Puppet Emperor

Personally, I feel that your writing is quite fresh, and your technique is much more proficient than mine. The plot structure is wonderful, making people want to read on, and the description process is detailed. It is not as rough and unclear as mine. It is hard to imagine. Regarding the plot, I seem to have written only one-third of it because your exposition is very comprehensive and thorough, and the work is pure. I feel close to your work. A good beginning is the top priority of a work, and the author has done it. When I started reading, I felt it was a bit boring, and then I wanted to turn it off. Later, I found it interesting, and after reading a few chapters, it was pretty good. The author's description contains many techniques, and some rich insights. I can see that the author can clearly describe some difficulties that are beyond your level. It's not like me writing over and over again, it's still the same few sentences, but I will study more.

This is a new starting point. There is still a long way to go. If you persist, you will gain something. Come on!

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Although the writing is still not perfect, it has considerable appreciation value. I believe that this sharp and restrained style will allow me to read more exciting novels from you in the near future. However, there are also some slightly blunt aspects in the character creation, which are worth pondering. Come on!!!! Support you!!! Good book, support!!!!!! [Uid=343947]

Support this masterpiece, two votes

I'm ashamed that I didn't even think of voting for you until now when I was reading the book. I looked at the wall and thought about it, hehe!

The male protagonist is still a bit kind, and now the more evil he is, the more interesting he is, but this is okay, it's pretty good. The most important thing is to maintain this writing style.

It means that this book has almost reached its peak on this subject, and the author is making further progress!

There is no problem with the quality of the novel. I hope the author can break through the siege as soon as possible and write a unique work~

Is the protagonist named Qi Yu or Ye Feng, and Qi Tianhao's grandson is named Qi Yu?