War Lord Reborn

Sure enough, after seeing that the fourth prince was forcibly transformed into an undead because of the author's so-called "destiny", I lost all desire to read this book! I believe many readers must have abandoned the book after seeing this! Since you can't change the so-called fate or the plot to force the storyline, then don't write about time travel, just write about fan fiction! Not to mention that this book is a hodgepodge. Many of the plots, settings, and character stories are copied from the main storylines in games such as Warcraft and Warhammer. As the author, ask yourself, if you were the reader yourself, would you be willing to spend money to read a book like this?

To be honest, originally the writing and setting of this book were very good, and it was a good book worth pursuing. However, readers who read time travel novels, whether they are from other worlds or games, hope to see that the protagonist can change his destiny on his own, or that the author does not want to see the author forcing the changeable "history" to proceed along the original path in order to forcefully advance the plot. Since it can't be changed, why write about time travel? That's the truth. So this is the main reason why your book is not popular. I hope you can learn from it in your next book.

Ziye is a newbie, maybe there are some deficiencies in conception and writing, so the work will inevitably have shortcomings and flaws. If there are any shortcomings, book friends can point them out, and Ziye will work hard to correct them! !

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A book that follows the trend but ends up having no characteristics of its own in terms of writing, plot, and lolita following the trend.