The Best Bandit in All Worlds

The content is good, the price comparison is detailed, the character of the pig's feet is clear, the main plot is obvious, and the language is interesting, but the rhythm is still lacking, and it doesn't look very enjoyable.

First of all, the title of the book. Is the author really writing fantasy? Isn't fantasy about gods, kings, and the like? The number one bandit in all worlds really makes people a little suspicious. After reading the content, I like the writing. It's good and a bit innovative. However, the only drawback is that the plot develops slowly and feels a bit dragged out. The rhythm is poor and the feeling of ups and downs is lacking. If a little more effort is put into this direction, this article will definitely be a masterpiece.

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