I Am the King of Football

When writing about football, especially if the protagonist is Chinese, there are inevitably several minefields. The first one is domestic football. This is no exception. Whoever touches it will die. The real domestic fans are not young, and they should also have certain financial capabilities. Some of them read online novels. Most of the people who read novels are pseudo-fans, and they mostly pay attention to European leagues, international stars and the like. I've watched a lot of Champions League, European Cup, World Cup, etc. How many of them can I watch in the Chinese Super League? , The second problem is the cheat code. People don't like to read this thing if it is used too much. If it is not cheated, it is impossible to write at all. Personally, I feel that the "kung fu" aspect in Golden Finger is the most annoying. Kung Fu is Kung Fu, and football is football. If you say: Cuju can be combined with Kung Fu, where do football and Kung Fu come from? Practicing kung fu requires good health, but it is probably too much for these people to run tens of thousands of meters. Kung fu focuses on health preservation and instant explosive power. There are many people who pay attention to defeating the enemy with one move. The endurance is bound to be poor. In reality, the winner can be determined in a few minutes of practicing kung fu. How can anyone fight for an hour and a half? According to the author's logic, the army is full of Olympic champions. In fact, it should be written according to the author's previous writing method when Kung Fu did not appear. Although there are still some flaws, after all, the flaws are not covered up, but the later part. . . . . Personal opinion. Forget it if you don't like it.

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is detailed. It is not as rough and unclear as mine. It is hard to imagine. Regarding the plot, I seem to have written only one-third of it because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure. I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the top priority of a work, and the author has done it. Especially Wang Qiu, I particularly like this character. When I started reading, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting, and after reading a few chapters, it was pretty good. The author's description contains many techniques, and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.

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Can't you just use periods normally?

It's normal to feel like time slows down when shooting. I just shoot, and time slows down every time. Another term for this reaction is what is often called cold-bloodedness. It does feel cold-blooded when you think about it. I believe that the original poster experienced the feeling of slowing down when shooting, so he wrote it down as a cheat. I have experienced time slowing down more times, and I slowly simulated the feeling of time slowing down, which became solidified in me, so I can enter the state where time slows down every time I shoot.