The Mind-Reading Lawyer

Regarding the first case of the sisters stealing a man, after reviewing it, I have a few questions I'd like to raise. I'm not trying to nitpick, I just want to ask.

The opening scene with the main character felt a bit awkward and uncomfortable, an indescribable feeling. I couldn't continue after three chapters. If possible, the beginning should be revised.

You're not suited to writing novels, what are you going to write?

As I understand it, a lawyer's profession is to strive to defend their client; whether something is just or unjust is a matter for the judge to consider.

I am a lawyer myself, and if cases are handled and accepted in this way, I'm doomed in China.

It's quite awkward to keep reading those irrelevant legal provisions.

Please update more often, there's never enough to read! Also, it's been so long since you showed off your mind-reading abilities... 🤫

After reading the first 30,000 words, there wasn't a single disgusting part in the plot, which made me feel quite relaxed. Professional knowledge is presented directly and clearly, unlike some books that, despite having professional titles, actually ramble on and on, filled with sensationalism. A truly unpretentious book; I hope the author continues to work hard! Slow updates are not a problem; what I hate most is the off-topic and rambling writing.

The theme is unusual, which is good; however, the opening writing style is a bit immature, making it somewhat difficult to read. It's true that being a new lawyer is tough, as many senior lawyers have said. I just passed the bar exam last year, and I hope this article will help me understand the legal profession better.

Putting the plot aside, it's truly astounding that a novel can be written like an indictment and a judgment.