Back to the Past as a Sorcerer

What are some things written about? Time travel is not like time travel, martial arts is not like martial arts, and the city is not like the city. Not to mention picking up people's wits, it is also a mess.

No matter what it involves, there are paragraphs and paragraphs of annotations. I remembered how I gave up books before. Talent.

First of all, the author has not yet discovered what is attractive about his book, and as a result, the whole book is full of Feng Shui, and Feng Shui is everywhere. It was confusing to read, and later on I couldn't figure out whether this was a novel or a Feng Shui tutorial. People with basically no professional knowledge will not be able to understand this novel at all. In the early stages of this book, the protagonist wrote a novel (Dragon and Snake) which was very enjoyable to read. Especially when it became a big hit, it made readers feel that the protagonist's role as a time traveler was not in vain. Gain both money and fame. Then the protagonist practices martial arts, and the fights are so exciting that the readers can't stop watching. At this time, the book had tens of thousands of recommendations. After letting, there is Feng Shui because of the mystery, which makes readers look forward to... And then look forward to... And look forward to... The whole article is about Feng Shui, Feng Shui is still Feng Shui... Recommendations basically stopped moving because I couldn't understand them anymore, and the interesting articles that should have been there were gone, leaving only Feng Shui... Everything has something to do with Feng Shui, and everything is the function of Feng Shui, which makes people completely confused. What happened to this book. What happened to the author. I feel that in the author's writing, the protagonist's return to the past has no meaning at all. Because the whole article is about Feng Shui. Now this novel, basically every chapter is inseparable from Feng Shui. When the author thought that what he wanted to express really started to be expressed, he actually never thought about the issue of sense of substitution, nor the issue of whether the readers would accept it. Most importantly, he did not think about whether the readers would understand such a professional Feng Shui issue. When the entire novel is occupied by Feng Shui, the novel is no longer a novel or a story-telling novel, but a Feng Shui textbook. If readers want to read Feng Shui textbooks, they also need to read your novel? Why don't you just buy a copy at home and study it slowly? That thing is more professional than yours. It is really disappointing that a good creative book turned out like this. If we use the realm of novels, the author has been obsessed with Feng Shui, and the protagonist is also obsessed. He attaches too much importance to Feng Shui, but ignores other things. These other things should be the main line, and Feng Shui is the type of copy. This is my last opinion for you, whether you see it or not.

The author can reopen the book. A novel about the rebirth of Hong Kong in the 1960s and 1980s.

The author is a talented person and has a good number of words. Almost everything mentioned is given a chapter's worth of notes. I found several books like this. You are also 999.

It feels like a lot of nonsense. Everyone seems to be busy with something.

I just read two chapters and the article actually said that Hong Kong has a population of only 500,000. I don't know how to evaluate the author's cognition. If you don't know, look up the information and don't write randomly. Hong Kong had already exceeded one million during the Republic of China. According to the statistics in the Hong Kong Yearbook of 1975, the population in 1974 was 4.2 Million, 8,700. You wrote in the 1980s, and it was still 500,000. What do you think? With this IQ, can I still read this book? It was announced that it was sold for 200,000 yuan, and half of the population of Hong Kong bought it. Let me go for it.

Hello, author, I am very happy to find a good book during the book shortage. Thank you very much. But during the reading process, I discovered a small mistake, that is, the title of Taoist priests, generally called abbot, is the title of the abbot of the monk temple. For example, the head of the Shaolin Temple is called abbot, and the Taoist priest is called Guanzhu.

There are a lot of typos, and the style of expression seems like a movie clip, which is hard to understand... Jintang is Jin Yong, right? It seems that other celebrities are also using pronouns, which seems very awkward, because the background you wrote is obviously a real-life background, but the names are all messed up, which is confusing and not beautiful. Also, this novel should be renamed and go back in time to become a martial artist...

Okay, I was affected by the comments and didn't want to read it.