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I am guilty, I have cheap hands. Read the comments! Ever since I read the comments, I have always been a fan of reading... You bad guys, for your comments, I just want to say: Well done, keep up the hard work.
[Comment]Write something from your heart
Only serious readers will be picky. Urban writing is also another kind of upgrade to fight monsters. Grasp the following rhythm, and you will not be afraid of writing an article. There are hanging threads with small money, there are hanging threads with big money, there are tall, rich and handsome people with small money, and there are tall, rich and handsome people with big money. No power, little power, big power. There are no beauties paying attention, there are Xiaojiabiyu paying attention, there are ladies paying attention, there are Bai Fumei paying attention, there are Bai Fumei chasing after her, hugging her left and right to open up the harem. Hang on until no one hates you, the small one hates you, the big one hates you, you are the public enemy. If your father doesn't help, he will be promoted and make a fortune, so he can compete with his father. No golden finger, little golden finger, big golden finger. Since you know your sister is going to get sick, why not prevent it? Was the leukemia radiated by something radioactive? Don't adult psychology gurus consider this possibility? The purpose of reading an article is to enjoy it. Even if the transplant is successful, you will basically be a useless person. How can you enjoy it? Since he is the master of the heart, why do he always attract hatred? Why can't we eliminate hatred? I read a lot of articles, and I like to read the title first. If I see some conflict, something going on, or something like that, I don't want to read on. I always feel that the protagonist must be in trouble again. Diao Si is generally less likely to get into trouble. Who, after being rich and handsome, doesn't have a few people to help him out? What I don't like the most is digging bad holes. For example, a certain villain is plotting some conspiracy, and then he changes the line of writing and doesn't fill in the conspiracy holes for several chapters in a row. Why? The protagonist is neither foresighted nor digs his resistance too deep. What's the point of it? Want to show that the villain is smarter than the protagonist? Why write the protagonist as the inner master? It is a fair suggestion that the title should be careful. Readers will read the title first and then decide whether to add it to their collection. The amount of hatred should be reasonable. Don't make the protagonist like a lightning rod, always attracting hatred.
[Comment] 2P recommendation
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This book is a bit interesting and novel when it introduces past lives. But the new opening routine made me a little speechless. The routine you wrote ten years ago was still very popular, but now it is just the same old nonsense. Looks boring
[Comment] A little personal opinion
I don't know if it's right or not, so Kaiba just listens to it. This book, frankly speaking, is not as well written as Immortal Pot. Not to mention other things, in terms of plot development, it is far inferior. The plot of this book develops a bit too fast, and I always feel like I haven't read much yet. It seems like one story has passed by without fully unfolding the plot. And when the plot unfolds, it's a bit stiff and a bit flat. Compared with the fairy pot, the quality of this book is really much worse. I like the fairy pot very much. In the fairy pot, Kaiba You portrays many characters very vividly and very touchingly. I hope that this book will be better in the subsequent creation and the author will think more. In addition, don't blame me for talking too much. The writing style of this book is a bit gun-like. The style is a bit different from that of Xian Ke.
[Comment] Has the farm entered a dark room?
I read it quite a while ago, and it's quite interesting. It can still keep it fresh in the middle of writing. It's pretty good. I'll tell you when it will be released. I'll read the rest of it then.
[Comment] I don't understand
How old is Zhao Wanqing's father? He is now the deputy section chief. Around 2000, it was the watershed for cadres under the age of 50. It was impossible to make any progress, and even if he made progress, it would not be a big improvement. What's more, he was only the deputy section chief when he was around 50 years old. How much progress can you expect from him is still Qingshui Yamen. . . . Also, what are the attributes of the protagonist, and how come he attracts hatred everywhere, either from him or from people he knows? How are you spending your days?
[Comment] Actually, this subject matter is quite good.
In fact, the subject matter is good, but what holds up a novel is the plot! Anyway, I am killing the protagonist in all directions! Talking about love all day is boring!! These are the scenes I wrote about the campus, including the beautiful neighbor and my older sister, who are already rotten! Do you really get what the audience wants to watch?! It's the plot and the improvement of the protagonist, not a vulgar plot! Except for the description of the protagonist's skills, which supported the public chapters that I finished reading, I skipped all other vulgar romances. After reading books for nearly 10 years, I feel that online articles are becoming more and more similar! Readability and novelty gradually decrease! Good novels come from life and are higher than life! Sorry for the whining! Mainly, I still like this theme, but all I see is love?! Ambiguous?! , Forget it, it takes up the majority of the space, it's a complete waste of this fresh subject!!!!
To be honest, if you don't have a few or double-digit female protagonists to support the plot, you will be considered awesome if you can write 200,000 words based on the author's level. But fortunately, you have changed your career. This approach is correct.