapter, the country, emotions, and family are so uncomfortable to write about? Let's just talk about the country. Judging from the background, it should be an era of modern information development. So many people disappeared suddenly in the city where the protagonist was, and creatures different from reality appeared. Every time they appeared, several to more than a dozen people died. The country was completely unaware of the changes in the world. Did the author think of a country too weakly? That is a collective It combines most of the talents of the billions of people. In addition, with the gradual integration of reality and the gray world, the impact on reality is getting bigger and bigger. The protagonist, especially after reaching 3-star terror, still only cares about himself, and also tries his best to erase the signs of the existence of the gray world. Don't you think about whether the earth's civilization will still exist after the integration, and will the people the protagonist cares about be safe? You have always wanted to buy an island and live on your own. When your personal strength is not superior to that of the country, do you think you can protect yourself and the people you care about by yourself? Even if you have strength that exceeds that of the country, how will your life be different? Especially since the protagonist has served in the military and has not been retired for a few years, and his family has not had any major disasters, how can it change so quickly? And the protagonist obviously realizes that the real world is not safe, but he does not strengthen his family, but only gives them props that can deal with ordinary monsters. There are obviously foods that increase the strength of ordinary people, so he should at least train his younger brothers and sisters, and he can also protect his parents. Not to mention they are young, they are not younger than the protagonist's apprentice To be honest, some book friends are right. The protagonist in the article only thinks about himself, only the strong and the weak. As for the protagonist's behavior of not hurting others casually, the author often mentions it. It is very deliberate to say that the protagonist has a bottom line. Isn't it normal after receiving compulsory education and serving as a soldier for several years? I hope that the author's new book can handle the relationships involved such as family and country feelings well, and that the protagonist's character setting should be reasonable.

I read this book twice. The first time I saw more than 100 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. Then I came back after finishing the book and continued reading. The more I read, the more embarrassed I became. I decisively gave up again at chapter 334. The subject matter of the book is very good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough, and he uses all kinds of idioms and allusions indiscriminately, and there are many common sense mistakes. When I read the book, I could make corrections in my own mind and I could barely read it. However, the lack of consistent writing method is very frustrating. It feels that the author has no outline at all. He writes wherever he thinks when trying to make up the number of words. He forgets what he wrote before and then forgets what he wrote before. The realm of the protagonist has improved, and he will improve again after dozens of chapters. There are many similar problems.

I came from a book shortage, I couldn't stand it until chapter 300. It's not enough, the characters have no three-dimensional sense, and the group's IQ is low. The plot in the middle was extremely dull, and I kept watching it. And don't forcefully explain some plots, it will be very embarrassing.

This book was also very novel at the time. Drinking and driving specific activities to enter the gray world Used the elements of the Classic of Mountains and Seas, and adopted real-life culture and human activities that would form monsters and terrain in the gray world, the people of Long Bo, the martial arts hall, the white mist dragon horse, the market with flesh and blood altars, the imprisoned Yanlong, the female child who served in the Ministry of Thunder, and the unique skills and point system. It was a very creative book at the time

I watched it when I was in junior high school. The subject matter was really good.

It's outrageous. This book clearly shows that it is Horror City, but I searched for Horror City ten thousand times and it showed that there is no such work on this site. Moreover, even with any fuzzy search and related works, I can only search for the author and then find the bottom of the author's homepage.

In Chapter 5, the description of the item is written, and it is non-toxic. Thunder Bug Electric Pill: The core power-generating organ of the two-star biological thunder bug. It is non-toxic, edible, and its function is unknown. Even though I've been told it's non-toxic, I still dare not eat it for fear of being poisonous.

The first time I read this book, I thought it was a masterpiece. Looking back, I couldn't explain it in one sentence. IQ is off the charts. A person grows 10 centimeters in one day, but people around him notice it and still think it's normal? As a normal person who encounters something strange, you can question it in your mind and pretend not to know, or you can ask it in person, or you can lengthen the timeline a little bit so that this change does not happen in a short time, but the author rationalizes and arranges this shocking plot. Pai, just like you are not shocked when you see aliens, but take it for granted. The author obviously did not write the book from the perspective of a passerby. No matter what direction it is, it is also the part about signing life and death signs and doing black boxing. You took on a genius apprentice and only practiced for a few months before letting him fight with others? If you knew in advance that the apprentice was in trouble, it would be okay. But if you didn't know and didn't stop it, you would indulge in his behavior. Author, tell me, did you secretly give the protagonist master a spoiler in advance? To sum it up in one sentence, the supporting characters are as soulless as IA, have a poor sense of immersion, and look awkward.

Are there so many people below that hate this book? It was a masterpiece back then. Nowadays, basically no new book on this platform can beat this book.

15 Years of writing, 21 years of scolding, I'm really convinced

Chapter 11: Is it Jia Kedao or Wei Xiaobei who adds some muscle?

In my day, whenever I get the chance, I would take out all the attribute data and list the numbers of them. It's so disgusting.

The writing style of this book is not very good, but the ideas are really good. The gun with eyes, the moving building, and the atmosphere are quite good.

I heard that a very strange thing happened in the book review section here. People often die suddenly while typing. In fact, I

All the characters in this book, whether they are gods or monsters, monsters or kings, have the same IQ and EQ as junior high school students They will get angry when they encounter someone unhappy, they have no sense and no brains Even gods will get angry if they are scolded a few words If they are praised a few words, they will immediately feel happy

What impressed me the most was using other people's leg hair to skewer meat for barbecue, and using the ores from the Dragon Dung Lake to make a cooking pot. Adding some physical qualities such as arms and legs gave these parts a sense of autonomy, which I will never forget after so many years.

When I'm bored, I look around for books to read. If I pass by, just ignore me.

No, normal people should report to the country, especially soldiers, why, because in summary, the protagonist only has a panel when he comes to this world instead of a personal golden finger, and he also meets other people. When the protagonist returns to reality, there is no need to confirm whether that person is dead or has disappeared. The protagonist just wants to develop himself. A selfish person, because he got the power. Selfish and brainless.

The part about fighting alone in a strange world and quietly upgrading is good to watch, but the part about finding apprentices to build a martial arts gym and maintaining peace in the real world is super ugly.

I watched it before when I was in high school, but I forgot the name later on, so I just remembered a few snippets. A giant leg appeared in a certain chapter in the middle and late stages. I searched for it and finally found it 😂

The big hole dug by the author in the early stage has not been filled. What happened to the invisible female ghost in the rental house and where did it come from?

I read part of it in junior high school and couldn't remember the name. I just remembered the content of the first few chapters and described it to Doubao. Doubao's magical power helped me find it, but it doesn't suit my taste anymore.

Giving money to apprentices brings benefits, but I don't see them having any effect at all. It's just a nanny article. Those who have never eaten it can take a look, and those who have eaten it can also take a look. This one is more pure.

The biggest gap between all lv5 writers and great writers is that great writers will never write highly toxic content. So it's natural that some people can't be popular.

I keep improving my IQ. The more I lack something, the more I like to mention it. 🐷Brain overload stuff

I really miss it. I didn't read many online novels at that time. This book was very novel to me at the time.