Wudang Mo Sheng Valley

Is the author's plot really that the Sutra Pavilion was built haphazardly? If you don't have 2-3 peerless masters standing guard 24 hours a day, and there is no battle array to protect you, then the so-called Sutra Pavilion is just a public toilet, and people can come and leave whenever they want. Tianshi Tao, Quanzhen Sect, Xiaoyao Sect, no one is stronger than Wudang, and they don't dare to build a loft and tell the world where their secret books are. There is only one Shaolin, and there is a saying that the martial arts in the world come from Shaolin. Is this flattery? This is ironic. They built a scripture-depositing pavilion and guarded it by many masters. They were able to get the secret book from it and spread it all over the world.

Occupying the boss's building, brothers are not talented, they have the ability to be proud and proud of their lives, they are not involved in the system, they do not combine martial arts, they do not practice immortality, I will recommend it next week, everyone is free to give guidance

So what exactly is this, and what is the significance of this introduction? Are you kidding me?

After reading 50 chapters, I can't stand the poison anymore. It doesn't have the thrill of traditional martial arts, nor the excitement of new martial arts. The story is a good story, and the plot is also good, but it seems ordinary! An unknown celebrity once said, "The reason why I see far is because I stand on the shoulders of giants. The protagonist has no abilities, but he likes to create his own martial arts. What is the use of collecting so many unique skills?" From the time the protagonist came out to the end, I was tortured by various supporting characters all the way. When he first appeared, he was tortured by Ah Er and Ah San, by Xuan Ming and the two elders, and by Nashaba until he pretended to be dead. Even Zhu Wu and others were able to torture him to death, and he was tortured all the way! I'm here to enjoy, not to be abused

I agree with you, but one thing I don't agree with is that the author's writing skills are better than Mr. Jin's, but definitely better than most writers on the Internet. Sometimes I really think that most authors should be amateurs and have a stable income in real life. The works written in this way can only come from the heart. Xiaobai's popularity is undoubtedly the starting point for promoting commercial writing. As a result, most of the great masters from Qidian definitely have a professional team to write for them. I won't name them specifically. Everyone knows that there are very few writers with such caliber as Zigui. As readers, we should also reflect on whether we are too impetuous. We can't even bother to read a few chapters carefully and just start scolding. If you don't read, please leave silently and don't affect others.

Everyone has given up. This author is too self-righteous. If he doesn't read the original work, why did he write this story?

The protagonist destroyed the Ming Cult and fought monsters without asking for loot. After all, if Yang Xiao's body was searched, he would definitely find the Nine Yin Manual, the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, and Wu Mu's suicide note. Why not? That's too ridiculous. The Supreme Martial Arts Nine Yins and Nine Yangs. What's more, as a Taoist sect, when did Wudang Sect become so extravagant that it even disdained the Nine Yin Manual, which is known as the general outline of Taoist martial arts?

I don't know why so many people praise it. I couldn't stand it after reading dozens of chapters. Nowadays, there is a book shortage, and even the whitest books can be read. Even if you are not a time traveler, even if... You are at least a teenager, right? Why do you act like an idiot in everything you do?

I always read the comments section before reading novels. I don't want to read any of them, but I have to believe in the organization. If everyone says it's not well written, it must be bad!

I basically thought it was an imaginary martial arts movie, and I finally managed to get through more than 200 pictures. Until I saw the protagonist letting the enemy kill his own people, and using the excuse that he felt guilty to not take action, I couldn't stand it anymore This is the first time I have seen the plot dragged out like this, at least get a hidden master to come over Also, where is Zhou Zhiruo? She has disappeared from the world since she and the protagonist returned to Wudang. She did not appear when the protagonist was in retreat. At least she explained whether she was dead or alive.

The writing in this book is really bad. I was tortured in all kinds of ways, and even the bandits couldn't beat me. I was so convinced that no one could be killed cleanly. The author has masochistic tendencies.

All I can say is that this author is not the material to write a book. Stop writing. It's too bad.

When I saw the fake death, I couldn't stand it anymore. There must be something wrong with Quanjiao's brain! Also faked death.

The fight was not pleasant at all. It felt like the protagonist was 50-50 against everyone

After reading it, I was frustrated and embarrassed as a time traveler, so I decisively gave up the book.

Create martial arts from the beginning, a person who does not understand martial arts and has never practiced martial arts. You tell me that creating martial arts is such a big step, it's nonsense. Does a person today who knows a little bit about Chinese medicine really think he can change the world? Shattering the Void, haha, even Zhang Sanfeng, a genius born every hundreds of thousands of years, can't do it. You are a weakling who doesn't even have a system, so why do you think you are better than Zhang Sanfeng?

The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel. Why would you go to Liangshan without Sansansan?

The first ten chapters left me confused and confused.

It doesn't have the halo of the protagonist at all, and it feels very depressing.

Written by a fan who does not respect the original work or history Written by a martial artist who talks about martial arts but not martial arts and who talks about chivalry but not a chivalrous person Written by a web writer, there is no sense of satisfaction at all 2. No idea So this is a novel with typos abuse disrespecting the original work made up randomly except for the writing nothing a novel Someone compares this to Jin Guliang I read more than a hundred chapters without laughing I read a book review that made me laugh You also need to have some professional ethics. This kind of comment cannot be posted It's so shady

Damn it, can't you practice Nine Yang and Nine Yin first? Do you want to become a prostitute after you are successful in martial arts? Every time I go out, I'm beaten to shit.

I like to read Jin Yong's fan fiction, but now there are many fan fictions where pig's feet are everywhere in Jin Yong's world. Even if the novel Pig's Feet is the best in the world, it is unappetizing. There are very few fans like the author who write about the world of Yitian seriously. Anyway, I don't like to read pig's feet. Time travel can only be done in seconds, and now it is popular to travel randomly, but I think the author should stick to his own style, not follow the trend, not randomly travel through various planes, not have too many unreasonable plots that seek all kinds of thrills, and honestly tell the story to the end. This is a good fan novel. Another advantage of this book is that each supporting role in the novel has its own role and does not revolve around the pig's feet all the time. This not only does not weaken the halo of the pig's feet, but adds a lot to the novel. I like the novel Swordsman Huashan very much. Although it is a fan novel, it tells a different story and is not conventional. I hope the author will follow the same example as this fan novel. I also wish the author good health and success in his work. The more the novel is written, the more exciting it will be and it will become a classic martial arts fan work.

The writing makes it difficult to read. In the first 150 chapters, there are several plots where the protagonist's martial arts skills are disabled or almost destroyed. If you want to write a martial arts novel about cultivating immortality, it turns out to be a eunuch.

The dream is to be a natural soldier, this situation is too small

It was just fine before, but after the battle in Dadu, the more I wrote, the more nonsense I wrote. I didn't take the opportunity to take revenge. I had to wait for others to bully me. I was restrained and frustrated at every step. But there really was nothing to write about. If I didn't forcefully create some conflict, how could I mix up the word count? If it's not infinite, or if it travels through time again, it should be over as soon as possible.

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Without the Ming Dynasty, history has changed, and there is still Mo Gusheng? Can he go back to ancient times? The logic doesn't make sense

Recommend everyone a good-looking Yitian fan "Traveling through Wudang at the beginning of Yang Zhenxian"

There are a lot of typos, the sentences don't make sense, the idioms are used indiscriminately, and the words don't convey the meaning. It makes me feel uncomfortable. Is the threshold for writing a book so low now?

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