Fragrance Behind Vermilion Gates

The author's first book can be written like this, please encourage him. The writing style, logic, structure, characterization, and the necessity of continuity of events still need to be polished.

Does it look good? After reading the great comments, I kind of thought...

I wish the author may sell more than 10,000 copies a day and may all his wishes come true! Xu Xianchou, the anchor of "New White Snake Live Room", is broken. His live broadcast system cannot be turned off. What should I do? The author's writing style is extraordinary, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is contrary to expectations and unexpected! It is a masterpiece of ten years of online literature! In order to repay her kindness, she risked a huge crime and married him without hesitation. For the sake of his wife's safety, he listened to the slanders and almost caused his wife to die several times. For her husband, she did not hesitate to set off a flash flood and poison all living beings. In order to be with his wife, he actually did something earth-shattering. The story between her and him was touching and is still being circulated today! I wish the author may sell more than 10,000 copies a day and may all his wishes come true! Xu Xianchou, the anchor of "New White Snake Live Room", is broken. His live broadcast system cannot be turned off. What should I do?